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I'm still feel that the older story was better then this one, but It is still awesome.
God....fucking...damnit.... GET THE OPPOSITIONS SIDE OF THE STORY FOR ONCE CELESTIA BEFORE YOU BLOODY SHOOT THEM..... then again, she sorta followed fives method of thinking...
Overall a good chapter though. This story is shaping up quite well in my opinion
You named this chapter also chapter 5
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Now it's fixed.
Thanks!
I love that in every story the ponies attack the Spartan immediately. The Spartan then kicks their ass and points out that they claim to be the embodiment of friendship and yet they just attacked an unknown outright. It pisses me off but then I think how humans probably react. Yeah, we dissect the unknown XD
5223040 no problem!
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A). Five doesn't know if they claim any of that sh!t.
B). Celestia saw something reminiscent of Five in a vision, where an enemy race stands by and watches as she gets executed by him.
C). Is a word used to describe a large body of water that fish live in.
5223076 I wasn't claiming that this occurred in your story. I was just assuming that at one point he's going to get the whole "friendship" spiel (Twilight may have already said that during her lecture while walking through the woods with him), and make a off screen conclusion like that. I for one have seen it many times in other Spartan stories. I think Celestia's reaction is reasonable. I have no quarrel with it. (I love thus story and have no qualms about it anywhere nor will I as you are the author my good sir). What about the ocean? Embodiment? There are several meanings to it, and then of course we have our off the dictionary stereotypical definitions of things that everyone at one point in there life makes. Like detrimental. I always thought it meant good, not bad XD
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I have no idea what this means. Could you please explain?
I pineapple this story
5223111 you said...
I was confused by this so I answered in what I thought was an appropriate answer.
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I think we both may be confused...
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OH SH!T. Forgot that.
5223180 XD Well, we can forget this happened and mosey on along
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Quite.
Poor SPartans, they never get a break, do they?
Celestia is a bitch as always.
5223264 nnope.
Almost a day without major conflict? That's unheard of for a sparten.
I always felt we need more "Celestia punching things in the face."
Only issue with this chapter is how Rainbow dash is able to knock FIve over. Make him stumble.... maybe, but out right knock off feet? Nah, I don't see it. Considering Spartan-ll and lll's armor was around the 1300 to 1100 lbs range respectively, then add the Spartan himself into the mix and you've got a borderline immovable object.
Five is either thinking 'NOT AGAAAAAAAAAAIN' or 'well, shit'
5223570 the only way i can see it is if she hit him at mach.
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Which she probably did, considering she's Rainbow Dash and not any other pegasus.
Aaaaand... Sunbutt fucked up again! :P Messing with a Spartan never. turns out well for the attacker.
5222996 mebeh it be Luna?
5224304 it said a bright flash, not to mention that she was the one to notice the flash in the everfree.
5224331 Guess Luna has a dark flash then? U lil racist...
5224377 true, my mistake, but celestia was the only MENTIONED one who noticed it and would have the obligation to ZAP five. Each to their own. We shall see who is right.
ggwp, celly.
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5224430 it's deffs Discord, calling it right now.
Celestia is about to get her sun butt kicked.
Here lie the remains of (we think) Dame Twilight Sparkle, Dame Rainbow Dash, Dame Applejack and Her Majesty Celestia Solaris. We pray whatever took them from us has satisfied its rage.
5224377 Well, the heat is a bit of a giveaway. Luna's bolts would likely be ice cold, as she rules the Moon and Night, which, in essence, are cold. Night is the lack of sunlight, the sun being a giant burning ball of plasma, which heats the world, whereas the night, lacking such a flame, is what brings cold to the world, so it stands to reason the it is Celestia, rather than Luna. Discord isn't ruled out, but is highly improbable, as he most likely would've taken to banter first, or would have understood Five's psyche, to some extent, instantly. Or, at the very least, Five's systems would crashed due to Discord's chaos magic being violently introduce to a system that requires order to function.
Wow. Ironically he ends up being tossed just like he tossed rainbow dash.
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Remember, two legs, plus high speed pegasus. We two legged creatures are unstable at the best of times, as our weight is all on two tiny parts, which are only designed to keep us falling forward. Unless given ample time to see an incoming object, and shift our stance and weight to compensate, something as small as a tennis ball can knock us over, given sufficient speed. Even a half ton Spartan can be knocked over with a slight breeze in the right direction, if unprepared. If it weren't for the tiny changes our feet make use of automatically, gravity alone would pull us over backwards.
5223076 Nice pun there, mate.
Celestia's mindset is always shoot first ask questions later! Changelings! Zap! Zombra! Stabbed! What havent the ponies attacked and had no idea WTF they were doing!
5225444 Thank Mjolnir for mag-boots then.
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Thanks.
5226205 Even simpler: I'm sure RD wouldn't be able to knock a thousand pounds around by tackling it as stated before. But yes, mag-lock shit FTW!
Then again, I could be rambling because I'm tired as a REALLY tired thing who goes all day everywhere with about 5 hours of sleep.
Fucking perfect!
5226461 What is it with you authors and RD ramming someone IN FUCKING ARMOR! It doesn't work! Is she stupid enough to do something like that! At best she becomes a Kamikazi at worst she fails and traumatizes her five friends!
NO AMOUNT OF CAPS WILL EVER CONVEY HOW HAPPY I AM THAT YOU'RE USING THE FORMULA THE WAY IT SHOULD ALWAYS BE. I'm so fucking sick of reading the dumbest logic ever with stupid human OCs EVEN SPARTANS AND OTHER TRAIN MILITARY PERSONNEL who fail miserably in this scenario. I applaud you! NAY-I salute you!!
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And you were doing so well too. Good shit I'M STILL FINDING MISTAKES. Y u do this to me?!
5425180 It's also canon. Remember Dragonshy? RD went charging into the cave to try and beat up a fully grown, mature dragon, WHILE IT WAS TRYING TO REST, MAKING IT REALLY FUCKING PISSED OFF.
Seems like the usual first reaction to Twilight.
I see RD is as friendly as usual.
Well they stopped fighting, it looks like everything is going to be okay.
Celestia damn it.
oh for fucks sake
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I fucking love five
*I AM TRIGGERED*
"What are you doing!?" she yelled.
"Defending myself," Five replied angrily. "They attacked me out of nowhere, so I responded as such."
"That doesn't mean you can just hurt them!!!"
Oh shut up you purple narrow sighted dork with the most cheesiest PRINCESS title I have EVER HEARD.
HE did absolutely NOTHING when all of the sudden both RD and AJ attacked him out of nowhere for no serious reason. If he wasn't wearing his armor or had the advance combat training that he had, he would HAVE gotten obviously hurt first, even badly if some other fic's depicting both AJ and RD are to go by. And you start complaining about him hurting them, defending himself when HE got attacked first out of the blue? Are you saying that when someone attacks first the other is not allowed to naturally defend himself from them?
STUPID, narrow minded DORK. Even if we are dealing with a spartan super soldier he still had the right to defend himself, especially since he did nothing in the first place.