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hmm...interesting...finally the story just begin.
And now the backstory for the UNSC crashed ship in the hive( unless you changed it from the last story).
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It wasn't a ship in the first iteration, it was a mobile base. This, however, is a ship!
is that the renments of the dawn Chrissy found? Or something else?
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Something else.
Now, what will Queen bug do with all that technology at her Hoofs? Stay tuned to find out!
oh-ho! this is going better than could be expected.
I've got an feeling that the ship is an Storm Covenant ship just always get bad vibes from ships that crash like that! Could be Infinity though which doesn't make sense as they escaped!
Excellent work.
was im surprised that the giant ship didnt hit her hive hard enough to find water and get flooded.
I'm liking where this is going so far. Keep up the good work.
If only it didn't take so long to get the nect chapter out... Great job capturing the standard Spartan mentality! Follow orders, don't take no shit from anything, and be a badass.
And then the ship goes boom!
I approve. Upvote has been re-earned.
The Flood
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Nope, no Flood here!
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Thank you.
For some reason I think this story would be very anti-climactic if the ship just hit it's target.
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If the ship just hit what target?
It is far too rare to see a Spartan act like a spartan. Far to often they shout and yell their asses off, threaten everything in ten square miles and then reveal just about everything to do with the UNSC, ONI or anything else really. I like how Five is carrying himself around Twilight. Feels right.
You know what really unrustles my jimmies?
How Five is acting like a discount Master Chief. I love it.
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I looked around the stories and found that everyone and their dog/cat has written a Halo crossover with the Master Chief on some kind of journey of emotional salvation, yet not one about the Spartans from Halo 4. So, I stepped in when I could, and soon I'm thinking about just making a short-series of one-shots about MC acting as a father for Sweetie Belle.
The amusing thing is, UNSC tech is sufficiently advanced that it doesn't matter whose hands/hooves/whatever it falls into. They can neither use it nor reverse-engineer it.
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Twilight quickly tapped the flat surface, which was completely smooth. She jumped as the pad seemed to talk.
"This is A.I. 12854 of U.N.S.C. Please log in yo-"
"Are you okay?! The huemane trapped you, didn't he?! I will free you, with friendship!!!"
Twilight quickly hugged the pad and decided to take the huemane objects and smash open the pad, so the poor mare could be free!
The fragile pad quickly shattered under the merciless assault of the young female.
"Hello? Are you oka-"
CRACK!
Twilights head exploded in gore and blood.
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The most realistic, plausible and most likely scenario. Thank you so much for posting that.
I got disappointed in this story mainly with Five, he's just so flat and lifeless that he's not really a compelling read. I also don't understand a few things, first why did you write him more like a Spartan II? He's a Spartan IV meaning that he was a normal human until he joined the program but you don't write him like how a human being he acts more like a damn robot. I also don't know why you made him talk like that, the Spartan IVs all act and talk like normal human soldiers in the last Halo game but in this you did the complete opposite for some unknown reason.
Also if this is how you think military people act, as one, I'm telling you that you are WAY off. It's like you used nothing but badly written military movies as a base for this and it's just hard for someone like myself to read. The guy just has no real personality to him and it makes it hard to care about him, plus things like Spartans and his actual name wouldn't be classified. Everyone knows about the Spartan program by this point, hell people are volunteering for it by this point in the Halo history. It has an interesting idea but I just felt that the presentation and implementation of the story could have been better.
5916983 You are correct on some parts but in other Fireteams there is no chatter from the other Spartan IV canidates.
Go Chryssie go!
The Infinity... somehow it crash landed on Equis!
7529728 Well, shit.
I second that, Spartans make remarkably poor diplomats.
Well shit... Alliance cruiser i guess?