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Aww I wanted more of Five bringing the hammer down on Celly......she thinks she can speak to a spartan like that it... it will her going to Tartarus once Five was done with her
love the story thou
My friend, this chapter may have many errors in it and it may seem rushed as all hell. But it is far from crap, it's up there with my top favourites so keep on writing.
Have a moustache on the house. Hell have three.
Just when Five is going to meet the changelings in ends on a cliffhanger, you are such a tease
One Good-ish spartan beats the crap out of celestia and discord.
Imagine what the Master Cheif could do.
awww, just when it was gettting good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5467364 let's not. Celly is still my second favorite pony and I'd rather not see her as a pile of goo.
5467364 End the World with a hand full of c4 and a pistol
Ze plot thickens.
Need... to... send... more... 'Fuck You' letters... to Celestia...!
Unikitty agrees with me on this.
Oh this is getting good now! Changelings all most always make a story better!
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Need I ask why you have the Pinkie equivalent from the Lego Movie with you?
Maaan, I want so much more!!!!
Yaaaay! Update! Too short, but yaaay! Update!
I believe this is on everybody's minds right now: Celestia got rekt
5468593 don't you mean
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Exactly!
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ah, Nicolas Cage, you never fail to make us laugh our asses off
Hey DM, when're the Prometheans going to come into play?
Like this guy:
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Or this guy:
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Or even THIS guy: img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20141201020658/halo/images/b/bd/Prometheanknight.jpg
Because these guys are fucking awesome, despite being the biggest pains in the ass in ALL the Halo games.
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They'll come up again soon. Nothing big until the bulkier part of the story, though.
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Long story short.
I got bored.
I got the C4, where do you want it boss?
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"Bend over, darling!"
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Well I'm enjoying this.
I wanna see Five's head/helmet photoshopped on supa hot fire.
Story idea for you Dragonman!
Handsome Jack in Equestria, on his own...
The whole scene with Celestia and FIve felt off and rushed. Five acted kinda how I figured someone in his position, pissed off, would act. Though Celestia was acting like a child not the thousands year old ruler I expect. It basically became a pissing contest when they started to talk to eachother.
While I'm enjoying the overall development this has been my only complaint since the rewrite. Though I have to give you props for keeping Twilight as the civil mediator. To often to fics have Twilight, or anyone for that matter, in a somewhat similar position only to cave and help Celestia.
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That chapter wasn't the best, sorry.
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It was, yes.
I'm loving this story, I can't wait for more
Dude no this is not crap, the opposite of crap. I want more!
5497891 I was about to say the same. exact. thing!
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They're ponies. They ARE stupid. They've been declawed by peacetime. However, Twilight has been doing alright in trying to salvage this potential clusterfuck. So far, this mess is the best Halo crossover so far that I've read...still not up to snuff.
Ergh...I'm sorry but I cringed pretty hard during that exchange at the start of the episode. I can totally understand Five acting like that, but Celestia? No, I can't picture her saying any of that, just like I couldn't picture her attacking something out of the blue without attempting communication first. She just seems so...impulsive, aggressive and paranoid. I just can't line those traits up with Celestia.
I like the story as far as I've read, it's interesting, but that's pretty much my only problem with it. Celestia just...doesn't feel like Celestia at all.
Sunbutt gets frustrated when dealing with someone who doesn't prostrate themselves before her, ehh?
Changeling contact Yay!
6649146 probably a little late but I think auto correct changed prostrate to something with a different meaning.
7543705 Thanks for the heads up.
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To be honest, I'd be freaking paranoid as hell after everything that she's been through recently. In fact, I'd be setting up guard garrisons in every population center, establishing weapons and supplies caches, building fallback points and re-engineering existing structures to be easily defensible: hell, I'd be on a hair trigger for another invasion. She got blindsided, and she had forewarning- what do you think that's done for her confidence? And now, she's got this freaking dream of Five with her majesty ol' cheese legs herself, and a thing that makes the sky fortress look like a bouncy castle. Really, I would have left Five with a permanent guard, and maybe established Luna nearby for back-up if she was available.
Well, she's feeling grumpy isn't she?
And Five has just gone and blown some poor 'ling's cover, bad form that.
Lovely! Perhaps the Changelings cn get a free ride to another planet and Give of this mad planet...