Holy..... I....missed...this...so.....MUCH! good work! Looking forward to more!

for an update!

"U-uh... h-hello?"

Hurrreeyyy

"U-uh... h-hello?"

Good job with first contact, twilight. Setting the bar high.
It's good to see ya back Mr author.

Well you sir............Have..made my day

5106329 I'd like to see how well you'd do with eloquence if you were facing down an 8 foot tall walking tank that has just threatened to blast you apart with a piece of alien technology you know absolutely nothing about. In my case I'd probably drop the "fancy metal club" and curl up in a little ball and cry until the mean alien either went away shot me or it tried to initiate contact in a manner that didn't involve blasting me apart with a weapon whose capabilities I don't know.

Fair play to Twilight, she has the self control to actually try to speak to the EIGHT FOOT TALL ALIEN and not curl up and play dead

5106678 I'd use my manly man skills to karate chop the walking tank, like a boss.
No, in reality I'd have much the same reaction purple OCD horse just with much more curiosity.

Yay!

it'sback

5106815 Again your self control to not curl up in a ball and cry is extreme

5107043 No problem man

Well, that's a first contact done right.

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5106678 i would snark . some people scream when scared, some people get angry, i get sarcastic. did it when i had someone pull a knife on me in NYC and again when i had a bear wandering between me and my house. I then freaked out properly once i was in a safer situation. more so with the bear incident so i couldnt imagine the panic after the SPARTAN situation was resolved.

5116596 True, very true

Do my eyes decieve me? A first contact gone right?!

You, my man, deserve a Hartman emoticon. :hartmansmile:
And a moustache.

I still have the original downloaded. I hold an artefact lost to the depths of deletion. I'm going to go off and read it now.

Also another mooooustache.

Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Editing-Done-Right. Featuring a newly refurbished story, Crimson!

Huh, weird, I would have shot Twilight on sight if I saw an unknown creature with no signs of sapience messing with my wargear.

The armor is named after Thor's Hammer, anyone catch that?

5231937 I caught that 10 years ago...lol

5231937 Only everyone.

Good name though.

I really like how this is going for a halo crossover.

Yes! A first contact scene that makes SENSE!

5962906 Agreed. This sounds and behaves like a real world first contact scenario.

5962906 unlike another halo crossover on this site were the spartin is acting like a complete fool during his first contact, having been given many chances to talk things over and fucks it up many times.

Wow, a sensible first contact scenario.

Dammit, Twilight, stop being a compulsive cleptomaniac.

Run. That's all i'll say.

5116596 at least it wasn't a bear drawing a knife on you!

Shot the bich

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SANA DA BIIICH!!

He walked around the scorched end of the dropship and examined the damage to his transport. All across its side, massive scorch marks lined up and exposed several bunches of wires and tubes, which, of course, were all burnt beyond repair. The right wing of the ship was missing entirely, and the stump where it attached was burnt to a crisp, twisted in jagged formations.

No worries mate, nothing a good bit of WD-40 and some duct tape won't fix!

When she stood up, she charged up her teleportation spell and closed her eyes as she brought herself closer to the sound.

Blind teleporting? Come on Twilight, you know better than that!

She teleported towards the infamous entrance to the forest before the others could argue with her.

Well I suppose it's better than forgetting how to do it entirely...

"Anything to say?"

"Ba weep granna weep ninny bong?"

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"Ba weep granna weep ninny bong?"

You know thats never worked

First contact... Lets talk, not wage war... Humanity just had one with the Alliance for quite some time...