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Another cliffhanger?! WHY must you torment us like this?
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Because if I didn't, then there would be a gap in the chapters like Diablo 3, one of the worst writing pieces ever.
Changelings have already started off on a better foot than the ponies did with Five. Will be interesting to see how this plays out.
Do you sir have a nasty desire/habit to jerk around and tease your loyal readers with awesome chapters that end with massive cliffhangers?!?! Because if you do......please stop....FOR THE LOVE OF THE MANTLE.....STOP!!!!!! You make your readers sad and possibly crazy too!!!
Oh god the bioshock reference now must leave comment.. Love the story can't wait for more.
I now feel compelled to leave a comment...
Well a mix of halo and ponies?
Love it!
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Something blocking the ship's communication abilities? I bet it was those things – starting to wish I had played Halo 4... – from earlier.
Or is it something else...? Hmm.
Would you kindly... Powerful phrase.
5478363 Pretty Please?
5478344 I can see the ponies getting all pissy with the changelings.
A man chooses. A slave obeys.... Shit.
5478630 As can I. I can see this being something that Celestia decides to throw at him, claiming him as untrustworthy. Tell everyone he is consorting with changelings. I still don't understand why Five didn't tell her "Help me or I'll do to your head what I did to your wing."
Update... Good...
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Roll credits!
well, this wont end well.
Also-
HOLY FUCKING HELL....he KILLED 23% of 30k Convent by HISSEELF?!
taht is more badass than before. CUE THE BAD-ASS RANKS.
love the story
Must...leave...a...comment.
Pff, liked it.
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5480219 oh and you prick left us on a cliffhanger and now my arms are tired and i wanna read more of your story
hurry up pls but not too quick cause it better be good
Killed several thousand soldiers and still second fiddle to Cheif. SPARTANS are bad asses. I reckon that a small force of them, maybe 100, could conquer the galaxy! Seriously, the only thing more likely to survive something stupidly lethal is an OC, and only by Plot armor.
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A man chooses. A slave obeys. What....well fuck.
Okay real comment time; Nice chapter, a bit on the short side, but hey, I don't write 'em so it's not my call.
Fang just dropped his disguise not knowing Princess Spergle is in hot pursuit and taking notes. Five's definitely NOT the gonna earn any brownie points with Celestia on this one.
5480281 Spartans are actually killed alot and no 100 spartans could not conquer the galaxy. 100 spartans could not even defend reach
5480603 True, but technically speaking those were not super veterans like most of the mark 3s. Anyways, the support is admittedly what carries the SPARTANS as far as they go. The 100 SPARTAN army would need a logistical and transportation system consisting of many times the amount of actual fighters, just like how the point of a spear is really small compared to the shaft.
Also, this guy must be a discount Master Chief. 23 percent of a twenty to thirty thousand Covenant army? By himself, no less?!
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Didn't Noble 6 get killed off by a few Covy basterds?
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Sorry.
noble 6 did get taken down by a few but he also had held off multiple waves so the very ship master chief was on made it out so he was already tired but also injured at that so he was all ready dead when he didn't get to the ship
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W... What?
5481233 he is talking about halo reach ending, but your guy is based off the halo 4 side missions.
5481233 OHHHH, he was responding to the comment below him, but forgot to actually respond to the comment itself
Alright, very nice, now to skip the comment section to the 90+ hours of st-
...A Man chooses. A slave obeys...
5484576 WOO, now three
I'm liking where this is going, keep up the good work!
5479470 NO.... No... No...
THIS MAN KILLED 68% OF THE COVENANT ON REQUIEM
A man chooses, a slave obeys...
A military service log isn't shown like that! Just have confirmed kills= 7281 and list the awards, list combat missions, and then put the largest red CLASSIFIED stamp on all of it.
5481768 Was literally 2 seconds away from typing that...
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It's the year 2557, a different military, and has an actual living computer reading it aloud. Sorry, I don't know much about these kinds of things.
5486418 Even in spartan standards this man is a bad ass!
5506149 Fucking Right!!!!
I don't know why, but as I read your author's note I felt compelled to leave a comment stating that this is pretty good so far... I don't know why though... *Shrugs* Oh well, to the next chapter.
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WHOOPS! WE FOUND ANOTHER GLARING ERROR!!
*smashes Andrew Ryan's face in with his cane* ... What?
And then Twilight is going to fuck everything up.
<Chrysalis> Okay, not gonna fight that, EVER.
... So THAT'S why they call him Fives... Huh.
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WYK protocol engaged. Re-reading of this story will now continue.
There's been a large-scale dimensional incursion. The probability ripples stemming from space-time knitting itself back together tend to have unpredictable effects on the thought patterns of local sapients, causing "out of character" behavior such as mood swings, partial memory loss, varying degrees of mania or depression, and other such psychological phenomena. The symptoms should clear up once all of the extradimensional contaminants have been removed from the area.
Time for cooperation can begin now. But i guess Chrysalis will not risk it and pretend not to see the connection between Five and 'her hives salvation' in form of a ship.