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...Yay.
The more I read the more I feel bad for the changelings
5345230 Hell yeah.
More. Now.
Edit:
5345230 I agree
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When are we gonna have shit explode?
This is really good! Please keep going!
5345230 Same here.
5345230 I need MORE!!!!! aggggghhhhhhhhhh
Awww... No Discord interaction? Eh, the chapter was great! Eagerly awaiting the next update!
Again...
5345230 Agreed
5345624 Agreed
5345230
This is called setting the mood, if you didn't know. The way the author (dragonman461, in this case) words the story, making the reader feel something.
Please , please don't make him soft, he is a serious specialist from the military don't make him care about the aliens. Give him some bad memories and experiences about alien life at all, but do not make him soft, loyalty to the UNSC and the basic protocol is primary. And about the Chrysalis scenes, this is just perfect so keep up the idea but when we going to reach the part when Five make a first contact scenario with the Changelings race, make him angry please about the disrespected crew members. The Changelings are aliens too, so no exceptions they invaded a Human UNSC military property. But, i guess I know what you want to do with this story, so keep up the brilliant work, just make him loyal to the UNSC, that's all i need from this perfect story, when finally our Human character not a doormat, just a respected ambassador and of course a badass space warrior.
He's going soft....
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[`\(_.\ Flip the Table!
Flip another one! /_.)/~]
Flip all the Tables! [` \(>_<)/ ~]
5358115 Could you say the tables have turned?
5358115
5348266
YES, PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSE don't be stupid.
And Sarge, you're doing it wrong.
(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ FLIP THAT TABLE.
┻━┻ ︵ ヽ(°□°ヽ) FLIP THIS TABLE.
┻━┻ ︵ \( °□° )/ ︵ ┻━┻ FLIP ALL THE TABLES
ಠ_ಠ Son.
ಠ__ಠ Put.
ಠ___ಠ The tables.
ಠ____ಠ Back!
5693709 replying because i like the post...
you've never seen an MRE before have you? they arent bars of bull shit, their packages of actual meals that are actually quite good. and i highly doubt that they would get as bad as you described it here in the future.
7544966 What would be easier for a super soldier designed to instantly be able to jump fifteen feet in the air, snap covenant necks, and of course rip out spines to carry? Twenty packages of mashed potatoes and five star steak, or a box full of bars that may or may not stink and taste horrible, but contain everything they need to survive and continue fighting any alien threat? Of course the fucking box.
At least Luna's reasonable.
That reaction from Twilight.
Gah, I hope it works for the lings.
Yellow eyes...
Yellow eyes...
Apple Bloom?
There is some pretty abject stupidity going around here from practically every major character.
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Not gonna lie, I was contemplating just starting this whole story over because of how bad the earlier chapters are.
They really are. That's the problem with inter-universal communication, no common frame of reference. Like, can you imagine the Scooby Gang and Frank Castle trying to come to an agreement on "acceptable force"?
Finaly progress! Hope Luna can fix what Celestia almost fucked up.