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Hoohahaaaaa! That ending!
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I did a thing once with a Titanfall story, they made it to the bridge of the ship and ended up destroying the Reaper Armada with treesap.
This is Bucking awesom!!!
Nice...good setup's good executions...this story is STILL good
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Thank you.
Before I begin the story, does the romance tag include the Spartan? As in, and I'm purely assuming from the coverart, something like him and Chrysalis?
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Yes, but it hasn't developed yet.
Earlier in the story Celestia was put on the ground by a single Magnum shot to the wing. Now she's shrugging of full magazines?
I call bs.
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Dark Magic. Sell your free will to be stronger.
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There's a difference between augmentation and invincibility.
Is she healing wounds with the bullets still inside to wreak havoc later?
She's mentality gone considering she shot twilight. I don't see a way for this to end that doesn't involve a Mac or a random deus ex machina.
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She's gonna be crippled pretty severely later on.
Hope there's an awesome fight scene next chapter. Pretty sweet to see another chapter too, your on a roll keep it up!
7545314 Ugh
Wow, Celestia is going to feel that later. And I see that her horn isn't recovering.
<Crimson> That's not a knife. THAT'S a knife.
Oooooh no, let's just hope that anything dangerous is secured on the ship.
Wow...that ending bro.
Nice.
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Sorry to disappoint.
Does the Pale horse have Stasis field technology in any way? because when you get above a certain level of regeneration, especially magically based, you get to the rediciulous level of even when totally vapourised, the curse bound soul means the magic pulls either the atoms back, or if those have been destroyed through conversion, pulls equivalents from the surrounding landscape, or even just pulls them from the foam.
What I would greatly enjoy here would be the blend of Spartan and Changeling, maybe with a bit of Pinkie chaos in, that causes the Dark Curse as a whole to be targetable as a single entity, and the origionator. Why waste ships heavy cannon on just one target thats Celestia?
The CMC can also destroy a non working mechanism and make it fully operational. In a way it was never meant to fly.
Man I forgot about this, so glad it is still being worked on.
It's an Alien Spaceship used for a war. Why the hell would they child proof it?
Sorry Celly, but ah.. Us humans forget how to die when we fight against an alien.
7545573 Don't forget Humans don't go down without a fight.
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I'm sorry to be ripping on you so hard.
My concern was that some aspects of the story and the recent chapters are trending back towards the style of the original story.
I'm worried you've written yourself into a wall.
That said, I am still enjoying it. Thank you for returning from your hiatus.
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I've planned all of this out since the beginning of the rewrite. Thanks for sticking around.
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You'd be suprised how idiot proofed some military vessels actually are. Redundancies guarantee weaponry or key systems cannot be deployed accidently. It also helps slow down enemy operation if the vessel is captured.
7543720 how woud it
>another story moved out of my ded bookshelf
Good shit
7545623 Ideas can be snuffed out as can any human. You simply need to know how to do it.
7546465 10/10 best comment 2016 -IGN
so uh, haven't seen this one in a while:
MOAR
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Sorry, but yall are wrong. it needs more COW BELT!!!
incase that didnt work https://youtu.be/smj_UhBOOwk
if that didnt work either https://youtu.be/yB1z2USriZs
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I'm fucking saving that forever. Thank you.
7545649 For example, most if not all military vehicles will automatically turn off without pilot/sailor/driver input.
7545533 Baby aliens?
I love you for bringing this back! Good job, I'll wait for the next one.
7547648 There Comes A Time In Every Mans Life... When He Has A Feevaaaa.....
also, how do i actually make the video show up on the message irself instead of just puting a link?
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When you go to type a comment, there's a bar that has options for text, like spoilers and bold. In that same bar is a YouTube button to put in the video.
7550256 i clicked that the first time and inserted the link into the prompt, but it just did this
puts it in brackets and says youtube before the link. i was thinking i was missing something.
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Gonna have to talk with someone that works on the site's management, then.
7545017 eh, just sayin. ive read stories that were set in the modern day were the MRE was described similarly to the way you did because they mostly just went on what thay had heard from other people.
mre's are really great for long camping trips if you dont want to bring food that spoils easily, or if you dont want any wandering critters sniffing out your food while you sleep.
7550383 well thaks for the help any ways.
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To be fair, Five doesn't know that, nor do the Equestrians know the reason behind it.
Well...that was FUCKIN AWSOM!.... Ps I demand for changeling and pony fole playmates (the cmc and twins)
HE SAID THE THING! WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Didn't anyone tell you not to mess with Humanity? Otherwise, you're gonna regret it! The harder you push, the better they fight.
The UNSC Spartans are trained to fight until they die. You never stood a chance.
They won't vanish without a fight, and hell be damned if you try to force them to lie down and die. If the Covenant can't kill them easily, with all their advanced technology, what hope do you have Sombra?
7768998 You speak of the truth, and i will say that there is another species who can combat humanity, the Sangheili. If they landed onto this planet (The ones who help the UNSC, not the Storm faction.) with Five, then this fight will be not even close to being fair, The elites better humans in every way possible. If Celestia had angered the Swords of Sanghelios, then i would laugh as they give her what she deserves. (And yes, i know that she is being controlled by Sombra, but at this point in time i don't care. Fuck them up Five, you have our permission not only as a commenter on this story, but also as a bloodthirsty motherf*cker who wants this to happen.
Doesn't matter, because I guarantee it's not CMC-proofed.
Celestia is a tough bitch...