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Pearple Prose


"A cheeky idiot tweedling around the moors." ~ Aragon || Avatar by Anon Y Mousse

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What does it mean to be Celestia? What does it mean to be "at the top"?

Celestia knows.

And soon, Twilight will too.


Now on Equestria Daily!

Winner of the Second Twilestia Contest.

Now in Russian! Courtesy of Nogood.

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I prefer to be in the bottom :ajsmug:

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I'll get around to it eventually.

;n;

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Wow.

Heavy, dude.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Ohhh that was good. Really good :pinkiehappy:. A Lot of emotions running through this.

Great work :twilightsmile:

<tilts head> Which is she? A goddess or a pony?

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I dunno. What do you think? :raritywink:

That was very deep. I really liked the imagery of the lights and connections to the other ponies.

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Why she;s both, and thus her problem. Her Goddness and Ponyness clash, she wants to be a normal pony but MUST be a goddess.

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How is she a Goddess?

How exactly does the chain separate them? It's not a wall, after all...:twilightoops:

Love it.

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Whoops! Fixed.

And thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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So, Twilight is slowly drifting off, towards a place even higher?

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Welll... she's not the Deity. In terms of power, she's up there, but Discord is more powerful, as are the elements. Even Chrysalis before she got Team Rocketed out of Canterlot. So... pony

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I'll never tell. =X

But yeah, pretty much.

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You are very welcome Pearple. You continue to improve, which is impressive because you're already a very good writer. Keep working on it and I full well expect to reading something published by you in dead tree format while relaxing in my deathbed and being attended by my sexy robot nurses.

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Yes. Dead tree format is the way forward.

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The future is retro, baby!

Believe me, I'm old enough at this point to see things come back around. A few things have come and gone a few times over.

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ummm really? Ok she controls the movement of Celestia bodies, an ability often attributed to the Gods in the story she refers to herself as goddess so....

Hey! Not a bad piece of work you got there! It quite nicely encapsulates the idea of that power thing in the minds of Celestia. It's really just a story snapshot about that one single idea, and I think you pulled it off quite nicely indeed.

If anything, this story could have been better if it were longer! There's so much more to touch on and things to approach, like the threads and the chains, which were a very nice touch and made me curious to see and understand more. But of course, that's unnecessary for this particular slice you're telling.

Either way, good job!

Lonely? Ah, now that's unlikely. Twilight is part Loyalty, after all.

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Ah, thanks!

Really, I'm just happy that this story came out as well as it did. Normally I find a whole slew of things I wish I'd done differently, but the execution here is almost exactly what I wanted it to be.

It's nice to have a story that I can show people and not be annoyed about.

Thanks, once again, for the push you gave me to do it.

... Now if only I could write something of decent length...

I just love this kind of stuff, can I have seconds? :moustache:

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I find that once you have a good idea, something that stems from the heart and mind at the same time, words are easier to translate onto a page. =) Keep in there! Maybe we'll even work on something together in the future.

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Oooh, that does sound like a good idea.

Ooh. That was quite good. Made me think for a minute, and I do believe it was nearly the perfect length for something written in this format. Perhaps if you added a bit more to the part about the chain connecting Celestia and Twilight, it would have been more satisfying length-wise.

But that was very good overall, and I loved it! :heart:

It starts out like a sweet little bit of fluff, but that ending... ominous doesn't begin to cover it. The ambiguity of it is the best part, I feel.

Anyway, rather spiffing.

It was sweet, it was touching, and I've run out of other ways to say "heartwarming."

Oooh. *shiver*

SHL

It's was very touching. I liked, but I felt sad for Celestia. :fluttercry:

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Cheers guys!

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Wow, thanks for the feedback! And I'm glad you enjoyed. :twilightsmile:

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You like?

Who dafuq would dislike this!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

The feels :fluttercry: Good work.

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Okay, let's see here.

*Checks story status*

Whoa...

*Checks feature box*

Huh.

*Glares at Twilight with pistol in hand*

:twilightoops:: W-wait!

Sorry. Thems the breaks, kid.

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Actually, it was featured for several hours on the non-mature box. Got bumped off a while ago though :fluttercry:

3672582 *Stares blankly at the smoking hole in Twilight's chest*

Wish you'd said something earlier. Now I feel bad.

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Oh.

Will this bring her back to life, then?

3672598 Huh!!!!! Well I be a monkey's unc--

*Twilight stirs awake*

:facehoof:: Ugh... Wha... what happ--Ack, my chest! What is--

Oh dear God, NO! Double-tap! DOUBLE-TAP!

*Shoots Twilight five more times*

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I always like a good 'Twilight doesn't know her own power' story.

I don't get the scene where Twilight was glowing or something. Also, in one part it said

But, as my sister La Lune...

Did you mean Lu Lu?

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The part where Twilight was glowing was essentially Celestia seeing her power/potential. Sorry if it wasn't clear enough.

Also, Lulu isn't a canon nickname, as far as I'm aware. I just saw the name "La Lune" in another fic and thought it was nice, so I used it.

3676630 Yeah, I kind of got that, but I wasn't entirely sure.

Ah, a bit of Socratic dialogue that ends on a slightly open note. It's the kind of one-shot that I enjoy.

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