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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Red Version


When Giovanni steals a time capsule and modifies it to take him back to a specific point in time, stealing a small portable storage system device called a Pass(that may or may not be used to travel to the MLP universe), it is up to Blue to find him and stop him from trying to capture the ponies and sell them for profit.

And when there's a chance to capture a legendary, it's win win. Plus, Blue knows if he didn't join Red to travel back in time, he would miss out on the chance to get his own rare pony Pokemon. (That Red managed to get one of but he didn't)

That...And Giovanni has stolen all the badges that belonged to Blue's gym.

Again...

Blue is planning on getting a Pokemon-proof safe once this is all over.

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Hooza! it has come back and I hope that it is Red Who gains Celestia's trust for capture!!! :pinkiehappy:
So excited to see how Blue will be the hero for this story and the time loop Red created for himself!!! :pinkiehappy:
This has won my fave and an upvote!!!

“Your majesty, I am Blue, a human from the planet omicron persy-eye-oof!”

Nice Futurama reference!:rainbowlaugh:

Fuck the guards, they gotta go find themselves a bad guy!
Frankly, I just want to see a fight but either way this looks cool, and you even introduced Green!!!
Also, how tall is Lyra since she came from... What... For years in the future?
Furthermore, what point in time is it right now?
Is it before or after their first trip to Equestria?

I really want to see Lyra battle...

And to think I just finished reading red today. I do semi hate you. You didn't let me get my prediction about the title of this before it came out, but I guess that's a guess that anyone could have made.I also want to see some things in this, and I will list them. Lyra in the pokemon world (flashbacks because last comment spoiled it for me, I hate you) I would also love to see EVERYTHING LEFT HANGING IN THE LAST STORY! I mean, come one, that was a gurenteed plot for a sequel with all the unanswered questions, The two I want to see the most are the Celestia Pokeball (I think red, but I think blue would make a good plot the way he said he wanted to catch her.) and the future Red (which the first chapter should help clear up) I can't believe my luck in finding this. I favorited red about 6 months ago, but didn't start to read it until Saturday. I finished it today (Wednesday), which makes it my second shortest story to read (in time length, not words) I would definately love to see how Lyra has grown, and would lovw to see Blue Spark's questions answered.
dtlux1
PS: I never comment since I read on my ipod notes app, but some stories are just too good for me to resist.

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I know :twilightsheepish: I don't know how it happened.

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Lyra is the same size as Celestia now, hence the sentence:

one looked almost like a unicorn, except for the fact it was the same size as Celestia

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While I would like to answer all the questions instantly, believe me I do, I also want to do this story right. The final critique I got for Red was that it was rushed, and not descriptive enough.
Also :rainbowwild: trust me, I hate me too.

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Whoops.. Must have missed that, thanks for pointing it out!

The windows showed a multitude of scenes of a purple unicorn, one decrypting her with wings.

I assume you mean depicting...

Red and Blue just being awesome.
Can't wait to see when the action starts though, keep it up! :D
Also can't wait to see Lyra's new move set, if it changed at all that is...

I am waiting who caught Celestia yet... The story is in a way, skipped to a degree... Now where did Celestia get that pokeball....? But I'm greatly hoping it is Red.

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This runs parallel to red version, meaning Celestia only just met the first red, the 2nd meeting is in a week.

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Okay so she met the future red first then in this chapter, implied she met the younger Red because if her teleporting back with Rarity means she has been briefed and visited Ponyville to see a younger Red.

Okay. So now I really wish it is Red who won Celestia over.

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I'm going to have to make a timeline for this stuff aren't I XD

Not really, I see it. I was completely wondering when the whole pokeball in the box is answered and why Celestia did not appear in the Team rocket arrival.

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:derpytongue2: I love how Red's is the first one, and Blue get's the awesome 'back in time' plot :rainbowlaugh:

You realize by introducing Green you're gonna be required to make a Green Version if this story has any loopholes at the end right? Don't worry I believe in you mate, because your awesome.

Comment posted by Camlio deleted Nov 21st, 2013

3520261 That would be very interesting indeed... :ajsmug:

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:derpytongue2: Depends, on if this needs to become a trilogy.

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Well if it does I'd enjoy it. Isn't Green canonically Red and Blue's other rival... and Red's GF in the manga?

With this story, it is somewhat confusing. I was used to Green being Blue and Blue being Green because I read the direct Japanese translation of the manga. This made me think of it in the other way (the American way). I love the Red story, and this will clear up the loose ends. I can't wait to see Twilight's reaction to them being back :pinkiehappy:. I do get what you say about it being rushed last story. I am ok with it being rushed IF it doesn't become like most of the stories I like. They are all just left alone and never updated. While the authors all have excuses like writers block, that doesn't mean you just stop. I hate those authors, and then when they do update after a year or so, I can't get back into the story, and they don't update again. I will never forgive you if you just stop this fic. I love it, and it has made me interested in POKéMON again. I have never stopped liking it, this just resparked my interest. It makes me want to reread the manga from the begining again (which will make names more confusing :derpytongue2:) I can't wait for more chapters, and remember, if you stop writing this, she will kill you and bake you into cupcakes :pinkiecrazy:.
dtlux1

3521052 PS: You know that in a couple of years (or days hopefully) of this being finished, you have to release a third version with little to no improvements over the last 2. :derpytongue2: I think that if you have anything left unanswered in this, you have to make a trilogy. I would read it, I think I am now going to watch you even.

dtlux1 IS WATCHING YOU!:pinkiecrazy:

I hope that doesn't scare you, I will trey not to watch you in your sleep.

So wait... Blu got sick for no reason?
And I'm going to assume that the ones holding hands are Green and Red.

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Not for no reason, :ajsmug: you gotta use your imagination. Also, it's nothing R . :trixieshiftleft:

Poor Blue....That's gotta sting in more ways than one.

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:pinkiesad2:Yeah, the poor guy. It's no one's fault though.

Wait, wait, wait, So Red is in a love triangle, but Lyra knows it was just the pokeball attracting her to Red, so now she's acting rebound? What the what?

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:rainbowhuh: Wait what?
Uhh no, Red and Lyra are just friends.
Or Trainer and Pokemon if you want to be semi-specific.

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You sure? Lyra was basically ecstatic and hopping around the place in Red version

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:rainbowwild: Guess I'll have to address that too then.

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:rainbowwild: I did semi-explain it but I'll make sure to address it in this story too.

Blue might not be able to win the heart of Green but I think he has a chance for Lyra's.

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:ajsleepy: We'll see.
:trixieshiftleft:Blue needs to learn to stop running into wall first. :trixieshiftleft:

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How about learning to actually pay attention? That solves just about most of his issues... XD

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Your right, that's never going to happen... XD

Wait...which Green is this? Leaf Green? or the G1-R/B/Y character Green? I'm assuming Leaf Green.

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The thing is, there's not as much information about what personality Green has, so I'm basing it off a small blurb I got.
Basically I'm trying to make Green a bit more normal, and a mix of both Blue and Red without having her become Lyra.

Most of what I've found paints her closer to Blue than what I've got here, but I don't want another Blue or Lyra.

:facehoof: It's hard, one word the wrong way and she becomes one of the other three.

3530843 I meant as far as her appearance goes. Japanese? Or More like Red and Blue?

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:facehoof:Damnit I knew I was forgetting something.
No wait, I did describe her.

Wearing a short white shirt, the brown haired female, for it had longer hair and a higher voice, was also wearing a red skirt, making the design look very slimming.

http://fav.me/d26tvti

3532632 Sorry, I don't trust links unless I know what they link to. Is it just a picture? If so, I'll check it out....

*I clicked a link similar to that and got a nasty virus.

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It's a picture of green. Those links are Deviantart.

So they're going anyway despite her wishes?
Awesome, it's time to make some noise, screw royalty. >:)

Ugh...so....wibbly wobbly....timey wimey.....needs,,,

More...

ALLONS-Y!!!!!

Comment posted by Mother3Forever deleted Nov 29th, 2013
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