So, how have you enjoyed your time in the fandom so far in general, and on FIMFiction specifically? What have been the best parts and the worst parts for you?

Hello my name is yuginegi I am new on the site and I would be honored if you could read my first fanfic it is called The Shadow Wars you can find it by going on to my homepage its not done yet but the first chapter will be posted tomorrow I hope you get this message and I hope you enjoy the fantastic and I would like it if you can get me some tips on making some good fanfics see you tomorrow then enjoy

Thank you for being a respectful and well dignified person. Most people would have spit out some verbal slop that I don't find pleasant. I respect you.

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I hear yah man. I'm putting in the effort and quality is slowly but surely improving but time is just not a commodity I have. I'm hoping the summer will give me enough time in order to do a writing marathon of chapters to improve my writing skill. *Hint* expect the next chapter some time early July.

Okay, listen. I understand the detail and great writing skills you have into a good fiction, but I have to be honest. "Trapped in a Wonderland" is not as good as I first thought it was. I shouldn't be saying anything, because of a rushed Halo fic I did awhile back, but let me level with you. If you fix all grammar mistakes, and I don't really know if there are any, fix the paragraph indentations and add more detail. It seems a little rushed to me and it gave me the impression that you don't care enough about the story to put it in, but I know you do and are trying. Please, I implore you to try adding more detail and work hard on making it look more presentable. I know you are adding more detail, or seems like it, in later chapters, but I insist you add more. Please, consider my advice, but don't do what I say, because I am asking you to. Do your own free will.