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Yukito


Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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Fluttershy decides to have a tea party with her two friends, Iron Will and Discord, who are both pining for her affection. Things escalate into... weird.

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I have no idea what the fuck I just read, but I enjoyed every minute of it.:rainbowlaugh:

Still, Fluttershy didn’t care mu h for how other ponies saw her.

The mu h has extra space.
Otherwise brilliant, but you should have gone into more details. This needs to have sequel/prequel/extended version. Needs more!

I demand you write the alternate ending immediately!

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Or Iron Cord, vocab wise.

I have absolutely no idea what hell all that was, but I was too busy laughing my ass off to care.
Have a spikestache. :moustache:

Well that's my early Halloween scare

...I'd ship it.

All these commenters are simpletons! I understand this as it was truly meant to be understood, as a story chock full of nuance and comparisons between anarchy and strict rule and how they can come to coexist, all wrapped up into a heart warming story about true love between a hard working Minotaur and a witty draconequus

This gonna be good

Didn't see that coming :D

R34 of Discord/Will soon I guess? I'm sure someone is weird enough to actually do this xD

Great story as expected!

A twist worthy of M. Night Shyamalan.

Fuck the what did I just read?! Who cares? Insanity for all!

This...Is....AMAZING :rainbowlaugh:

....Well, at least we know you make good use of tags. That random tag definitely fits this story to a T.

Also:

Still, Fluttershy didn’t care mu h for how other ponies saw her.

This should be:

Still, Fluttershy didn’t care much for how other ponies saw her.

*Thinks* no you don't

3399330 I second your :twilightoops: and raise you a :facehoof:

... I think I might need help

Help writing it, you mean? :trixieshiftright:

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No, like, of the psychiatric nature :twilightblush:

Where's Twilight in that hot mane-bun and those thick glasses when you need her?

Well...wow....that just happened...not sure what to do with the melted pile of goop that was my brain.....smoothie anyone?

What the actual fuck

What the hell did I just read.

Pfffhahahahahah!

That was awesome!

Holy crap this is amazing! I demand more crack ships! Also.... I really wanted Flutters to join them!!!

MORE!!!!!

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh:I had to read this. Not regretting it. I'm gonna need a strong drink now.:facehoof::pinkiegasp:

Plot twist: it all becomes canon!

Still no sequel? I want this to continue :pinkiecrazy:

I'm on my bed now crying and vomiting and curled up in to a ball slowly going insain and I have lost so many iq's in my brain because of this story congress you made me crack (: sound of glass braking in the mind :) eyes become small and has a murders face on :pinkiecrazy: I'm back hehehehahahahaha slowly fads to black

I had my money on a threesome between those 3 at the park but that blew my mind completely. Now I'll be back... Gotta vomit.

What the fuck just happened....???

How my brain wanted to react:

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Just re read this. Needs sequel.

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You take shit to seriously man...:ajbemused:

Well...wasn't expecting that but whatever works. :pinkiesick: :rainbowlaugh: :facehoof:

The two stopped their snarling, and were now simply glaring silently into each other’s eyes.

Oh I see where this is going.:trollestia:

Fluttershy stopped and stared at her two friends piled on the grass, Iron Will on top of Discord and their arms wrapped around each other as they made out in the middle of the park, their tongues at vicious war with each other for dominance.

Fucking called it. :rainbowlaugh:

what did i just read? :pinkiegasp: :twilightoops: This is hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

What I just reading? My eyes! Really style of writing was good, but I can't see this... Discord and... Iron... Oh my sweet Luna..

Ffffftttttt!!!!! HAHHAHAHAHA!!!Exquisitely written and the plot twist was halarious!

this
was
GLORIOUS!

Oh hell no.....

I'm gonna be sick:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

... I think I might need help :S

Yeah no shit...

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