Discord goes to get a tree.
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Original Works. It was a good run.
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I don't see why this story has a 10:7 rating before I read it, as it's well-written and better than what I write. The story is simple, yes, but I don't think that such a thing would warrant that many downvotes. However, I'd probably say that the interaction between Discord and Thunderlane could do without curse words, as that does feel odd, and the short chapter lengths may be turning people away. Also, I'd recommend changing person/people to pony/ponies in some spots, as I noticed that as well. If it's possible to condense this story into a one-shot, that's what I'd recommend. Anyway, I'll give this an upvote because it did get me to smile at times. I hope your next story does better. Keep on writing.
5414140 This is to me a oneshot, I just do away with page breaks now for the most part and use chapter breaks instead unless it is only a small change.
5414154 Fair enough. I can understand why you'd do that. Anyway, I'm sorry that this story wasn't as popular as some of your other stories. Best of luck on your future writings.
5414161 Thank you.
5414180 You're welcome.
Okay, cute. :) I liked Discord here, no easy feat. ;)
5424427 Yay!
Simple story, but cute, funny and almost made me feel a bit sorry for Discord. That's not easy to do, mind. ;)
5424513 Second verse same as the first.
I like it.
Hmmm...
The first was that all of the stallions were still alive so no necromancy would be needed that day
'That day,'? So it was needed another day? And Discord knows necromancy? Well, that solves some problems of being immortal/long living.
Discord?
I like it, it was sweet.
I did not mean to....
did not mean to write?
I did not mean to write a?
I did not mean to write a prequel. ooh.