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Final Draft

All the world is indeed a stage, and we are merely players, performers, and portrayers; each anothers audience outside the gilded cage.


This story is a sequel to CAPS LOCK

After several months, Caps Lock has finally made a friend at Ponyville Elementary School. Button Mash may not be the troll Caps Lock is, but he sure can hold his own in Battle Stallion. They spend all their time gaming together until Button takes up a new interest: Sweetie Belle. When she sends down an ultimatum, Button must choose what's more important: Caps Lock's friendship or her.

Hearts and Hooves themed story.

Thanks to Sky Wishes 7266 for the wonderful cover art!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 36 )

Yes it's finally here!:rainbowkiss:

Horray! Geez. Given his family life, Caps never had a chance.

Oh, yes.
Oh, my, yes.

Wow ... that's some fatherly advice.

Are we going to see Shift being a more pronounced (horrible) father figure? Or is this his only scene?

3829282 He shall be appearing again with more sagely advice.


:rainbowlaugh: Hahahahahahaha! :rainbowlaugh: I can't wait to see the father bonding time that CAP needs in his life. Before ending up poisoning the water supply with LSD and Liquid Poison Joke to loosen Sweetie Belle up. That sounds like something he'd suggest.

It has begun. :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:
Begin the madness.

Who thinks this is the start of the Capsverse?

Yay! Sequel!!

absolutely amazing! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Am I the only one who wants to beat the crap out of Caps Lock? If I acted like him around my dad, I definitely would've gotten beat up and if he was my kid, I'd probably smack him upside the head and take everything away from him until he wrote personalized letters of apology to everyone he affected and delivered them himself.

I'm sorry, but that attitude does not fly with me.

Aside from that gripe, it is a good read.

And then Caps gets thoroughly p0wned.:trollestia:

Considering Shift was established as the drunken deadbeat, me liking him more and more is a very good thing.:pinkiecrazy:
Speaking of which, what's his mom's name, Tab? Function? Maybe her twin is Alternate Function.:twilightsmile:
But yeah, TF2 spawn rooms FTW.:ajsmug:

I was thinking either Tab or Blue Screen for his mother.

“And if that doesn’t work, there’s chloroform under the sink.”

11/10 best fatherhood advice

Don't mention. Just happy that it turned out as well as it did.(cover art):pinkiehappy:

Ahhh, that was a good romp. Kind of interesting to see Shift as a character, and how he immediately gives off this tone of being the high school football captain with girls falling at his hooves.

Then again, it seems to work with his wife, so I guess they have... some kind of a working relationship? Hell, I have to wonder if they aren't together just because they screw each other. This is a weird family!

But I see a competition in the future, and a whole lot of development for Caps. This should be very interesting...


An excellent question, I'll see if I can't bust one out before this Saturday. I usually do all my writing on Friday nights.

Btw I like your fluffle puff..is it from the fluffy mixer episode on YouTube the Christmas special?
Also do you think they will add fluffle puff stickers?

4305057 Not even close, I just have other projects taking priority.

Oh ok that's fine I just haven't seen a post so that's fine.


I will continue to watch this.
A battle for Sweetie Belle's heart? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
You go, Button Mash!

Hello! I like to story but.. just wondering are you still working on it or did you cancel it?


Yay! Sequel!!

And then the world rejoiced, singing merrily about how glorious that day had been!

“And if that doesn’t work, there’s chloroform under the sink.”

When's the next chapter coming?

4142014 20w, 2d ago,

I'll see if I can't bust one out before this Saturday. I usually do all my writing on Friday nights.

That totally happened.

Oh snap. I hope Button wins this one...

“And if that doesn’t work, there’s chloroform under the sink.”

What day fuck bro?!



:yay: :yay: :yay:

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