Unexpected

Spike is turning eighteen which means he could either stay with Twilight or leave to go off on his own. Though what he tells Twilight isnt exactly what she expects him to say.

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TwizzleDragon

TwizzleDragon #1 · Aug 1st, 2013 · 2 · ·

Seems a bit rushed and the dialogue doesn't appear fitting to me, but otherwise I enjoyed the story's sweetness.

Smurf

Smurf #2 · Aug 1st, 2013 · · ·

yes this made me smile
any plans to do more?

luxluther

luxluther #3 · Aug 1st, 2013 · · ·

That was really good and they're such a cute pairing. Though it did seem a tad bit rushed and you have some trouble staying in one tense. If it starts out in past tense in needs to stay there. Besides that, your writing is great and I like that you write them as humans. It definitely makes their actions sound more natural. I love reading your stories and hop you continue to write them.

Riz

Riz #4 · Aug 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Wonderful. I do enjoy this ship..

Kickback

Kickback #5 · Aug 2nd, 2013 · · ·

I like it
Not much else to say

trahzo

trahzo #6 · Aug 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Oh yeah!

Taxes

Taxes #7 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

good job spike OOO-RAH

Turtleboy76

Turtleboy76 #8 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Good job, short and cute, would like similar

Tender Ninja

Tender Ninja #9 · Aug 7th, 2013 · · ·

Wow, I'm really suprised how good of a story it was. Eyup, so much eyup.

FLUTTERxxDASH

FLUTTERxxDASH #10 · Aug 28th, 2013 · · ·

wow i loved this so much but i wanted to hear more

nicelittlefilly

nicelittlefilly #11 · Sep 6th, 2013 · · ·

I proudly support SpRarity. This is a good book though.... I support twilight and spike being brother and sister. Eeyup.

ImaginaryCatnip

ImaginaryCatnip #12 · Nov 24th, 2013 · · ·

A short yet very sweet story. There are some mistakes here and there but who cares about those in a great fic like this one? Keep writing, you really have potential

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