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Thebravenorse


In the end, I hope you had the time of your life.

T

Short Spike x Twilight Story/Scenarios written by me!
All under 1000 words. You get the point.


Fast to read and short to... Some story's will be Comedy, some Romance, etc...
This is one of my favorite Shipping's in the fandom.
(Note: This mostly just for practice on my writing).

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 72 )

When I saw such short chapters I have thought: Oh well, probably some new writer that will get better with time.
I was however, very pleasantly surprised, because those are actually short scenes which are very sweet to read or funny at the same time. I'm looking forward for more of your writing, keep up the good work!
Also added it to Spilight Library in category that would fit it the most I believe (although I'm not sure if I categorized it right as it is a series of smaller stories rather than one story which means its hard to categorize).:twilightsmile:

4045002 Nah, just stating facts. :twilightsmile: Besides I'm the one thanking you for writing this fic. It has been a while since a story put a smile on my face :pinkiehappy:

Simply genius!!! Spilight with different scenarios each chapter. Feels like this pairing is being put to the max. I love it.

More Chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage: Very good story.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: I :heart::heart::heart: it.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Oh Spike is in so much trouble when he wakes up tomorrow morning. Very good chapter. Hope you write more.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4045002 wow dude, you got Better at writing. Have fun with the fic yo :moustache:

Dude 100% alcohol would freaking kill you, might want to change that to 100 proof.

SW

Was good. 'Good'.

Not great, not amazing, nor spectacular. Just 'good'.

A quantity of words need to be corrected/modified and some descriptions could have used more details and support.

Overall, 6/10 [4/10 without added points for the shipping]

You did better than most, I can tell you that. There's hope for you yet. Until then, either brush up on your English or get a Beta. I recommend both.

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Sorta depends on your body's tolerance and how much you drink, but 100% doesn't automatically kill you, that just means it's basically moonshine (Which is usually 100% as well)

Wow... just.. :fluttercry: I don't know what to say.. But thank you all so much! :pinkiehappy: I will take all your creative criticism into account. And I will post new chapters soon... :twilightsmile:

4046298 Still then I highly doubt Stalliongrad Vodka would be 100%alcohol.

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Oh, no doubt, most commercially sold alchohols are lower proofed for a variety of reasons (Be it due to requirements of the brewing and distilling process to produce the flavor or even local laws) but this is a mythical world. I'm just saying 100% alcohol isn't an automatic death sentence

hahahaha! :rainbowlaugh:
please give us more :twilightsmile:

Not bad, a few spelling mistakes and you might want to change the italic words to actions instead of breaks in the story. Overall a good story

Oh this was funny, not that much Spilight but I do understand that that was your intent with this chapter, please continue.

Comment posted by Thebravenorse deleted Apr 30th, 2014

2 more likes and it will be an awesome 40likes!!! :pinkiehappy:

Hooray for more! Can I have some more? MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE. Seriously though, this chapter was pretty sweet and also sounds inevitable. Keep it up.

4319318 Yea, sorry for the long wait, but I've just been studying on exams for school. And also been working on my new {Clop} story that just came out. 'Moonlight melody'. But new chapters will come out soon for this story.

Hm...I don't know what to say about this story. Sweet? Yes, Cute? Yes, Twilight showing how she cares about Spike? Of course. Its okay but there is this little thing which unsettles me and that is Twilight acting a little manipulative although I think she finally began to snap because of the feelings she kept hidden in herself and they simply started to overflow. Good story :twilightsmile:

But not in the friendship why, in the romantic kind of why.

Uhm... way not why.

4705453 Yea... this was more of a sad story :twilightblush: Sorry... but! in my defense I did put the labels for the story as: Sad and Slice of Life :rainbowkiss:

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are we gonna have to wait 2 months for another chapter? :trollestia:

4705475 And I am also Sorry for that as well :twilightsheepish: But you see this story is mostly just for when I have writers block on other story's or when I have the time to write a short Spilight story. So I don't know when the next chapter will be out. Sorry friend...

Will you make a second chapter for this?

An Anthro Tag you should have put up there.

Riz

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Can we have a genderswap story for the next one please ?

4706761 Sure! One Barb and Dusk Shine Comming right up! :)

I read your first idea, very good. This was worthy of an everyday romance, something that could be written without hurry or big ambitions.:moustache::moustache::moustache::heart::twilightsmile:

Ok, ok. I just got to chapter two (his second idea): Now I see a Spike drunk, numb or anything, could be very funny as to embarrass others.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Damn, man! You will not leave us Derpy and Twilight just crying sad! Man, this is the kind of love triangle that deserves to be worked! Damn it!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::derpytongue2::heart::moustache::heart::twilightsheepish:

4712225 Hahah I am evil hahah :trollestia: lol, just kidding! But I already got a rejuest to make a part two for that story, so don't worry friend. Everying will be fixed soon :derpytongue2: :heart: :moustache: :heart: :twilightsmile:

spotted this in two chapters where you have (dose) when I think you mean [does]. Gotta love spell check.

The third idea has soooooooooo much potential

Comment posted by spike the mustache deleted Aug 7th, 2014
Comment posted by rikusouleater deleted Aug 7th, 2014
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