In the end, I hope you had the time of your life.
This story has a Sequel: Soarin's Scales 2: Childs Play
It's been a month after Soarins and Spitfires break-up, now the once great Wonderbolt has giving up on life. Drinking, Depression, and maybe even Drugs take over his life. Can His old friend Spike help him out of this rut? And can he find love again?
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Spike needs more gay fics... but please find aneditor. This is VERY rough.
3845504 Yeah I do need to find editor, so if anybody knows of a good one please tell me. thank you for the creative criticism.
Awesome! You beat me to this one though. fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/002/7/b/clapping_pony_icon___soarin___wonderbolt_uniform_by_taritoons-d5q6w8j.gif
Still I look forward to seeing how this goes!
Although Braeburn will be heartbroken...
3845650 Ha, yeah I agree Braeburn will be heartbroken but spike needs love to and thank you, it means a lot. :-)
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It's dangerous to fanfic alone! Take these.
3845751 Thank you :-)
I am going to get a editor soon so please everyone do not dislike the story just because of the grammar and roughness. ( they will be fixed soon ) :-)
True to the point. Good story.
3848891 Thank you.
Alright... The story itself is sound, but, that's not why I down-voted it.
It's the grammar and punctuation. For me, those alone make this story damn near impossible to read, BUT, it's easily fixable by having someone go through and proofread so they can catch any mistakes you made when drafting up the story. It honestly does look like a good ship could set sail from this, but only if the glaring mistakes through out the whole thing are fixed...
Mmm yes this story is very good. I await further writings!
3850805 Yes I am trying to find a editor, and I agree with you. Thank you for liking the story idea though. :-)
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I hadn't read this comment yet, so yeah... I'll upvote when the editing comes around, though. And it'll stay in my read later list, so I can keep tabs on it easier.
3851317 cool.
That was a good chapter. Lets see what happens now. I bet it is going to be funny.
The sh*t is about to hit the fan!
Good chapter!
3847438 I can be an editor
spike who in return had the biggest smile that Pinkie Pie could only hope to achieve. Pinkie Pie looked up from her book on scientific theory and gave an angry glare "I feel a disturbance in the force" then went back to reading.
Oh you wouild not believe the laugh's you gave me
*get assortment of guns* get back in the writing chair boy because I dont know how to use these guns but when I figer our you better be writing the next chapter
That went just like I thought it would.
Well that was some thing... cute
I feel like some of the dialogue is awkward and the info about their friendship is misplaced, otherwise it was fun to read. And I'm not worried about the grammar, I've read way worse.
4674886 Thanks bro! and yea this was my first story ever. I wrote this back when I first started writing, so yea. And I'm glad you liked it. I hope you read the sequel soon!
3845504 to the spike bit, Amen
ok this story is really good, not my ship, but a good story, (my ship is Fizzle x Spike) now I have a problem with one thing
Spitfire,
her little thing didn't make much since, she is a Homosexual so why would she suggest a gay camp, and why would you lie about cheeting on someone, it's just a small nit pick but good story all around, you have added more to my library of Gay Spike Fics
4681506 Well Spitfire wasn't an open lesbian, and she tried to hide that fact from everypony (including herself). So she didn't want anyone to know about her secret. Including Soarin. So to hide that fact, she pretended to be an anti-gay and suggest a anti-gay camp.
And for the other thing. She lied to Soarin and said that she cheated on him in a letter that he wrote. Because she couldn't face him personally. Also. In her mind, say that she was a lesbian and led Sorain on for a year, sounded worse that saying he just cheated on him.
So I guess that raps this comment up. And if you have anymore questions just ask. (Also keep in mind, this was my first story ever. And back the I wasn't very good with plot. I guess you could say) :)
'To cure the gay' oh I laughter so hard at that, I couldn't get Ralphie May's voice out of my head
Ok it had a bit of grammar and spelling mistakes but all in all a good story
4713288 Thank you :)
I don't mean to be rude, but your special talent is not writing. If you're having fun with it then keep it up, that's all that really matters for your skill level.
4746437 You have to remember this WAS my first story ever
And I have not gotten an editor for this story yet. But I will someday. 
At first I thought she was going to say Mailman. Mailmare. Mailman.
If Celestia is his adoptive mom, than wouldn't she be deadbeat? He lived with Twilight...
4748415 hahaha.. your funny
4713272 1. You're User photo is perfect for that.
2. I imagined Peewee Herman's voice.
4748472 Turns out Spits has quit the temper as a mailman.
She yelled at one of her employees so much, her eyes went off.
Since then, she's gotten yelled at each day for rolling her eyes.
I am loving this so far whats next.
somewhere in a distant part of the galaxey master yoda "disterbance in the force i feel"
it was pinkie