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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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The sequel to Twilight's Secret Stories! A month later, the girls come over to Twilight's house for a sleepover. hilarity ensues, and a huge discover is made! How will Twilight ever get out of this one?!

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great story! XD ApplePie

"I guess I owe you my entire boutiqe.":rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

The story is short, characters are somewhat bland and don't really have personalities, there are grammar and story structure issues. Having said that, I have read much worse stories on here. And the idea of Twilight having an entire secret library with shipfics about her friends is very amusing to me. Points for that. The ending also works.

2725102 don't be to critical. it was a funny story.

Pretty funny story, but I kind of don't believe that they do everyone of those actions accidentally or coincidentally.

It's spelled "canon", not "cannon".

In other news, good story!

2769358
And here I thought that was a play on words because it would turn into a real party.

no tienes idea de las carcajadas que me dieron al leerlo me encanto

3399267

Lo mismo digo! God, this was hilarious! And Applejack, don't take Rarity's boutique, you remember what happened last time you had in Magical Mystery Cure.

There are not enough words in my vocabulary to describe the sheer amount of win in this story. I laughed so hard I cried.

Not bad. Interesting idea.... hmm.... you have given me ideas. I will have to decide if they would be able to be made into a good story.

4095089

There are not enough words in my vocabulary to describe the sheer amount of win in this story.

Eenope, but their is a image

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:/:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

BESSSST SHIIIIPP!!!!!!!

Of mane six

Twilight: "I ship all my friends...":twilightblush:
Friend: "well then":pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::applejackconfused::raritydespair::fluttershyouch::facehoof:
Pinkie Pie: "Time to ship me and Twi":pinkiehappy:
Me: "I WANT MOAR":trollestia:

She wouldn’t mind if this became cannon.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Why do I have a slight feeling that there's going to be another sequel?

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