When Sunset Shimmer steals Twilight's crown she ventures into a new world with humans who play some card games! She then meets Yugi Muto and his friends. She learns Duel Monsters from Yugi's grandpa, and in order to win her crown back she must beat the best of best including Sunset Shimmer who herself is a famous duelist. Twilight must also help Yugi with his own enemy Marik.
When ever cards are used that have different effects in the Anime they will have their Anime effects such as Joey's Skull Dice and Graceful Dice cards along with a few others.
Cover art done by me.
Head proof reader: Whiteeyes
Co-proof reader: themouthofmush
Chapters (13)
Nothing like a good pony-oh story. I really hope this keeps going.
Please check mine out
A lot of editing is needed for this piece just on the grounds of grammar, spelling, and word choice. I honestly have to ask if English is your first language, and if you would be interested in a beta reader? Otherwise, this story has some real potential.
2849636 I am interested in a beta reader, but I've haven't found one yet. And also yes English is my primary language. If you know of any please let me know through a private message. And thanks for the compliment.
2849753 I'm willing to be a beta reader. I'll send you a pm later with editing suggestions.
Looks promising, might I suggest that future chapters be a bit longer though, but beside that this looks good. Also and this is just more of personal idea. Will we also see Yami Bakura in this fan fic, he's my favorite Yugioh villain.
2850463 The reason I made this chapter a bit short was to see what type of response it would get, and what people think of the story's potential. And Yes Yami Bakura will be in their.
2850529 Well then I say keep writing!
I was going to do something similar to this with Zexal, but looks like you beat me to the chase. Besides, I've got far too many stories to work on for that.
Either way, welcome to Duelist Unit.
KUNAI WIT CHAIN!!!!!!
cant say im liking ur duel format, and ur avoidance of contractions just pulls me out of the story even more...
Good job, the new duel with Joey is much better than the first draft. A much more interesting duel.
I for one thinks the story is progressing well, the only question I ask is, is every chapter going to be dedicated to a single episode Battle City because if I remember my battle city correctly.... it was a long tournament it took 2 whole seasons to finish up. But besides that curiosity I say... I wish to see more please.
I like the duel format, it makes what's going on really clear, something other yugioh stories forget to do.
I wonder how twi will react to Yami Yugi?
2877790 The reason I did this chapter based off one episode because I wanted the tournament to start off on its own chapter which will be chapter 3. So future chapters will have at least have a total of 2 episodes within them (usually duels in the show take up at least 2 episodes). I understand what your saying. So next chapter will have Yugi vs the Rare Hunter. It may include Joey and Twilight dueling but I'd have too see how long the duel overall is again.
Hurray!
A new chapter. Been quite some time, but it was worth it keep up the good work. 
Just hope the next wait won't be so long.
3022184 Sorry its been over a month. I was on vacation for a week, and it took a while to get the chapter perfect. I'll try to get the chapter out as soon as possible, but with summer being close to over updates may be a bit slower. But thanks for waiting.
epic
2850529 a bit to fast for my tastes but still good you should build up their friendship so she tells them when she ready to it funny when i'm reading a story i go in to this really good writer mode and when i do stories my self i'm like um what to do with out totally killing my story with some Gary Stu character
Will these new representatives be OCs or actual canon characters?
3059196 Actual Cannon Characters. Great Question though.
okay, few things to talk about
1: the duel format- while it makes things easy to follow, it feels...wierd to read.
2: the moving to other locations- you dont need to do that every time. simply say something like "back at X duel", and lead in to whatever was going on, as that really hurts the pacing...
3: grammer- we have spell check for a reason, if it doesnt give you what you want, then use the ignore or add to dictionary command.
otherwise, this is a fairly good story, just suffering from general pacing and other issues (i have the same problems with pacing as well, but it gets better the more you write.)
Despite a few grammatical and spelling errors, this is a really good story.
Like kaijinzero said, the pacing thing can be fixed, but I digress.
Keep up the good work!
When will you're next update be?
3182990 The chapter is already completed. It's in the beta reading process. Once it's read and edited I will post it.
This is shaping up to be a great Yu-gi-oh fic!
Though I wish I could submit my deck to be in the fic, my deck has cards from 2011... So unless you're willing to pull a few strings, I doubt I could get my deck into a good fic.
But onto the constructive criticism, I think that your grammar needs a bit of work, although you mistyping monster as ,oyster has me laughing for a while, Frigging oysters
3202683 Well i'm glad you are enjoying it so far. After this story is over I will probably write another Yugioh fic with more current cards. So once I start getting ideas for that maybe your deck will be used. Never give up on your deck! I still use Dragunity's even though they are kind of old.
3203193 Yeah, but then again, I think that my deck would fit relatively well for a rare hunter, a somewhat competent one at that
3203208 My deck personally is half magical mosnters and Half Physical [MIne is sort of mix of Yugi's and Joey's
Sorry it's taking so long to update
. The chapter is complete, but I haven't heard back from my beta reader. Thank you all for being patient with me!
I will try to get it out once it's beta read. Thanks! 
3257196 I am so sorry! School has been crushing me! Mercy! Proofread ing submitted!
3257722 It's alright.
. I have had a lot of things on my plate as well. I had to make the chapter a bit shorter because of this. 
To everyone else. Update coming soon!
really an belt and why dose yugi have all that power come on element
of kindness and the millenium puzzle! yeah that is not op at all.
but so far 9/10
The Element of Kindness as far as we know has no power when it isn't in the complete set, so right now it is only a belt buckle for Yugi so it isn't really a power-up.
3261277 Tell that to Goldenlink1001 not me!
3261057 Goldenlink10001 It doesn't have power unless the crowns power is there. Since the crown is the central power that channels the power of friendship through the other elements. So right at this point in the story it doesn't have power.
3261708 sorry let me rephrase that how much power dose he need an element the god cards and the puzzle you thoughing to much on yugi
3262644 You see Yami is the one who actually uses the god cards, and he is not the element of kindness Yugi is. The puzzle's power is shared through them both. Besides Yugi can't just the element whenever he wants. The element is put away just as god cards are until it's necessary.
Next we see butt kicking action, but you need to put a twist in like Sombra appearing from the shadow realm, because think about it the shadow realm in a place of shadows and Sombra is the king of all shadows.
Hey everyone! I have finished chapter 6 and I'm just waiting for my beta reader to send me to the proof reading. Just wanted to give you guys the heads up!
I'm so sorry this took so long to complete!
It was finished a while ago but my proofreader didn't reply in over a month. I decided to get a co-proof reader in the form of themouthofmuch (totally check him out by the way). He is the one who proofread this chapter. I will strive to have the next chapter done by the end of the month, and early January at the latest.
hope you enjoy it!
Well the Hooded dude is Shiny didn't suspect that one
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Hm well that was the intention!
I like the idea, but this is rather hard to read, mind if I give it a rewrite? I'm a rather big fan of Yugioh myself.
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Thanks for the offer, but I like the way my story is formatted. I can see why you think it's hard to read. I included the duel plays with the dialogue so people could see the game in any way they wanted
well crud
thinking of something twilight