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Rarity: a pokemon trainer from the Equestria region is going on a journey with her sister Belle or as she calls her Sweetie Belle. Rarity's goal to become top coordinator of the Sinnoh region is a pretty big dream. Luckily, she has her trusted Glaceon Diamond and her Delcatty Opalescence to help her reach the top. She meets new people and places with her sister and her pokemon by her side. She even meets some old friends from back in Equestria....
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will anybody from the pokemon shows be in it
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Yes. I would tell you but SPOILERS. If you think about it for a bit you'd probably guess at least one of the characters.
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssss.
I will read this and i will till you wut I think.
I'm glad you used Rarity having a Glaceon. It's like common sense, for me anyways, she would have one. I even named my Shiny Glaceon in Y 'Rarity'.
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Well thank you. The reason she is shiny is because Rarity loves sparkles and parts of her body sparkles so it will make glaceon aka Diamond look gorgeous on the contest stage. Oh and hers the poll link to vote for a member of Rarity's team.
http://poll.pollcode.com/39882945
I lick wut I see so far its not bad at all. can you give me a hint on the 3 starters pokemon sweetie will pick.
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She actually won't be picking any starters. You'll see why in chapter 2: Sweetie's Partner. I would tell you but Spoilers.
darn well I gest I can what.
I like what you did here,
Oh by the way my jaw is getting better fast, and I am getting
Lots of support on Facebook. I would like to ask you is you could
Spread the news about what happened to me on your next chapter.
And so far I like you store keep on the good work,I will look forward to your next chapter
Good chapter.
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thank you.I worked hard on it.
I sure hope Ava will be fine, also like the chapter
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Thanks, and you will have to find out. And chapter 11 of Twilight's Journey in Battle City has been sent in for proofreading.
just a few mistakes here and there (Prof. Rowan and Gallade is misspelled) and theres a poll code right in the middle of the text, but otherwise, pretty good.
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Well I don't have a proofreader yet. Are you interested in doing it for his story?
Pony Kid
uh, maybe in the next chapter could you explain why Ava the Eevee has a scar on her eye? If you would i'd appreciate it. If you do then thanks...
4567631
I was going to explain that actually. You'll get your explanation.
Good chapter I like it.
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Thank you.
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I am planing on my first story here to be a mlp/Pokemon cross over so story like this 1 give me inspiration for my own.
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I'm happy it gave you inspiration. It makes me feel good to feel like I am inspiring other writers. May I ask is it going to be with the games or the tv show? I will definitely check it out when its online.
4590745 Kind of both yet nether it is a universe where Pokemon has always
been their and their is no regions Their is no gym battles but their might be contests their are battles and it is a self insert I Have some realy good idea I have yet to see in fan fiction here I just need an edit a proof read and some 1 to help me with dialog I am good for the most part with dialog but I still need help to make share this story is great
4590816
Well I could help you if you need it. I am very familiar with pokemon and i would glad to help.
4590881 Thanks I can pm you with the base idea in a little bit.
i REALLY like this story
hope to read more soon
4622151
Well the way I choose to update it is when I am waiting for proofreading for the next chapter of my main story. And during that time I work on this one. I am glad you are liking it. Any specific thing you liked?
Good story so far. The only thing I see that really bothers me is misspelled Pokemon names.
And I was wondering if you would use Kalos Pokemon since you mentioned the region. Shining's Aegislash answered that question.
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Yea pokemon from all every region will be in the story. The pokemon characters from the show will have their original teams.Others will have teams that can have pokemon from every region.
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And I will make sure to spell them correctly. Pokemon names can be hard to spell. Sorry. I don't have a proofreader to help me go over things like that.
Would you be interested in being my proofreader?
4622186 i like how there is a bit of a differences when it comes to how Rarity treats Sweetie Belle in the end she takes her and douse not try to get Sweetie Belle to just go with her 2 friends i think if the tv show would have had it Rarity would of keep trying to not go with Sweetie Belle till they left. but you had her give in after apple jack talked to her and she gave in which i think she would of still keep at it. but you took it and made Rarity be a bit different then the show which shows a bit of your own tart into it which i like a lot
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Thank you. Before writing this story I rewatched SisterWhooves Social again and I took inspiration from the moment where AJ explains to Rarity about being sisters. And this is an alternate universe so Rarity isn't the exact same as the show universe but still has most of her defining traits. Thats what I was going for to be honest.
4622321 glad to here that as i said i really enjoyed what you got so far and can't wait to read more
but do take your time as well
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Don't worry I do take my time with these. Next chapter will be Round 1 of the contest and it's going to be awesome. And we get introduced to Rarity's main rival which will be revealed once the poll is over. That ends Sunday BTW. I am glad you are enjoying it. After reading tons of pokemon fics very few focus on the contests which are in my opinion a lot more interesting than the gym actual battles in most cases. So thats why I made that the focus of the story.
4622351 i can understand but i am kinda wondering what type of trainer is Sweetie Belle going for???
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You'll have to find out what it will be in the end, but in the story she will be searching for what she wants to do. Just kind of how like she searches for her talent in the show. Rarity is the main focus after all. You'll just have to wait my friend...
4622399 i get it can't wait to find out
4622226 Thanks, but I have to decline your offer. I'm afraid I'm a fair bit uncomfortable with it. I will however, say this right here that will fix most of your issues. Most of it (80% at least) was capitalization.
1) In the Pokemon universe, Pokemon is always capitalized, as is anything pertaining to Pokemon, like Poke Balls, and the Poke Mart. If you can get the accent on the e in Microsoft Word, that would also be great. ...If you use Word, that is.
2) Pokemon species names are always capitalized, also. I.E. "Honedge" instead of "honedge". Same goes for the species in the Pokedex entry. For instance, Aegislash is the "Royal Sword" Pokemon. You did that correctly, so keep that up.
3) Finally, the names of attacks are also always capital, like "Quick Attack" instead of "quick attack".
Also, and really, this should go for everything in life, never be afraid of doing a bit of research. I've done PLENTY of research to get things right for ideas I had in the past. Also, I paid in a Pokemon battle for not doing research when I had my Hydreigon out against another player's Claydol and it used Dazzling Gleam against me. It didn't outright KO Hydreigon, but it dealt about 80% of Hydreigon's HP in damage and I was shocked. I didn't even know it could learn that! If I had known whether or not Claydol commonly use Dazzling Gleam, I might have thought twice about sending my Hydreigon in and getting it KO'd so quickly.
Hope I was able to help, even a little bit. I'd like to see this story through to the end.
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It's ok I understand, and thanks for the tips.
Really love the chapter! Keep up the good work!
Just a tip before my reading: I love shipping Sweetie Belle. Ship her with a colt. Recommendably Button Mash, with his Pokemon Treeco!
Oh, and now that I read chapter 5, please do not merge the anime with this... It will go sour if you do. Trust me.
4648888 I actually already am, and I think it's going well. And There will be no shipping in this story. I don't particularly like shipping to be honest with you. So no Button Mash in this one. I already have a story that is completely merged with it's anime counterpart and people seem to enjoy it. I know that is just your opinion, but this is my story and I can tell it anyway I would like.
4650280 I'm not trying to boss you or anything, but some stories that merge with the anime get as bad and cheesy as the anime. I just don't want a story with potential to go down that route. Do what you want, I am not gunna stop you.
LOVE IT can't wait to read more
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Well I am not following it exactly but major events will happen. I am more using it as a template if you follow. You'll see in time. I will only show 1 gym battle of ashes. I love the show and it's cheesiness but this won't be as cheesy. I won't make it bad trust me.
4650406 glad you are liking it. Any specific thing you loved?
4650464 Rarity show it sounded really butterfly
I'm rooting for Rarity all the way
Strange how Brock didn't go nuts over Rarity. HMMMMMMMMMM.