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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 19: The Rifts
The Doctor and his friends are busy celebrating Hearth's Warming Eve when an amnesiac, human Twilight Sparkle from another dimension appears with a cry for help. During the trip to this alternate world, the Doctor will have to save old friends, make new allies, face old enemies, and confront one of his greatest foes yet: himself.
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YES! It's finally here! The beginning of the end... Of Season 1 of course.
Wait, is this the girl with the wand from Thalia's memories from "The Good, The Bad, and the Derpy"?
Like the Avada Kedavra curse from Harry Potter?
Like the Cybermen from "Nightmare in Silver".
It feels so good to say this again. Cue Doctor Whooves theme:
Wow this is great! The Doctor is celebrating Hearth's Warming, and I just finished watching the Doctor Who Christmas special "The Time of the Doctor".
And there were Cybermen in the last chapter and in "The Time of the Doctor" too. Serendipity!
You got Pinkie Pie being meta!
This is awesome. I can't wait for the next installment hopefully soon.
oh....snap
Will The Doctor regenerate after this season?
Great. I'm all caught up and now i gotta wait... Juuust great...
Yes, an update!
Demons run! It looks like a good pony is going to war!
I wonder if the Doctor is bringing just Twilight, Derpy, and Donna or all the Mane 6 and Spike as well. 
That would go along with the "A Good Man Goes to War" vibe I'm starting feel from this.
I remember that the humanized Twilight from your story The Impossible Girl was also called Twi and suffered from amnesia. Are you making references to your own stories now?
I can't help but feel this part is inspired by Star Wars.
Well, that was a great update that sets up what I am sure will be a wonderfully exciting story! I can't wait to see what comes next and find out what's been happening to everypony else that got trapped in the other universe. As always, keep up the good work.
So you think you can just slip a Star Wars quote by me huh!? Do ya!? I don't think so buster!
Great chapter as always!.
I think I know how the regular Doctor and the Discorded Doctor are conected. Discord Whooves is using his old personality of the War Doctor, except now its 10 times worse.
Oohh, mysterious male stranger. What have you been up to Twi?
Yes, an update! Kind of disappointed the whole Mane 6 won't be joining the Doctor, Derpy, and Twilight on this adventure. At least Spike is joining along. And the Doctor does have a point of about it being a good idea that they have friends back in their home universe.
Oh no! Not Derpy's muffins!
And the Doctor's kidneys. And he loved those kidneys' color. 
Is that like Floo powder? Wands and floo powder. Isn't this supposed to be Equestria and not the Wizarding World of Harry Potter?
Mysterious hooded male stranger. Can't wait to find out who he is. Best guess Shining Armor or... Flash Sentry.
I didn't know I could be more intrigued by this but I am. Keep up the good work.
3778482 Fingers crossed it's Flash Sentry.
3778467 I would have thought that. However Discord Whooves is from a previous existing Pony Ask Tumblr. There's even apparently a direct reference to it in the last episode "The Rifts".
"This world is sick. What this world needs… is a Doctor." ~Mister Saxon, Master No. Six
3778786 Again this is just a theory.
Plus...I know next to nothing about Discord Whooves. Let me tell you what I do know:
1. The Doctor is brooding over everything he's done as says he regrets doing it.
2. The Master is involved in someway.
3. He's in a weird relationship with Twilight, and Octavia.
And that's about it. Can you summerize the story of Discord Whooves for me?
Because I really want to know what happens.
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You can find a good and thorough summation of the Discord Whooves story at this link.
3782157 Thanks man.
3778775 I'll bet that the guy's the Human Spike equivalent.
The march of the Cybermen
I like this chapter but I could a little more Donna Noble sassy ness to it.
Oh mysterious figure please please please PLEASE be Flash!!!!
3807427 I agree
well ok.
I knew it!
Flash Sentry in the house! This is going to be like Equestria Girls except more awesome!
I saw that! That was in Equestria Girls.
So, human Lyra likes hooves. I still await seeing pony Lyra go nuts over Donna's hands.
Did.. Did Human Pinkie get... Upgraded?
So not upgraded. Wait. Did Discord Whooves turn Human Pinkie into some kind of Human Cupcakes Pinkie?
Discord Whooves has Daleks too! Oh, wait of course he does.
That's going to be fun to see. He's like an old school Master. Not surprised it that's where he got the idea.
Ah yes, the return of Human Princess Luna.
He's dead! Who? Everybody! Another reminder of how this is also kind of like Harry Potter.
This is neat. Them meeting alternate universe versions of themselves... Wait a minute! Cybermen walking around everywhere. This is supposed to be like "Rise of the Cyberman" and "Age of Steel"!
I see what you did there.
That's like Mickey and Ricky!
Well, this story is becoming progressively more interesting. All the pieces are finally coming together. Anywho, I eagerly await the next installment. Keep up the good work.
3839053 To talk about that whole "Discord Whooves" business, I think that a more appropriate comparison would be to refer to him as 'The Valeyard' instead of 'The Master'.
3839499 A concede that valid point.
I never got an update notification for this.
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A glitch possibly?
I like these story's I have read all of them but I only just got my account so
I also want to do a bit of RP in my comments from now on, don't know if that's weird or not so
oh and have these for an amazing story line 
What? Did you mean this?
FLAAAASH!!!!!
Great chapter as always!
....Clara? oh....Sh*t... I knew she would make an appearance here. Donna! I miss your sassiness!
Clara Cameo...
OUT OF BUCKING NOWHERE!!!!
This series gets more awesome with every chapter.
I think you mean "from".
I've heard all that before. It sounds like when all is said and done, Donna's going to want to go back home.
Subtle Season 4 reference.
Wait. Impossible Savior. It can't be...
Oh my gosh! It is Clara! So, can Clara only exist as a human? There's no pony Clara running around Equestria somewhere.
Bad Wolf? But as a pony. Don't tell me Bright Eyes is going jump into the Heart of the TARDIS or something.
Well this story continues to surprise me. I can't wait for more. Keep up the very good work.
Mother bucker! That's ingenious!
Wait, if there's a Clara in human Equestria, then there should be a Clara in normal Equestria.
Oswin! OSWIN!!!!!! Why do I keep getting surprised! I think that you have to be my favorite fanfic author ever cause every time I read your stories I get just the right amount stuff. You never go overboard and you never hold back to make something out of nothing. I bloody love you!!!!!!
Wait WHAT!!? Clara Oswin-Oswald is here!?
3915291 she go's where she is needed in the doctors time line so there dusnt need to be
geez, with a cameo of that caliber on the Doctor side, who can you drop in that hasn't appeared on the MLP side to even it out? I vote Princess Erroria.
OK, first let me say that you are an extremely talented writer, and that you shouldn't take what I say next too hard.
This story can only end on two notes;
1) an OK note
Or 2) an extremely bad note.
Let me explain. You're adding a huge amount of villains, and it's cluttering up the story, in much the same way that Spider-Man 3 had way too many villains. What you should have done was pick, at most, two villains and rolled from there.
Again, you are an extremely talented writer, and you should in no way take this the wrong way. Please end this story well and soon, I'm not sure how many more cliffhangers I can take.
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Thank you for your constructive criticism and, don't worry, I didn't take what you said too hard or take it the wrong way.
But, don't worry, I have a plan set out with all of the various aspects introduced in this "episode" (and previous "episodes") that will lead to payoffs in this "season's" finale (and beyond
), which I hope you and the other readers of my stories will find satisfying. 
4018578 Thank you....
Why is everything Donna says in these stories awesome!?
The My Little Pony Equestria Girls: Rainbow Rocks trailer!
Not if you're Catholic!
Sorry, I couldn't help it. 
That was a theology joke.
I think you mean "too".
I like how Twi going on the mission even though her friends don't want her to kind of reminds me of Twilight in "Princess Twilight".
And now, Donna, Twilight, and Spike find themselves in the crystal caverns beneath Canterlot filled with Daleks.
:oi:
I liked how the chapter didn't start off that exciting, and then it started to get exciting in the middle. And then it ended.
I look forward to more of this, especially as the plot continues to thicken so much that you can't legitimately describe it as thickening but rather congealing and caramelizing. Keep up the good work. 
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I don't see how there are too many villains here. Really there is one villain. Discord Whooves. The Cybermen and Daleks are his vast hoard of faceless mooks.
Well IF those rifts have grown powerful enough is it possible?
This chapter is creepy as hell
P.S: Clockwork, do you have a fob watch by any chance?
Donna is kicking a Dalek!
And the award for the most awesome character in these stories with the best lines goes to Donna Noble!
Wrackspurts! Luna Lovegood's imaginary creatures from Harry Potter.
Turn left. I see what you did there.
The Nestene Consciousness?
And finally we have the first formal appearance of Big Bad of this story Discord Whooves! And Cyber-gorillas. Where do you come up with this stuff? It must be fun to live inside your head.
And Human Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Shining Armor got turned into Cybermen. I am now sad.
I knew it!
Human Pinkie Pie got turned into Human Cupcakes Pinkie Pie. 
First a sexy story you wrote got featured and then you updated this story. Today was a good day.
I am satisfied and yet still want more. Much more. I eagerly await the next installment. Keep up the very good work. 
Is that Pinkie Pie from the Smile song were she killed everypony?!
4080585 well I think he got the guerrillas from the episode the next doctor where there were monkey like cybermen made from animals, but that's just a guess
4084696 Dang it! Why didn't I see that episode!?