Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare...
A strong, brown coated unicorn stood with in the stage lights. He didn't seem all too bothered by the echoing voices, but with his red hair covering one of his eyes, it was fairly hard to tell.
Chaotic Noteworthy...
...is an Earth Pony with a colored ice-cream cone glued to his head...
"No. Not really. I'm a unicorn. I'm just not magically gifted."
Chaotic Noteworthy...
...uses book pages as a blanket...
"N... once. I forgot where my cot was, and the library in the Castle was cold that day. I said I was sorry."
Chaotic Noteworthy...
...Is the leader of the 10th division...
"I am. Thank you--"
Which means that he's such a bad leader...
...They gave him the -tenth- best team...
That's worse than "F"...
"The number doesn't mean that!"
Chaotic Noteworthy...
...believes anything his superiors tell him...
"It doesn't mean that! It's just the tenth filled team."
I bet you were picked last foot kick ball...
"Ugh!"
Chaotic Noteworthy...
...has it bad for Luna...
"T--"
Now you know--
No...
...let him talk...
Did you ever write any poetry for her...
...Girly-colt...?
"Actually. I have. Let me just--" Before another word could leave him, the stage opened up under him and produced a pair of giant gloved hands. Swiftly, the two hands grabbed the stallion and dragged him under with only a short yelp from him.
Oh no...
...He left before he could read poetry...
Guess the show's over...
...Whatever...
Character from Chaotic Note.
Go look at a story featuring the character in Blowing Through the Pages..
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XD , did you both collaborate on this?
Walked right into that one.
Does this mean you're doing OCs again?
Hilarious!
Suggestion for next.
Candy Cane from my story, "Whatever it Takes, I Love You."
Pip must hate poetry...Who knew?
2557139 Pip likes poetry just fine... he just doesn't want anyone moving in on his girl...
Pip wins! FATALITY!
Damnit Pip! The poem was really good too!
(Thank you so much Overlord!)
2557030
Nah. I just sent the information, and he did the rest.
2557139
I think he's in denial. I bet he doesn't even know how to write poetry.
Unappreciative colts these days...
2557697>>2557991
He may have won the battle, but he hasn't won the war yet.
2558067 He has the god of chaos and a literal love bug on his side. And, he's friends with Luna from the get go. He won long before he started
2558121
Grr.
2558126 You jelly, n you know it. :3
2558131
S- Shut up.
I'm a captain of my own troops, and guard ponies don't get jealous.
Plus, I'm Luna's personal scribe, so I think I'm perfectly close to her.
2558143 Leader of the 10th division... you're an afterthought, more so than the divisions ahead of you...
and you may be close to Luna in proximity, you still aren't close to her in affections. Pip shares dreams with her. You will not.
Quiver in shame and misery that you've been out matched and out classed by a little colt.
2558157
Pip isn't the only one that shares dreams with her. Luna has dreams shared from everypony!
And so what if I am a leader of a 10th division? We're just as important as the ones before us! Every soldier has their merits!
And Pip is way younger than me. He has yet to experience more than me in life.
2558199 Luna dream walks through other ponies to guide them when they need it... When she visit's Pip, it's more than that... and far more frequent...
Every soldier does have it's merits, but you (and your men, unfortunately) are merely still just back up, potentially not to be used for any reason...
And he may be younger, but that just means he'll last longer than you will, old timer. Plus, again, his foster parents are gods, whom could (and probably would) allow him to live longer if he wished it. Your lifespan is merely a flicker (even less because of the position in life you took as a soldier... oh wait, you're 10th division. You'll never be called into action. Nevermnind then, I'm sure you'll live a full life), and yet you hope to be with a goddess? Heh heh heh...
2558235
I am with the goddess, and you're ignorant about one fact. I'm not a part of Equestria's army. I'm the leader of Magistrum's 10th division. We don't stop for any rest, and will defend Equestria at any cost. Our country has seen more action than Equestria because we border right next to the other countries. Equestria is more or less next to any other country other than ours.
And this?
There's no way you could possibly know if that's truth or not. It's not physically possible unless if Pip told you, and I'm sure you two never met at all. You don't seem to be the kind of type to spend your time hanging around schoolyards like a stalker.
2558323 You're still just the 10th division. The back up. The unneeded bench warmers.
And I know Pip... I know alot of sentient creatures... i visit dreams too, to provide the necessary evil... it was required here in Equestria (as any other place in the universe with any other species) while Luna was still on the moon, and is still required to this day... Poor little soul... his nightmares consist of loneliness... they only lessened on that fateful Nightmare Night. Oh, what irony.
I have seen some of his dreams, as i have seen the dreams of others... Do not fool yourself, little mortal. You know even less about the universe than you make yourself believe.
2558352
Tch. You know, you're not the first guy I've met who thinks all so high and mighty about himself and thinks of others as little. They all ended up as miserable failures in the end. I'm sure you've heard quite a few of them, and could name them off the top of your head.
2558404 And yet, here you are, trying to glorify your ranks and position by the princess' side. And, you are right, I have seen those kinds of beings. The universe is kinda funny though. Some of them get their just desserts, and some don't.
But getting back to the crux of things, it doesn't really matter what you have or what he has (despite myself ripping on you for it). Because, even if you were on an even playing field, you'd still be lacking in Luna's affections. And for one reason only...
... friendship. The one thing Pip can give her, and the one thing you can't. You can be her ally, her scribe, her soldier, but when you get down to it, you are just a helper to the princess and goddess of the moon. Pip, the innocent little Pip, gave here a chance as being seen by pony folk as normal. As a friend. As a loved one.
True, he's still young yet, and it will take time for him to ever be qualified to have any higher relationships with anyone, but in the mean time, he can build on that friendship. Grow with her, as she grows with him. Creating one of the strongest bonds on this planet... He has a head start, and unless something happens to him or between them (universe forbid), then there is no way you can catch up.
(OOC: BTW, great RPing with you dude. You're conviction is fantastic)
2560036
You obviously hadn't read any of my stories if you don't think my
self-insertOC is friends with Luna.Now while I enjoy RP-ing, I think you and I are overflowing the comments with it. Overlord-Flinx probably doesn't appreciate that.
2560049 Actually, yeah, i just met you, and decided to go with the flow. Sorry for not doing enough research.
2560062
I suppose. Also, I count my RP-ing with Gamer Luna and some others as well.
So yeah... pretty much my Brony life in centered around this website. If it's gone, then I have nothing else to do but ME3.
2560067 I'm glad i'm not that fragile in things to do... though, if this site did go, i would pitch the mother of all bitch fits... mostly because i didn't save any of the stories i'm working on onto my hard drive...
2560082
I use a flash drive. Much more safer since I carry it with me at all times. (Except to the shower.)
2560088 Naturally. Well, good luck with your fics, and don't let my Pip-una shipping get you down.
2560100
It's not. (Cause frankly foalcon kinda creeps me out, so I try to avoid that a little.)
2560106 I didn't mean it in that way. Friendship is just as much a viable relationship as romance. Besides, Pip isn't old enough to get into the heavier things.
2560120
Oh... right.
I'm a dum-dum. (Likes the lollipop. Except with only 1/2 of the sweet and all of the dumb.)
2560128 Eh, it's fine. It's easily forgotten that the term "ship" can mean something much lighter than what it's usually used for.
2560138
I blame the general Fandom term, "shipping."
Well, I just going to take my leave now. I wonder who's going to be in the next OC chapter.
2560142 Probably someone no one will suspect.
Chao
2560154
Laters. (Until in the next chapter's comments.)
Two giant gloved hands?
Master hand, is that you?
2561824 even adults need an adult...
2561175
Could be.