As I opened my eyes, what I saw in front of me shocked me. There are 6.....creatures staring at me with curiosity, probably because they have never seen anything like me before. I know they are females. Need proof? All I have to say is, Boobs. 'Nuff said.
(Anthro Ponies)
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Hi guys. Hope you enjoy reading this!
(On a different note, THANK GOD THERE'S AN ANTHRO TAG NOW!)
Good start. I'd like to see how this progresses.
Applejack sounds like a drunk more than a southerner.
With the current situation I am in, I will need to see if i want to continue this.
Most probably I am gonna continue this.
not bad few tiny grammar mistakes hear and their overall im very interested in where the story will go
Never never NEVER EVER use shorthand like u and ur. You sound like some twelve year old idiot.
nice start cant wait for more
this looks like a great story,but the only thing I saw,is you used phrases like "pointed a finger" "held a hand out"....but they are ponys right nice story though!
Your main character is acting far too nonchalant and unrealistic for someone who experienced not just a recent family death but also warped to another world full of mutant anthro-horses.
hmmm. you have cought my attention
POST MORE! POST MORE! POST MORE!
This seems nice can you please continue?
Source pic and write more chapters plz
..Oh dear...the picture has Titzillas.
One thing that always gets me in HiE fics is that why can the human just read ponies personalities so easily?
2370405 here's the source pic
http://supersheela.deviantart.com/art/My-Giant-Pony-Sizeshift-is-Magic-306861848
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Get outta here, Portalmena! That's Chell's job to ask that!
(Haha, the portal reference was good, though.)
I can only imagine where this is heading. Let me check the tags....
Yup. Tags checked. Suspicions confirmed.
Sweet Mane 6 go public!
*Reads last sentence*
God doesn't have merciful intentions for you.
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>Was singing just moments earlier.
Terra is Earth's scientific name. Just like Luna is the moon's scientific name, and Sol is the sun's.
Thus the terms "extra-terrestrial", "lunar eclipse", and "solar system".
Pretty ok, for a roockie!
the birds sing and most of them dont speak 2374518
Nice chapter
Looks like a good start and a pretty introduction. I think I need to start worrying about people meeting PInkie for the first time though. Although she would get sad from a refusual I'm pretty sure her hair would just deflate from something as minor as this. (Then again I was proven wrong in the comic, maybe)
Okay not exactly sure where this is going, but it seems kind of normal at first. I wonder if the girls discussed about how they're going to get home.
:D yay next chapter soon please
Chapter 3 predition. chinese riot squards, mass panic over alien invastion and twilight finds the internet.
Your cover image alone chased me off.
This looks thrilling.
I'm kind of scare of what he is doing, the FBI could appear at any moment and want to take the main six, same for the CIA, I just saying he is risking a lot exposing them to the world
At this point, nothing could possibly go wrong!
I can proofread this for you. Let me know if you're interested.
this is such a great story!
2384174 Hmmmm.....I'll think about it.
Still call blows up in his face coming
2384028The story is set in Singapor acording to the frist chapter thats in china if i remeber corectly. so no cia or fbi will show thoe chinese riot squads and army are strong posibilty.
2384203 If you want to read something I've proofread, look up "My Big Human: Friendship is Expendable".
You might want to proofread some of the sentences and words. Anyway, this was a great chapter. I don't know why but "Being From Another World" reminds me a little bit of the anime "Haruhi Suzumiya". Especially when Pinkie was dressed in a read playboy bunny outfit. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
>"So how are us this place anyways?" Rainbow asked me, flying beside me
Should be= "So how far is this place anyways?" Rainbow asked me, flying beside me
Okay this is certainly a different take than the usual cliché of hiding aliens and everything. Are you making the character go, "I got aliens living in my home and I'm proud of it!" thing?
2384624 No good sir. Singapore is not in China. Singapore is actually located near Malaysia, connected by a bridge.
HMMM I WANDER WHAT ANTICS THEY'RE GONNA GET UP TO......
PLEASE BE SOMETHING FUNNY... LIKE THEIR SPELL WEARS OFF IN A CHANGE ROOM OR WHATS HIS NAME WALKS INTO THEM.....
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH
2387622 You are an evil person, good sir.:pinkiehappy
(Thnks for the idea!)
I KNOW I AM....... TEEHEEE
CAUSE I LIKE TO SEE THE WORST POSSIBLE SITUATION COME TO FRUITION AND MAKE STORIES FUNNY OR EMBARRASSING
2388402 Lol. Maybe I shall put that in the story....
2388620 YAAAAAAAAAAAAY (SAYS EVERYPONY EVER)
2388726 Like I said, MAYBE
AWWWWWW
je Why did Twilight and Dash suddenly want to play, seduction to Chris? and after biological class, oh well at least she will not experiment on him if their anatomy is identical. And is only 2 of them, its not like all 6 suddenly got interest.
Boy I really hope none of the girls in the stage was wearing skirt that, day or things could have become a little awkward. And thank god, none of the students ask for a visual of a pegazus anatomy, you know to see how the wings were attach and were the back end and the wing begin, that could be even more awkward