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Can the Twilight October evade the clutches of the Equestrian navy and bring glory to the Motherland?

When trust is betrayed and ideals are discarded, does the Twilight October have what it takes to survive?

Also, Pinkie is a shark.

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What's this "On hiatus" stuff?

I require more intense ponysub action, daring sea battles, vile betrayals, heroic rescues, suspense, action, adventure... and Fluttershy going "toot toot"!

This. Is. Wonderful.

RAWR! :pinkiehappy:

The motherland demands MORE.

..."roaring in precisely the way a shark doesn't."

Douglas Adams would be proud!

This is so wonderfully strange and funny...

Hey, twilight octoober, I remember reading this a lot of time ago! good to see you here ^_^

This fic is too good laughed the whole time

Oh god, this is perfect. XD

This is the most adorable fic I've read in a long time. :yay:

I was never sure if I could think of another part for this, so I originally labelled it 'on hiatus'.
Changed to 'completed' since another part would be a long time off, if ever.

Thank you!


Alas, a new idea for this story eludes me.
Although I did have an idea for a 'Murder on the Pony Express', which would be like a spiritual successor.

Adams is one of my favourite authors. Quotes like this sometimes come to mind and I suddenly can't imagine that anything else would fit.

That's exactly what I was going for.

Howdy Mime!


I'm glad you like it.

I couldn't help but wear a big, stupid grin on my face throughout this fic. It was just... so FUN. :D

why is this a complete story! there should be more of this:rainbowlaugh:

bravo, i haven't laughed like that in a long while... would love to see more of this.

and now that i think of it i would also love to see a picture of the room they're in... filled with pillows! :pinkiehappy:

for now though, keep up the great work and watch out for pinkiesharks :pinkiecrazy:

Damn that brightened up my day.

:rainbowhuh: Dude... What? I don't even... I think I'm okay with this. Very, very okay with this.

Mission accomplished!

Thank you! One must always be on the lookout for Pinkiesharks. Especially in custard.

I'm very glad to hear it.

Down that path insanity lies. Come join us, the waters soft and fluffy.

"That is where the fish live."
This is where the fish lives

This IS pure AWESOME!!!!

Please continue writing!

yay!:yay: for the Motherland! we will sink the capitalist dog's with wave after wave of torpedo's srtaight from the Party's factories!(get it party!)

and i am currently lovin this.... i demand more!

THE MOTHERLAND DEMANDS A SEQUAL! comrade you must write a sequal! the fate of the glorious motherland rest's apon it!

I... I- I'm in bloody tears I'm laughing so hard at this...
Whoooa... Headrush, forgot to breathe there for a minute.

Oh bloody hell they got Fluttershy! NOOOOO:fluttershbad:OOOOOO

Mother Russia story. Bahaha!

This. Is. Fabulous! :rainbowlaugh:

Ze Mozerland demandz a zequal to zis! Zis ztory haz enzpired millionz of our comradez to take up armz againzt ze threat zat iz Equeztria. Zo my brozher, i zalute you.
P.Z. if you cant understand this, try saying it out loud... not too loud... you sound kinda funny :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the good laugh.

Awesome story xD
No seriously, I'm smiling like an idiot. "roaring precisely like a shark doesn't"...That's what we call genius my friend :p

hmm yes I like this... please have some more soon... :fluttershysad:

56 weeks. Eh? Eh?


This. Is. So. Funny! :pinkiehappy:

Exactly what I needed, having just finished Background Pony. (Warning: though an excellent story, that is decidedly not a happy one.)

Back to the world of warm and fuzzy with Twilight October! Toot toot! :yay:

Okay, how did I not realise this had been posted on fimfiction? This story is freakin' hilarious. :rainbowlaugh: Love it just as much now as I did the first time I read it.

I'll rarely favorite a completed story, but this is most assuredly one of those times.

HEE! Cute lil' story >w<

502316 your second image is a ninja. because It's not visible.

This is so many kinds of awesome, words d not begin to describe it. Also, darnit! Now I wanna play!

Fantastic story! The final assault on the Fluttercopter had me in stitches :pinkiehappy:

I can't help wounding what pinkie is doing to fluttershy down there *wink* *wink* :rainbowlaugh:

"That is where the fish live."

Did he just quote the MST3K episode "The Touch of Satan"?

It's been over 3 years and this is still one of my favorite fics!

One of the best things I've ever read. At "Spike wasn't able to join us", I was almost prepared to skim the second chapter and downvote; it would've really sucked if you'd followed such a fun, fluffy, silly chapter with a chapter cursed by the one thing that drops a wet blanket on my good mood: Spike missing out on something that all six of his friends did together.

:moustache:: "I know nothing of which you speak, I am but a simple fisherman."

:rainbowhuh:: "Then what were you doing under the water?"

:moustache:: "That is where the fish live."

Can't argue with that.

But I would remove all these spaces at the beginning of every paragraph.

Oh my....
I had no idea this was a thing. And it is fantastic.

RainbowHawk this is Solar Command, move out and await orders.
RainbowHawk in position.
RainbowHawk release pillows. Now. Now. Now.
Range to target.
900 yards.
800 yards.
700 yards.
600 yards.
500 yards.
400 yards.
300 yards.
A white hoof wearing a shining gold shoe extends purposefully toward a small and functional looking red button, before pressing it after a brief moments hesitation.
*pillow explodes harmlessly*
Then a voice full of amusement speaks.
Now you understand RainbowHawk that pillow did not self-destruct, you heard it hit the pony. And I, was never here.
As a gold wallet embossed with a sunburst pattern was levitated in front of the Solar princess and opened to reveal a rushed drawing of a purple unicorn with a pillow impaled upon it's horn.


I have never felt so much joy. I have also never wanted Hasbro to adapt a fanfic into an actual episode more.

why no russian helicopters:fluttercry:

don't make fluttercopter cry

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