Sweetie Belle Sings to the moon. But her song attracts an unexpected guest.
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[hide message]Sweetie Belle Sings to the moon. But her song attracts an unexpected guest.
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D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW I ACTUALLY CRIED!!
BEAUTIFUL STORY MAN!

5 STARS FOR YOU!
Definitely wonderfully done! Heartwarming, pure and simple.
I believe it was Sweetie Belle who was heard to say once,
"D'aaawwww .... that's such a sweet story!"
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Wonderful, five stars!
Loved it. Happy Luna + happy CMC = awesome.
Oh dear god that was an absolute delight.
I hope you submitted this to EqD.
Aww, what a sweet little story! <^___^> I especially loved the ending. Oh Luna, you so adorably mischevious!
Happy mischievous Luna stories are the best!
3875
Oh, its been on the blog for quite a while.
I like the unique take on Luna. The story is an entertaining read.
Awww
Whats the name of the song that goes:
Hello darkness my old friend, Ive come to speak with you again
B/c I love it. When I saw it, I rembered it like CLICK.
4046 "The Sound of Silence" by Simon and Garfunkel, I think.
Remember this one from the EqD post. Still pretty dang adorable.
4048
Definitely The Sound of Silence, the only one of those (that wasn't named specifically) that I recognized off-hand.
A very fitting song for Princess Luna, I find myself thinking. Melancholy and hopeful at the same time.
D'aaaaawwww.....
aaawww I really loved the story, very cute. Managed to bring a huge smile and a few laughs from me.
Not cryable... but very heartwarming.
5 stars ALL the way
I Love This!!!!!!!!!
I Think Princess Luna Is The Most Beautiful Pony Ever And So Is Sweetie Belle. I Think They Would Be Perfect As Big/Little Sisters.......I FOUND A NEW STORY TO WRITE!!!!!!! lol But Thank You SOOOOOO Much For Writing This Your Awesome!!!!!!!
You know what's funny? The episode Sisterhooves Special. It contradicts with this story a bit, seeing as Rarity was mad at Sweetie Belle in that episode and made up in the end. Oh well, it was still a fine read and I'm sure this was written before the episode aired.
I like the way you portrayed Luna, making her a childlike but kindhearted ruler that would like nothing more than to be friends with others. It's a shame it wasn't canon, that would've been cool to see. Keep up the awesome work and keep on writing!
This is one of my absolute favourites. I really, really, really want more interaction between yer Celestia and Luna. For seriously!
Big sisters love you forever
:you ate my sandwich.....TO THE MOON
another great story, keep it up
This story is better than Sisterhooves Social... and it was published well before the episode played.
Superbly written and done. Thank you.
The Top Hat.
Nice Monopoly implemication there.
SO ADORABLE!
This story is astounding. I really, really love it. It's adorable, short, and sincere... It couldn't have been played out better. I've always liked the mischievousness of the princesses. I can't really find the words to describe how much I like this story. LOVE IT! Keep writing awesome fics!
Good story.
"Fly Me To the Moon" is one of the loveliest, most romantic songs ever.
Your portrayal of Luna in this story reminds me very much of a wonderful woman I knew years ago. All play and mischief and joy.
I love this! Two of my most favorite of ponies Sweetie Belle and Luna!
The cuteness! *head explodes*
D'AWWWwww...
that was beautyful
Ah, such a serene story... it's beautiful. Sometimes, when you're swamped with all the heavy action and pain in adventure and dark fiction... stories like this are a reminder of just what MLP is supposed to be about.
It's not a perfect world., sisters still fight and bad things happen. Feelings get hurt, and disasters come and go... but at heart, it is the imperfections of the world that let us see beautiful things like this.
The only thing I'd add is winding links into the story for the songs, for an extra depth.
3963 YOU KNOW NOTHING GUEST!
WONDERFUL story! i give it 4 1/2 fluttershys!



(this being the half
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My heart, it has no mouth. And it must HNNNNNNNNNG!
Manly tears!
This story was very heartwarming, thank you.




5 out of 5 mustaches for you good sir...
Naw.

Awesome work on this. Was adorable, sweet, and the length carried it through very nicely.
Loved this little shot between Luna and Sweetie.
Thanks for that reference to "The Sound of Silence", by Simon & Garfunkel. It's one of my favorite songs, and it really fits Luna. "And the people bowed and prayed / to the neon God they made"... I love that line in particular for Luna, because the ponies of 1000 years ago kind of made a "neon God" out of Celestia. It's good to see that someone else sees the connections. There's a lot of deep stuff in this, much of it being conveyed through the songs.
Beautiful, just beautiful
Goddamn beautiful my friend reminds me of my own sister.
Purple? I always thought Luna was dark blue.