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Martian


He's just this guy, you know?

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Comments ( 61 )

What a sweet little story. It's rare to find a story that is so easily described as heart-warming and fun.

Kudos, my good sir/madam.

I cannot dance yet I do all the time. Why? Because I like making people laugh at how stupid I look. I am getting better.

Um....Apple Bloom? Can you give me some lessons?

Wah sure!

Thank you! Tonight at....8? I don't want anypony to see me.

Nope. Thay maght think your thinkin' o' doin' sumthin' else.

But...but....fine. Just tell me when a good time is.

H'bout noon?

Fine. I'll be there noon tomorrow.

See ya then!

Bye Apple Bloom! And thanks again!

YOU'RE DANCING AT YOUR BEST WHEN YOU'RE FLAILING MADLY
Glad Applebloom understands how to ~DANCE~.

Seriously tho', beautiful story! Me likey long time.

When in doubt, just dance! Can't wait to read this tonight! :pinkiehappy:

Lovely story, I loved it :twilightsmile:

Edit: And I have just discovered the story is incomplete. :pinkiegasp:

Dude, you're awesome.

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Er, sorry; it actually is quite done. Just a little one-shot of good feels. I do have others stories with good feels to be given, and more coming soon. :twilightsmile:

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Aw... But still, I love how you write, and when accompanied with the music... Priceless :twilightsmile:

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Thanks kindly, glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

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:twilightsmile:

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I aim to give people the warm fuzzies, yes. Glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiesmile:

Just because you can't, doesn't mean you shouldn't

Me with writing

I love these sweet oneshots you write. They're short, but still very emotional and relateable for just about everyone. I just auto thumb anything you post because i know it will be good enough for it anyways.

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:pinkiegasp: One of these days I am going to publish an absolute bomb, then what're you gonna do?

Heh, glad you enjoy what I have made thus far, though. :twilightsmile:

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I will have you know I read your little story and found it absolutely wonderful. I insist you produce more!

I have two problems with this - the first and foremost would be that I dance like Applebloom all the time.

Secondly, why am I loving your writing? Fuck. Piss me off, you're good. Maybe even great.

I have nothing else! BAH!

Hat

Urgh, the ending. Nothing is wrong with it, just, you know, it ends. :raritydespair:
Once again a very good story! :raritywink:

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:heart: and drunken hugs for you.

1560345 i'm gonna read it of course because with the level of writing skill that has been displayed in these stories tells me that anything you write eill be worthy of my time.

And i've read 120 days of blueblood and background pony so i challenge you to write anything so horrendous or long that i will not read it.

Very enjoyable, and proof that not only is Applejack best pony, she is also best sister. :ajsmug:

That was so sweet. Wonderful work! I loved it :heart:

D'aaaaww


(whaddya know? not only did I read it within the month, but within a few hours! madness.)

Awwwwwwwwwww. All your stories are so cute.

This story.
You've executed it beautifully.

I liked this, it's a nice little story. So many Apple Bloom stories seem to be nothing but sadness. :twilightsmile:

simplicity is indeed beauty, Great!! I love it!!

I was smiling through the entirety of this fic. Hell, I'm still smiling. Go away smile! Ugh! I can't rid of it!

Such a heartwarming little story. The simplicity of it makes it diverse. You paint the scene so flawlessly, it seems effortless. HOW ARE YOU SO GRACEFUL?

Goddamn I love this. :heart:

- Church

Applebloom is the cutest thing in all creation, and you've done an amazing job of getting that to the page without pictures (or dialog, even.) And of course Applejack can dance. If Applebloom's a good filly, I expect there's a story her sister can tell about it, too.

Excellent work, this is what 'Slice of Life' is all about.

I approve of these Original Feels.

Original Feels - the feels that come from the things that are.

Nothing is more pure. Nothing is more serene.

Thanks for making me.... content. Which is something people just aren't anymore.

All my Twists. :twistnerd::twistnerd::twistnerd::twistnerd:

OH MY GOSH! SO CUUUUUUTE!!!:heart::heart::heart:

I love this~!!!

Do I spy a Happy Feet reference?:rainbowlaugh:

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If you did, it was unintentional, but not unwanted. :twilightsmile:

Glad you enjoyed it!

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I did! I just thought the shuffling kinda mimicked it...heh, this was very well written!:twilightsmile:

Your stories are sweet. How do you not have more followers?

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Well, every month or so I got snooker loopy in my journals for reasons that are ridiculously childish at their best... Doesn't paint me in a good light. :twilightblush:

And, well, nothing I write is long enough to get featured, sooo... not much exposure. Quite frankly, I am stunned by what recognition and love I get from those who do find me~

:heart:

2365778 Well, I was pointed in your direction by a FIMFic friend when I told him this fandom has been getting on my nerves with its stupidity and drama. Your stories made me feel... relaxed, if you will. Thanks. :twilightsmile:

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I try to make people feel good. :heart:

I think I might have -- feelings after reading this.

What is this witchcraft? What is this blaspheming work?!

May it burn in hell for all of it's well-executed heart-warming kindness! Nobody makes YST have feelings! NOBODY!!!



Seriously though, great work.

That was awesome!

Much to my surprise, this little gem has lodged in my mind more thoroughly than almost anything else I've read on FIMFiction. Every time I reread it, I come away grinning like mad. What a beautiful and heartwarming scene.

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Thank you so much. You've no idea how much I appreciated seeing that lovely comment tonight~

I didn't think it was possible. But I think this just possibly might be the second Apple Bloom fic in forever I'll actually be hitting that star button for. I simply love it. Playing that acoustic guitar piece on loop, while reading this just added to the feels. I actually got chocked up for a pinch when AB started imagining and thinking the worst things to come. And the joy from the obviously expected loving AJ, still got me smiling ear to ear during that tender moment.

This is now my favorite Apple Bloom story. And like the only one I can say I would recommend to my friends. Simply lovely. :heart:

This didn't make me cry, but it made me want to cry. By the time I got to the end, my lips were crinkled into a joyous smile (and I've been in a dark-ish mood most of the day, so this really lifted my outlook) and I was trying to cry.
Also, you've taught me some very important lessons on imagery with this story, so thank you for that as well.

Love it, makes me feel like dancing on my 2 left feet. :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowderp: This... this is beautiful writing.

Pardon me while I add this to as many groups as I can...

I can relate to Bloom here. I like dancing, but only when alone, where I'm free to make a fool of myself :twilightsmile:

Awww, this was a very adorable and sweet story!

Sometimes You just have to Let loose and Dance like nobody's Watching. this story was more like a fond memory than anything else. I can't count the times I've lost myself to the music in my head when I thought I was alone, and There are few more freeing and exhilarating experiences than Letting loose like that. It's fun.

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