Sunset Shimmer doesn't remember what happened at the last night's party. And worse yet, she can't remember just which one of the Twilights she slept with...
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i am actually in love with twilight i think
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This explains everything. And not in a good way
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This is a perfectly respectable first amateur horsewords, even if it's very informal in style and kind of sweary and I had no idea you were listening to Taylor Swift, did you find that seemed to influence your writing style much?
Also I'm happy the Twilights found a way to deal with the love triangle!
So...congratulations on your first official horsewords!
nice work
so freaking good
Yeah, ever listen or read the list of side effects most pills have? You should be glad all you were lowered to was a unimaginative office drone.
Good story
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honestly yeah!! but i think when im writing comedy id like to be less formal and play with the situation a lot more so hence all the swearing
and also I listened to taylor's reputation album non stop writing this so do what you want with this information lol
That was funny and fun to read
Truly, this is the WORST POSSIBLE THING!
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Sunset got to have the threesome of her dreams, and can't even remember it. Truly, a fate worse than death... Good thing it's damn funny. I do have reservations about Applejack referring to her friends as "The Gays," especially considering how she admitted to snogging Rarity, but I can't say it takes away too much from the story. Overall, a fun read, and a great start to my day. Thanks for this!
*whom
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I just think different people's writing techniques and their results are interesting, that's all!
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I guess I took that as Applejack using 'the Gays' not so much to refer to a category of people, as maybe more of a role or an activity.
Maybe, from Applejack's point of view, when Applejack gets drunk enough, she comes down with 'the Gays.'
🏳️🌈
But the next day she doesn't want to talk about it.
Ah, the old crossfade. Not for amateurs. Rookie mistake, Sunset. Rookie mistake.
This is super minor, but the 'Twilights' in the story description shouldn't have an apostrophe, since it's a plural, not a possessive.
Pinkie pie totally added that trademark
Cue the senfeild theme
Applejack desperately trying to jump back in that closet I see...
HHAHAHAHAH I DIED 🤣🤣🤣
Why choose either one when you can go for both Twilights at the same time, huh Sunset?
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fixed it, thank you!!!!
That is the appropriate reaction in this circumstance, Sunset.
Writing a Sunlight fic while listening to Taylor Swift... I know this feel.
A reasonable reaction
This should really have a tragedy tag.
OOF poor Sunset lol
Well, guess there's only one thing to do: invite them over again for a second, sober round.
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Because that requires Sunset to do the smart thing. But that's boring.
I haven't really read an MLP fic in 3 years, and I found this funny and relatable
Remember sunset, you shouldn't mix booze and weed.
Astounding story hammered out hilariously with all the right marks.
Hilarious, nicely played.
OMC, Poor Sunny!! Dammit, Pinkie did you get it on film?
THIS IS THE MOST HILARIOUS SHIT I'VE EVER SEEN (IN A GOOD WAY)
My sister in Harmony,you're one of them