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This was good. Would love to more of this story.
Sequel or part 2?
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I'll be honest, I want to, but it's not likely given what's going on right now. I believe my most recent blog post details it out further, but basically I have another project I'm working on.
This story mainly happened as it's so rare a contest comes along that I can actually enter, so I really wanted to see if I could do it. (And just barely managed)
It's not to say a sequel/part 2 won't happen someday, but it's not likely to be anytime soon. :(
Gotta say, I'm curious as to who is downvoting every comment on this story. So do you not like Spike the dog? Not like body swapping? Come on, you can tell it to my face. :P
Great story i'd love a sequel to this story. Where Twilight and Spike adapt to Spikes new dog\human hybrid body and how it brings them closer as sisters
It’s great to know you’re still writing. I really enjoy your work.
Wow, surprised this is in the feature box.
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I want to see the two of them encounter Ember and "Spike's" puppies I can only imagine this going well.
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I'm not shocked at all. This is spicy and well written, of course it got featured.
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As the author all I can see is: "Oh man I made a mistake there! And there! Oh, I could have worded that better!" ^^;
But I can't fix anything because that'll violate the contest rules. >_<
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So does this mean you might consider writing a sequel
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i would love that too and have Spike react with shock at first then tease Twi for it
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I feel that. I have a similar problem and I just don't find anything I write hot, so it always feels like trash.
Still you made a good one here. If you don't believe in your own skills believe everyone telling you it's good.
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I'm actually proud of what I wrote here. It was a story I wanted to play around with, and the fact this was all written and edited in one day I consider a feat. I just wish I had managed to set more time aside during the entire month the contest ran. >_<
As such the story has plenty of little things that had I more time I'd have shuffled around or fixed, but I like barely got this in twenty minutes before time was up to submit. ^^;
Which noticing all of those, I'm happy I got in the feature box, but how the hell is this the top story right now!? O_o
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Oh I most certainly want to write about Dog Girl Spike. I really do, but I just can't spend too much time on fanfiction right now. I keep mentioning my last blog post, but it really does go into just what I'm facing.
The short of it is: I need to focus on something I might be able to publish. Even if it fails, I need that option. Work is just too stressful right now, and I need that glimmer of hope that I could make money off of writing and even shorten my hours at work, or be able to quit and focus on writing. I know it's not that likely, but part of me wants to believe.
Sadly the stuff I write here is mostly genderbend fun, that's usually mature, and since it's with copyright characters... Yeah.
I've thought of maybe doing a Patreon or something where people could donate and get options to vote on which story gets updated, or small commissions, but I'd feel bad having to suddenly charge people money, and I really don't think I'm that big a writer here. I mean I asked the question in said blog, and got only a couple of replies. Just makes me feel the whole thing wouldn't go over that well, but given my situation, it's the only way I could justify more regular updates. :(
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Ah I somewhat misinterpreted what you meant then, my bad. I thought you meant you could only see the flaws and missed opportunities or something. I'm glad you're proud of this story it's a good one.
Just wait until you win the contest and make a second lap through the feature box.
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If you open commissions let me know I want first dibs.
If you've got a bunch of ideas you want to do the pick a story might work best for you, might be able to offer higher tiers that let people add suggestions to that list or something.
You'd still be making the stories so in theory no one would be missing out on anything, if you feel bad about not being able to deliver often I think there are options to not charge if you didn't put anything out or you could make the subscription tiers cheap.
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As much as I do like this story I can guarantee you I'm not having that happen. XD
Not with much more talented authors like Dirty little secret having entered!
Hmm, I liked everything except the direction it went with Spike in Twi's body. It seemed weird he'd really care about seeing her naked and such, since implicitly this would happen normally (like, before he could talk, and possibly after too, she likely undressed in front of him and all), and even weirder he'd be so horny.
I get that it's meant to be a clopfic and all, but it would've made more sense to show us Twi in Spike's body screwing Ember the dog, and Fluttershy having a horny reaction that potentially leads to masturbating offscreen, rather than focusing on Spike in Twi's body having all these urges Twi's body shouldn't really be giving much of (at most, it should've been someone like Rarity staying behind and then having to help him thru the very confusing feelings related to his crush on her, but also Twi's crushes mixing in, and how his body can be soothed...likely without actual masturbation, but a lot of teasing.)
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I understand. You got a lot of real world stress. Just know if and when you come back to write a sequel or another one-shot, i'll be looking forward to it
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I don't think Spike the dog really crushes on Rarity. He might think at best "Oh cute girl, let's get her to pet me" But there's no way Hasbro was going to have a dog lusting after a human.
I have to disagree with it making more sense for us to follow Twilight in Spike's body just to shoe horn in Fluttershy getting aroused by watching animals mate. I can certainly see someone trying that for a clopfic, but it's not something I feel is a natural progression. You basically only do that because you want the story to go that way. Same here. I wanted Spike in Twilight's body to get worked up. So I went that way.
Now to be fair, having Rarity helping out Spike in Twi's body is a great idea. The issue was length. For the contest I'm not allowed to go over 10,000 words, so I had to work around that limitation. In the original script/idea for the story. I had Microchips returning some books to 'Twilight' and Spike in her body and tipsy from the vodka ended up having sexy times with him. That direction had to be scraped though, given I couldn't organically fit it in without cutting other scenes I wasn't willing to cut.
As for why Spike is dealing with these things in Twi's body. Yes he has indeed seen Twilight undress and stuff but back then he was a dog. He might have the stray thought of how it'd be cool if Twilight was a dog, but not think too much on it.
Here, he's suddenly in a human body, and since it's established the swap wasn't perfect. Certain traits got shuffled around/left over. Twilight also has magic, so the general idea is more of her essence got into Spike, then vice versa. Therefore Spike as a human girl is having more human thoughts, and as a human she begins to realize that Twilight is pretty sexy. Also this is a few years after the show ended, so Twilight has matured a bit. She may not be the shut in bookworm she once was, and could very well have a healthy sexual appetite. (Also notice she didn't really get horny until after the Vodka.) One Spike is dealing with.
In the end it was my excuse to why Spike ended up as he did at the very end. Given that the geode ended up infusing a lot of her essence into his body while Twilight was in it, and the things he did in her body ended up overriding a lot of his essence with hers. More things I would have gotten into if I had more time (my own fault there) Or will be covered if I can ever do another part.
Perfectly understandable if that's not your thing, but the story was never really meant to go the directions you mentioned. As that's not really MY thing. :/
Finally got a chance to read this... and I loved it. Well-written, sexy in places, and oh, Sci-Twi's reason for doing this is heartwarming and heartbreaking. Bravo!
That was a good story.
How about labeling it "Incomplete" & adding more chapters?
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In one of Estee's stories Fluttershy tells a pet owner "There's a price for an animal friend. You pay it on the back end."
This needs a part 2 for spike turned twilight anime girl dog