Dancing in the Moonlight

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tyzuikanwanderer

tyzuikanwanderer #1 · Jun 29th, 2022 · 4 · 3 ·

First of all, thank you for writing and publishing this.

Now, I love this. This is so erotic and well done. I usually prefer anthro, but this is quite good and it caught my eye. I loved the smut in it and the beginning. A nice mixture. Great ending too.

Flora Blossom

Flora Blossom #2 · Jun 29th, 2022 · · 1 ·

Oh, my! This fiction has it's greats of ups and downs... I think 7.5/10 would fit this fiction.

Implausible Deniability

Implausible Deniability #3 · Jun 29th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Not what I expected, but you make a persuasive argument for the ship and a glorious spectacle of their first time together. Thank you for it!

Bones_

Bones_ #4 · Jun 29th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Wow, this was a really lovely fic. The development of their relationship was exceptionally well-done within the timeframe, and I think that's a big plus when it comes to smut. Feeling the emotional dynamic and setup and everything is really important (for me), but so frequently that just takes way too many words for it to be smut. Then it's just a fic with smut. Well done!

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