Third Wheel
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Been a while. Someone else might have posted AC/DC's Back in Black, but I find that a little overused (and I don't like AC/DC that much but don't tell people I said that). Had this one sitting unfinished for a very long while, finally got around to it.
Now to disappear again. Maybe.
Hot Damn~! 😳
11 likes and no views
WHAT?!
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Aw yeah Third Wheel is back and 1.4k views in like 2 hours!
Good to see you active again dude.
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The stats don't all update at once for some reason, when a new fic is published.
Girls taking the knot is instant win!
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The various parts of the interface don't all update at the same time. There were probably at least 22 views by the time those upvotes happened (I think the chapters are counted individually?)
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Simply stabilize carbonaceous sulfur hydride with lanthanum and rhenium
Beryllium also helps but is super toxic
I suspect phosphorous boride hydrides may work even better
Rrrrriiiiiiiiggggggghhhhtttttttt.
Although, I thought you based him on Cerberus?
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Well make sure to clean up when you're done, because that's how you get ants.
Well a bitch is also the name for a female dog so his language is still acceptable. At least that's what I assume Twilight is chastising him for.
Based on the first chapter I thought this was gonna be a jekyll and hyde story where they turn back to their normal selves and wonder why the fuck they smell like sex along with Twilight trying to figure out how and why she's got cum dripping from her cunt but you just abandoned any plot like that halfway and it left me disappointed.
Honestly would've preferred seeing each of the girls getting bimbotized and fucked by Spike as well as seeing what happened in Shinning's case
I'm not sure if there's any point commenting on a porn story that's probably intended for a specific audience, but I find a lot of the characterization offputting. Spike is crass and rude, Twilight is acting like a bimbo...calling her a bitch to invoke the pun, ok sure. But it just doesn't feel like Spike and Twilight in this story.
Yeah, so it's not just me. If this chracterization is what you're into...ok. But yeah, it feels off. If you really wanted to go for the "dog dominates the girl" concept, it seems you could have made better use of the role revseral potential. Spike lives his life as Twilight's servant, basically, and this was his chance to be the "top dog" and to be the one in charge for a change, but I don't come away feeling like you made good use of that dynamic. Instead you have Twilight groveling, and calling him master, and asking if she was a good bitch while Spike is, as you say, "being a dick." So rather than a proper role reversal it feels like a more generic "you worthless slut, I'm dominating you" story.
Anyway, sorry for trying to seriously critique what's obviously a porn one-shot, but yeah...it does feel a little off.
......... why?
A bitch is a proper term for a female dog.
Kinda of wanted to see spike take sunset twilight velvet and gleaming. Also will you be doing a sequel to this?
Wonder if Spike can do what no one can?
Really wanted to see sequel or similar story where Celestia and Cadance gonna become huge breasted bimbos and then gonna be impregnated and give birth of their master foals
fuck, it's a fantastic story, but the second chapter seemed to be a bit rushed, just skipping over some of the probably good parts and making it sorta sound like they came into the garage like that and threw themselves onto him. I would be interested in the other dogs' transformations, especially Ember's
Super hot story! I'd love to see him bimbofy and impregnate the rest of the Mane Six and the Princesses!
I hope that I’m not the only one who’s wondering how Spike got ahold of Shining Armor, and turned him into a female.
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Yes I think we would all like to read that.