One Thrust Stallion

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VodkaPool

VodkaPool #1 · March 23rd · · · A Stallion Everypony Wants to Fuck ·

dzamie

dzamie #2 · March 23rd · 6 · · The Humbling of the Lustful Bug Queen ·

Incredible.

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #3 · March 23rd · 8 · · The Humbling of the Lustful Bug Queen ·

>tfw a OPM crossover

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Third Wheel

Third Wheel #4 · March 23rd · 5 · · The Humbling of the Lustful Bug Queen ·

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I'm more surprised you commented on this one and not on my Sparklecest fic.

Alzrius

Alzrius #5 · March 24th · 5 · · The Humbling of the Lustful Bug Queen ·

For those who are curious about the cover image, the top line says uma no sekkusu sutoorii ("horse sex story") while the bottom line says Naze wazawaza kono Nihongo no bunsho o kuropufikku no hyoshi kara honyaku shiteiru desu ka? ("Why are you going to the trouble of translating this Japanese text from the clopfic cover?")

To which the answer is please help me.

Third Wheel

Third Wheel #6 · March 24th · 2 · · The Humbling of the Lustful Bug Queen ·

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I was hoping someone would bother to check. I used DeepL for those since my knowledge of Japanese stops at how to write Gojira; I hope what's there is not some horrible butchery of the language.

Alzrius

Alzrius #7 · March 24th · 1 · · The Humbling of the Lustful Bug Queen ·

11858723 I'm a non-native Japanese speaker, and in all honesty my command of the language isn't that good. To my untrained eye, it's written fairly well. The one possible critique I'd make is the use of "desu" at the end of the sentence, since that doesn't seem like the sort of question where you'd use keigo (i.e. polite speech), but that's more of a style issue than a rule...and even then, the use of polite speech to ask such a pointed question seems like it could easily be painted as incisively ironic.