Equestria MILFs 4 — Velvet Coat

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Cerulean Starlight

Cerulean Starlight #1 · Dec 23rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

Third Wheel

Third Wheel #2 · Dec 23rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

I'll copy over what I wrote in the comments of Jingleclop:

That was fun. Not what I had in mind going into it, but then again I wasn't sure what to except given my prompt. I enjoyed it.

I especially enjoyed Sugarcoat in this. Her usual bluntness combined with the slutty attitude you gave her was a joy to read, and I'm tempted to use it myself. The hypnosis portion felt a bit quick, but I suppose that stuff isn't easy to get down right if you're not experienced with it (might have been easier with pony Velvet and actual magic, though I understand my request was a touch hard to fulfill). The mentions of Night Light were welcomed. And I could totally see Sugarcoat wanting to be made into something like that. Thank you for the story.

Captain_Hairball

Captain_Hairball #3 · Dec 23rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Thank you. I went way outside my comfort zone on this, at least in terms of writing a fetish that I do not have. Glad it was at least partially successful.

Captain_Hairball

Captain_Hairball #4 · Dec 23rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

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I see you and raise.

MEGA LM ShiroHige Pony

MEGA LM ShiroHige Pony #5 · Dec 24th, 2019 · 1 · ·

I would like to read more Twilight Velvet x Cristal prep girls... daaaamn, even a Velvet x Sunset or Adagio would be awesome.

Captain_Hairball

Captain_Hairball #6 · Dec 24th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Oh. Yeah. This was supposed to be a Equestria MILFs story. I can’t set up the prequel on my phone, at least not without inviting disaster but more of this is not the worst idea.

MEGA LM ShiroHige Pony

MEGA LM ShiroHige Pony #7 · Dec 24th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Lesbian milfs are the best milfs

PrincessVanillaParfaitI

PrincessVanillaParfaitI #8 · Dec 26th, 2019 · 2 · ·

This was fun!

It seemed to me you were going for a bit more realistic hypnosis (rather than the magical brand of hypnosis people tend to use here on fimfic), which I happen to know a bit about from experience within the hypnokink community. You got the tone of an induction pretty accurate, but it was a bit quick. A real induction would spend a lot more time lingering on each suggestion, rather than just stating it once.

Keep it up!

Captain_Hairball

Captain_Hairball #9 · Dec 27th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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I should add a note that hypnosis isn't my fetish. I just did some research and gave it my best guess. The hypnosis scene is probably too short because I was impatient to get to the spaking and anal reaming.