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When Twilight arrives Sunset's door the day before her Christmas Party, the girls think it’s going to be a fun-filled evening of laughter and joy. The same can’t be said of the awkward, newly-reformed Starlight. But Sunset has an idea. An idea that might help them both overcome their past mistakes.
Written as a gift for Applezombi, the man behind the curtain of the Reviewer's Mansion's Secret Santa.
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Sweet Celestia, this was just beautifully written (chef's kiss). I loved it. Who better to teach Starlight a bit about the road to redemption than someone who has already been through it (AKA. Sunset Shimmer)
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. A romance involving one of them was the prompt. So I did both.
Very well written.
I did not notice an glaring spelling or grammatical errors like missing words or jumping between tenses.
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Thanks. I'm really trying to work on the tenses thing.
Welcome back! And ohh a sweet gift for us! Nicely done!
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Yeah, I know the rewrites are taking a long time. I'm currently at chapter 50. So, hopefully it will be done soon.
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And it clearly shows, keep it up!
I love pony commentary on human traditions.
Sweet fluffy story.
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Thank you. I also agree that it can lead to some fun and interesting explanations.
Well, this was just wonderful. I love unsure and struggling Starlight, I love the gentle commentary on Santa. Fun and cute and lovely.
Thank you so much.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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I would love to bear their commentary on the origin of Christmas. The birth of Jesus.
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Could be fun. Unfortunately, I feel that would also somehow stir up a religious debate, and I don’t have the required fortitude to deal with that.
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Channeling my inner Mud Briar: The birth of Jesus likely would have been in April, Roman tax season. The holiday we know as Christmas is a combination of pagan winter solstice traditions from across Europe as Christians consolidated their converts' former beliefs into one festive season.
If you want to get super technical about the history of the holiday.
It's bad if you ask me, I mean the part where your body changes is a bit shocking but if it's how the portal works then there's nothing to argue about ghere.
She has a point you know.
As much as I do love Christmas this year I'm not feeling the brightest just like last year, and the reason is because of family and losses.
She probably didn't want to make another mistake like she did with the Christmas ornament.
I think your worrying yourself a bit too far there starlight. 🙁
Oofity.
Dang, i did not expect to see the story end with this.
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I take it you enjoyed? Glad to hear it. I’m sorry for your losses this year. Hope next year is better for you.
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Thx and I did. It's hard to feel happy during the holiday season while most of the time your spent thinking about something your missing dearly.