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Arkane12


Editing DoaQ V2: 18/66

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Rainbow Dash has kept her feelings for Applejack secret for years. But no more. This year, for Applejack's birthday, she found the perfect gift to accompany her confession. Unfortunately, it seems something has Applejack in quite the funk today. Rainbow Dash intends on fixing that.

Featured: 7/27/2021

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Comments ( 13 )

An Applejack Rainbow Dash romantic drama?
This will certainly be interesting...

Also.
FIRST.

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Second. And thank you.

It would’ve taken hours, at least.

Uh... how far does Applejack live from Ponyville?

“Dash, it takes twenty minutes,” Applejack giggled.

Rainbow blinked. “It would take us a whole twenty minutes to walk there.”

You... you cheeky git. Amazing. :rainbowlaugh:

This was very cute. Hope it gets more views soon, cuz it deserves some attention.

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Thanks, Ninja. I thought of that joke at two in the morning while half asleep. I was a little worried that it wouldn't make sense after some sleep.

A cute little story. I'm always a sucker for good Appledash content, and this fit the bill.

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Glad to be of service.

Normally, I don't like stories about ships. But this was an exception. Just something about the way you paced it, and the impact at the end. I really enjoyed this story, and would love to see a possible sequel, assuming you would want to do something like that. Even if you don't, still a great story!

Sweet story :twilightsmile:

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I’m glad you liked it. A sequel could be possible, I suppose.

Howdy, hi!

A review for you from the mansion

Hi there. I'm here to report that I failed? I was supposed to berate the author, apparently, but I just... I can't find anything to berate him about? Everything seems fine so far, everything's in order, characters were just fine, storyline was alright, pacing was okay, fun was had... not sure what to do here. Await further instructions.

Thank you.

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Was really confused for a second. Forgot I said that. Lol. Glad you enjoyed. I’ve got a few other stories on the site if you’re interested.

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I wooouuuld say 'sorry for the confusion', but admittedly, that was somewhat expected, if not intended. :rainbowlaugh:
I'll take a look into that, sure. Can't promise when exactly I'm gonna come around to it, though - my 'read later'-pile sports, like, 170+ stories still, some of which are 100k+ words long.
But!
The pile will be decimated eventually.

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