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dr-soviet


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There's a meaning behind every tease— behind every prank or mischief. However, Rainbow Dash didn't expect to be on the receiving end of Applejack's antics.

In other words: Rainbow Dash gives a notebook to Applejack.


My entry to the AppleDash Warm and Fuzzy Feelings Event

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Comments ( 15 )

...only to find a blank piece of paper.

YOU SCARED THE CRUD OUT OF ME

Thoughts on the story: This was delightfully hilarious and sweet! I like most of all the unpredictability, I didn't see a lot of the jokes and sweetness coming and I could quite literally feel how flustered Dash was. :rainbowlaugh: Applejack is such a prankster genius, she'd be worthy right up there with Pinks and Dash if she weren't so busy with farm chores and the like. Love it! :heart:

Very good I like it.

If I were to guess, Applejack wrote those at the back of the planner when Rainbow was busy examining the pictures?

This was delightfully different from most other romfics (is that the right term? Well I'm using it here anyway!) I've read and I enjoyed the whole ride through and through.

I love this little look into the way these two interact. It makes me want to grab them both and say “SOMEPONY TELL THE OTHER SO YOU CAN SMOOCH ALREADY.” And I mean that in the nicest way possible :rainbowkiss:

That was a wild ride!

D'awwwwwwww. :heart:

This was really super cute! I love just how playful they are with each other—their banter feels like something right out of the show, and both of them pranking each other is something I don't think there's enough of. Also, really nice job subverting expectations about the notebook—and not just once! :twilightsmile:

This is a side of Applejack I haven't seen in this type of fics.
Perfectly written too. Very Heartwarming story. Congrats

I don't know if it's just me but I need more :fluttercry:
This was such a nice and sweet read :twilightsmile:

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I'm thinking of making more of this kind of story as a multi-chapter fanfic with more teases and pranks, but I can't seem to come up with a title, so... :twilightsheepish:

You know these memes? 'I don't usually X, but when I do, I Y'? Fitting for AJ. She usually ain't a prankster, but goodness gracious me, when she tries, she's gooooood at it. :rainbowlaugh: And she can get under Rainbows skin like nopony else. I love(d) it.

Thank you.

I really loved this. I like clever AJ so much in these stories. I love love love flustered rainbow too

so sweeeeeeeeeet!!!!!

Applejack was alone now, still reclaiming her composure along with the sides of her stomach that still hurt from all those laughter. With one last deep breath, she was finally able to snap out of it.

That laughter

Applejack stood with noodle-like legs, still recovering with giggles. She regained her composure and looked at Rainbow.

From giggles

"I didn't too," said Applejack, "and I would've won anyway."

I didn’t either.

Despite this little fixes, great fic!. :ajsmug::rainbowlaugh:

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