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With less and less time being able to be spent with Rainbow Dash's marefriend due to circumstances outside of her control, Rainbow Dash wants to make it up to her. Even though she doesn't entirely know how.
An entry in the AppleDash Warm and Fuzzy Feelings Event
Original cover image by Mothpress found here.
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That was really sweet! The image of Rainbow Dash brushing Applejack made me smile, so mission success!
That's a great line.
The grammar and narration are great, but I think I spotted a few errors. I don't want to litter them here without permission, so let me know if you want to know what they are.
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Thanks for the comment!
I would really appreciate a PM about it, yeah! I don't really have an active editor, and even while scanning it I often miss things. (Especially since I may or may not have finished my entry at 3-4am ish my time.
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This was some good fluff and, I must say, your writing has such a good, natural flow to it. ^^
That... was nice. And Rainbow was very, very Rainbow. Loyal to a fault, impatient, trying her hardest. I do quite like how they share this tender moment with each other, it just seems so... fitting for these two.
Thank you.