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Applejack tells a story about her many kisses she shared with Rainbow Dash.

Rainbow Dash does too.

However, as one might find out soon enough, not all kisses are the same.


Written for the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Group's Lyrical Contest

Many thanks to the following for their invaluable feedback:
Atom Smash, mushroompone, SnowOriole, starshield,
Sunlight Rays, The Red Parade, Vis-a-Viscera and Zontan

Cover art by uar1

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Comments ( 4 )

So sweet! I love that we get to see both perspectives.
:)

Hopefully nopony will be confused by the absence of Featherweight.

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I hope not. I would've added his character tag onto the story otherwise. :rainbowlaugh:

That's... hm. For one, it's a sweet story. And it's very... AJ to just... yeah, that's an AJ-train-of-thought. Considering the impact and, I suspect, misery this brought about, there's surprisingly little mention of any meddling by their friends. While both can be stubborn as heck, I'd suspect at least Fluttershy (for Rainbow) and maybe Rarity (for AJ) would make an effort to 'fix things'. Or, you know, Pinkie and Twilight, since those two always meddle in (friendship-)affairs of their friends.
Anyway. They seemed to have it figured out by the end of it, so that's good. A nice story.

Thank you.

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