Feel the Blaze

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Bookeater_otaku

Bookeater_otaku #1 · Sep 14th, 2021 · 3 · ·

I like the dark undertones of the story. It really put flash in his place. Question is, will he grow from it? Is he a big enough person to get over himself and help the sirens? Should he? Will he accept he is a bad person deep down?

Things aren't so good for the Sirens right now and I am curious if you are planning to do a story with this?

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #2 · Sep 14th, 2021 · 5 · ·

Hard questions and dark thoughts. You crammed a lot into a little here. I'm going to need to take some time to digest this one. THank you for it.

NaiadSagaIotaOar

NaiadSagaIotaOar #3 · Sep 14th, 2021 · 2 · ·

This was excellent. Really liked Aria’s abrasiveness here, and as has been said it’s wonderfully succinct.

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #4 · Sep 14th, 2021 · 3 · ·

This was glorious.
The level of introspection crazy.

I’ve been there too. I’ve sought answers to tough questions only to be told to really look at myself. It’s hard. Sometimes it makes you better. Sometimes it makes you bitter.

I love this.

And Aria. Damn. She’s good here. Really good.

HAHA that bit with her fumbling for a lighter. It was so REAL.
And she makes some really good points.

Also, this story has inspired me to make a new bookshelf. Many times I’ve read stories that make me think. I’ll leave a comment and a like, but then that’s it. It’s not really enough.

Huk