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Mystic Mind


The greatest storyteller of our time, or just another smuck pony fan on the internet? YOU decide! (Also I do episode analysis sometimes.)

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Relationships come, relationships go. But for Rarity, breaking up with Applejack was the hardest thing she has ever done. Shutting herself away in her Manehatten boutique, she finds herself in an endless spiral of self-hatred, manifested as her own little Tantabus.

Can the intervention of one of her newest friends, Coco Pommel, help her to find a method of breaking the cycle?


Content Warnings: Depression, Self-hatred, References to Emotional Abuse, Bullying, Blackmail, Gaslighting

Inspired by the cover art and the song of the same name by progressive metal band Threshold. Alternative title: Idiosyncrasy.

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Coco being transgender fits her character so well. This was a lovely little read. Thank you!

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You're welcome ^_^.

“Okay, here goes,” Coco shut her eyes tight, puffed out her chest and took a deep inward breath. “I’m a trans mare.”

Rarity blinked. “Pardon?”

“I’m transgender. I was assigned a colt at birth, and I transitioned when I was fifteen. It’s something that Suri Polomare dug up when we started our partnership, and she threatened to make it public if I didn’t help her steal.”

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I’ve had this on my list to read for a while now…and I’m glad I finally took the time to enjoy it! This is a very lovely story, honestly. You delve into Rarity’s personality and fears in a way few have. You brought the best and worst of her to light but kept it even with Coco showing her that she is still good and giving for all the right reasons. Rarity may have her faults, but she is still a beautiful pony deep down.

I like that you chose to have Coco tell Rarity that she is transgender. She knew she could trust Rarity, as Rarity had believed in her and gave her confidence in the past. It still took a great deal of courage to come out to a friend, especially one you have romantic feelings for. I hope it provides the encouragement to others be their authentic selves and trust that others will care for them unconditionally in return.

Thank you for this great little story. It definitely brought me a great deal of joy and a lot of hope.

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