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Alex Warlorn

Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.



The emotionless Twilight Tragedy has served Master Discord for a thousand years along with her fellow Elements of Chaos, handing out death to those who defy him. But, who was this one filly, who LAUGHED in the face of Master's chaos? Twilight Tragedy doesn't understand, she wants to know.
THERE IS LIGHT AT THE END OF THE TUNNEL! This story SHALL have a happy ending!!!
Meanwhile, Shining Armor wakes up on the day of his promotion to captain of the royal guard, the day that Twilight is to be sent to Ponyville to prepare for the Summer Sun Celebration. Everything is normal. Everything is fine. Nothing confusing or otherworldly going on at all, nope, none. *Liarjack face*. Why does it take a second for ponies who remember who he is?

Cover art by Mystery Ezekude. http://mysteryezekude.deviantart.com/art/Pony-POV-Series-Dark-World-Shining-Armor-Cover-324097810

The Audio adaption Is here:
ORIGINAL fan-art, ORIGINAL fan-music and VOICE ACTORS galore await!

Recursive fanart and fan stories are here. http://alexwarlorn.deviantart.com/journal/MLP-FiM-Pony-POV-Series-Fanworks-audio-adaption-274110361 Many are rubber stamped by me as optional canon stories that reveal some of other sides of these stories.
Tropes page found here. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/PonyPOVSeries
Fan Labor Pages here http://mlpfanart.wikia.com/wiki/My_Little_Pony_Fan_Labor_Wiki:Workshop/Pony_POV_Series_Season_Zero:_Discorded_Ponies and here. http://mlpfanart.wikia.com/wiki/My_Little_Pony_Fan_Labor_Wiki:Workshop/Pony_POV_Series_Season_One:_Reharmonization

Also can be considered Season Zero Point Five.

Chapters (91)
Comments ( 2632 )

Is this alternative Twilight, like evil Twilight with real Twilight being good? or? I'm confused as I never heard of this series before.

Oh great, time for the depression train to pull into the station.
I'm still not over reading part3 the first time.


It's a continuation of season zero and ties in with the rest of the series' seasons.


I PROMISE that things are going to get more optimistic ever so slowly, though there IS one chapter properly title 'Darkest Hour.'

1244422 what about Twilight, Im confused- Is this alternative Twilight, like evil Twilight with real Twilight being good?- like there are Twilights or not?

We now enter a world of Darkness, a world ruled by Chaos. Is there a speck of light that can grow to overtake the darkness and possibly save this world or will it be snuffed out leaving no other choice but oblivion.

Okay. I am depressed enough in real life. I'll just wait for the happy ending.:fluttershysad:


I'm saying this SEASON will have a happy ending. And Shining Armor's adventure happens at the same time.


("Oblivion is your only salvation, embracing the nothingness offered by Anti-Mother Entropy.")

Wow, another giant comes to FiMFiction. I'll just... hide in the corner over here.:rainbowderp:
On the plus side, now I don't have to haunt you on Deviant Art anymore.:yay:


Whao. Cool. 90% of the recursive material is still on deviantart.

1246169:eeyup: Eyup, took me eight days to read it all.
I stumbled on one of the audio reenactments of your Discorded Ponies on Youtube (Rarity, I think) and became interested.
I wouldn't even be here without it.

1246388:pinkiesmile: And that's how Equestrian Fanfiction is made.

By the way...myself and a producer collaborated to make a song based on this fic, called Twilight Tragedy.


I think my spine grew three sizes larger after reading this chapter.




I am very very very very very very very surprised.

I'm not sure if this is a good or bad thing.

I DID Link the version with the vocals right?

We now see how the thousand years have effected the six: Lairjack has become skilled in lies and deceit, Traitor Dash has became a self-hating weapon of destruction, Greedity has fallen completely in to diluted madness, Fluttercruel is a pure monster, Angry Pie has become a pony of unlimited rage that cannot be calmed, and Twilight Tragedy has became an embodiment of nothingness. Now we may soon see how the one being that could easily dispose of Discord fell.

Discord dropped a fifty-ton weight on Twilight?

:twilightoops: uh, ow

"Only to find a sad old man on life support..." - Emperor of Mankind of Imperium of Man?
Because Discord had a feeling he couldn't understand, he dropped a dangerously childish hissy fit on Twilight Tragedy. Sounds about right for someone who has "unresolved issues".


The next chapter is called Darkest Hour for a very good reason. It's easily the darkest and black the ENTIRE pony POV Series has ever gotten. And that is saying something.

I don't like Discord, but anyone who can hold his own against that combat monster (lesser of all monsters in that crapsack excuse of a universe of eternal war) has mad skills! The Emperor of Mankind scares the life out of me. His Golden Throne is creepy.


We now truly see this is called Darkest Hour. Cadence died in a horrible and violent way, crushing much of the hope that the world can be saved. Yet, her actions do not seem all for naught, the Changelings still live and fight in her name even after 500 years. There is so little light in this world, can something cause a spark to make the light bigger or will the light go completely out?


A light will be seeded very soon that will change the course of everything.

I never heard of this Titus you coughed of... unless you mean Captain Titus of the Ultramarines from that video game I never played. Who is this other badass you speak of? Why are you speaking to Twilight Tragedy and why in that rude manner?

And Twilight Tragedy is answering back...
... did I cross some invisible line of sanity/insanity?
If so, I am alright with this situation.

If you gentlemen and lady will excuse me, I have fanfiction to read! I have work I enjoy doing and women to hide from (I am shy).

I can not decide what to say.
How about this: This chapter has a big idea concept that is mind blowing!

Which do you think? Dragon Force 'Dragon's Rule' or Dance Of The Sugarplum Breezie as background music
DragonForce! Pick DragonForce!
But seriously man great story so far I'm looking forward to reading more of this.

Also hi Mugen it's me, William Sstrider!

Here we are looking at Shining Armor, nice pony but things are off. It shouldn't take others seconds to remember who he is, not the least of which is his own sister. Something is odd about this almost like something created him and placed him here and reality is trying to play catch-up.

Well, congratulations are in order: you actually made me care about a story fully focused on Shining Armor. Not an easy feat.


I do mean Shining Armor's chapter. It is showing a theory of an evolving universe.


It is like this story universe follows some Haskell programming: lazy evaluation and infinite lists. Or, think of the universe as still being built because there are things left to be done or known.

Only that Dragonforce is my favorite band.

I have to say though the way you did Discord is amazing. I have never alternated so fast between wanting a character dead to grinning like an idiot at there antics until this. Kudos to you man!

Modern Major General from "The Pirates of Penzance."

Evil Overlord is copy right to Peter Anspach.

MLP Copyright Hasbro


You mean congrats LZ0, he's the one who wrote it. I and my two buddies just edited it a lot.

Shining Armor's placement into MLP:FIM was clumsy. From the audience point of view, where did he come from? He is Twilight's B.B.B.F.F, love interest to Cadence (unknown alicorn) and captain of Celestia's guard. We never heard of him before? Clumsy way to write Shining Armor in. Doesn't happen in our world, right? Our lives have clear cause and effect, right?

Paleb05 stated it best: something is off about how reality (in this story) is treating Shining Armor.

Part of me understands that an evolving "conscience" universe is not a new idea and best left to beings who are more than me. This is a fictional story written by someone else and I don't know everything. I could be wrong about Shining Armor's orgins. Part of me also understands that universe does not know everything. Like me, it is not perfect and like me it evolves to survive. I don't see how you can evolve if you know everything.

I should have ask this at the start: tell you more of what?


There is a reason these storylines are running in parallel to each other, that's all I'll say.


Not me, from the get-go I wanted the character dead. Dead-dead-dead, and probably suffer a fate even worse. Alex Warlorn is pretty good in making readers feel.

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