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Alex Warlorn

Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.


Discord is beaten, but it's the scars you can't see that take the longest to heal. Let us continue. Every one of the mane six plus one has seems to have worked their way through their problems . . . but there are sure a lot of loose ends to tie-up, and one of these loose threads when pulled just might start unraveling everything!
The turning point between Fluttershy and Fluttercruel starts now.

Laughter, tears, smiles, actions, adventure, frights, darkness and light and heart-warmings ALL await you!

The Audio adaption Is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GqJMx6kYyU&list=PLABD0AEFCD46D56DA&feature=plcp
ORIGINAL fan-art, ORIGINAL fan-music and VOICE ACTORS galore await!

I promise this will be one ride that will not disappoint.

Recursive fanart and fan stories are here. http://alexwarlorn.deviantart.com/journal/MLP-FiM-Pony-POV-Series-Fanworks-audio-adaption-274110361 Many are rubber stamped by me as optional canon stories that reveal some of other sides of these stories.

Tropes page found here. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/PonyPOVSeries

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 602 )

Read it on dA. Will read it again.
Primero, negros!

Ooh brilliant, I just finished Season 1 a few hours ago I think. Hard to say with the lack of sleep.

And so it was, that Ms. "Cruel" made her rebellion of mind, finally arising to be "The host" rather than "The parasite". For a pony born to be cruel, she certainly seems more grumpy than anything. Though why am I talking anyways? I read this one already. And geesh, will you relax a little shy? I know you're timid, but does the loss of power really make you that jumpy? Ah well.

And so, the next season began, where rough sand, rubbing against all the different people and conflicts, would finally grow into something beautiful, and from the most unlikely of sources, light.

Finally: :pinkiegasp: PEARLS!!!!

This was the reason I begun to read Fanfic

ITS FINALLY HERE :pinkiehappy:

Uh oh!
If this is a sign of things to come, I am very worried. And just where is Diamond Tiara?



Fluttercruel, "I'M SORRY! I'M SORRY! I DIDN"T MEANT TO DO IT!!!!"

It looks like business just picked up a few notches.:twilightoops:

not bad, not bad at all. Gotta feel a bit sorry for FlutterCruel, there. She was created by an act of evil and was locked up, albeit unwillingly.

Okay, few thoughts...

1. I didn't like 'Luna Eclipsed'. It had a lot of flaws and plot holes and just made me feel damned uncomfortable. Good try, but no. Still a bad episode overall.

2. FlutterCruel's got good points. She's right. And I think Fluttershy snapped. Not. Good.

3. Great writing as usual.

Okay, Fluttertshy has SNAPPED. Also, awesome way for Trixie to get brought out of it. :trixieshiftleft: Who was the other foal besides Pipsqueak and Dinky there? i thought that was Sweetie Belle.

Okay, THAT is thoroughly disturbing. :twilightoops: This is not gonna end well.

837812 Poor Fluttercruel! She just wanted to 'shake some sense' into Fluttershy (and have a night out on the town), and she accidentally kickstarts the Aponyclypse! Long-time fans know how this all ends, but yeah, the poor mare's gonna have one hard sledding before it's all over. :fluttercry:

*Whistles* Poor Cheerilee there... and poor Silver Spoon, too.

They have to walk through so much darkness...

But they are stronger than that. They can overcome it. No matter how dark it gets there is always a hint of optimism in these stories.

I have a feeling there will be a HELL of a lot of changes before they even get TO Princess Gaia (:fluttershysad:).
I am completely hooked. (As if you didn't know by now. :pinkiecrazy:)

Wow, Ditzy's still channeling the badass and defending her muffin. Don't give up! Keep fighting!

Could improve on the descriptions of Everkind Forest and its contrast from Everfree. Some grammatical and punctuation errors,

Very well done in content, though, it's almost like you really know how to evoke emotional response from readers.

Also Alex, about that fog, how come it could cure existing emotional/psychological problems of sane ponies and even undead ponies from Sunnytown but couldn't get to the mental patients? Was there something unique in their madness or is it something that simply couldn't be cured even by magic.

Also, is Princess Gaia's magical fog geo-mutagenic in addition to age-regressing and brainwashing? As in, it would transform the surrounding environment, from the forests, rivers, mountains to the towns, cities and all into far more pleasant forms of the place?

And just how far could it spread? How far is its effects?



[Looks down at bottom of page]

"Hello dears. My little foal Alex is busy enjoying his dreams right now. Now just listen to my song my little foals, let all your doubts and fears just wash away, leaving only your happiness and joy behind in mama's world."



What is going to happen next? Especially, when Derpy Knight shows up. I love how Luna's power is still protecting Pip and his family. I'm just wondering where the heck the princeesses are? Have they noticed all this going on? If not, why? If so, what are they going to do about it?
I have a feeling the worst is yet to come.:twilightoops:


Mama Princess Gaia is the best! Embrace her love! Spread her love! Enjoy the comfort of the fog!

I love the bits where we see what else is happening in Equestria, aside from the problems faced by the Mane Six plus One as they confront Princess Gaia. Nice to see one of these apocalyptic stories remember that there's more to its setting than just a handful of people!



[Put on gas mask, fire-proof suit and bring out flamethrower]

I think it's Pyro time.




*flame thrower turns into bubble blower for real*
"Mama princess Gaia knows what's best."


Your bazookas do not damage the fog. The fog loves you and hugs you and makes it all better.



Kinda like how in Evangelion, mankind is the Final Angel, I imagine that if Discord is Chaos, then the Human Race is Paradox.

Don't try to infecmake an ideal word for humans on earth; a very intelligent... thing tried that: the Matrix was nearly destroyed with the self-destruction of millions, if not billions of humans...

... Let's not get too meta. It can bring the reader out of the story sometimes.

Also... nah. I'll let my anti-heckler comment go. For now. :trixieshiftleft: As for Fluttershy, the road is paved with her good intentions... and was that Link?! As for the sea ponies... oh, look! A colony Discord missed! :pinkiesad2:

Heh, I still so like these lines:

"Could you have made it anymore girlie?" Rainbow Dash asked lowly.

"Yes, but I didn't want to waste everyone's time putting pink bows on all the parasprites." Princess Gaia nodded. "But I could get somepony on it right away if it means that much to you!"

Rainbow Dash groaned, smacking a hoof to her forehead in frustration.

Poor Dash!

And I s9 love the bits with Onyx and Blueblood. They both seem so sweet as little colts. It's a pity that Rarity, especially, didn't meet Lil' Blueblood. And I truly and dearly love the bit with 'Sunny Days'. She so wants to have real friendship with her little ponies; now, at least for a while, she gets exactly that.:trollestia:

And poor AJ, seeing the truth through Princess Gaia's sweet lies even when a big part of her didn't want to. :ajsleepy:

Your youtube links are messed up. Also... *Hands Applejack a blindfold* On. Now.


Then can you please tell me the proper way to fix them please?


:D :D :D isn't it though?
I had music for scenes, but I can't ever get the in story links to work right.

This chapter was EPIC!!!:raritystarry:
Poor Trixie though.:trixieshiftright: She will never be able to bring out her own Element of Magic until she can get over that block of becoming part of another set and losing her individuality.
I look forward to---HOLD UP!! WAIT A MINUTE!!!:applejackconfused:

"Two lines of light shined from each of the ponies, forming a six pointed star."

Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle. Trixie couldn't get her element out. Who was the sixth pony?:rainbowhuh:

871966 FiMfiction's tagging uses brackets (like in forums) for comments, not HTML; I dunno for sure, but it ought to be the same for the stories, I think.


"Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle. Trixie couldn't get her element out. Who was the sixth pony?"


"Everything disappeared in an explosion of white light! The end."

As I was saying...I look forward to the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::eeyup:

Very epic. As for story links... [ url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7xxgRUyzgs0]Cult of Personality. remove the first space after the first bracket and you should be good.

As for Trixie... so far, she's come so far. You've done a great job bringing out what we glimpsed at in 'Boast Busters'.

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