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A German Panzer column during world war 2 gets pulled into Equestria where they stumble upon the crystal empire. Meanwhile, Equestria's hostile northern neighbour, The Gryphon Empire, is gearing up for war. Will the Germans be able to turn the odds in Equestria's favour?
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this a very good story so far and I hope that you continue it soon.
5/5
Gah. Nobody remembers their history, but at least I can live with the plot. After the last few call of duty games, I've grown used to ignoring glaring faults.
not too bad. A few spots could be reworded to sound a little better, other than that i like it
I'm getting sucked into the reading. I love it so far!
Fucking awesome bro
Some things need to be looked on though like Candace saying she is the granddaughter of celestia and Luna (implying celestia and Luna had a foal and then that pony gave birth to Candace.) She then states that celestia and Luna are her aunts. Something needs a change.
All in all though? Mustache worthy
Nice but make the soldiers show a little more aggression. I mean not brutalizing them but come on a tiny purple pony threatening you.
Not bad, but could use a bit more "germanized" English. Accents and names in particular. For example, "As I said before, I am Colonel Wilhelm Schlesinger, 3rd Panzer army. Wehrmacht." can be turned into "As Ich said before, Ich am Oberst Wilhelm Schlesinger, Dritte (3te) Panzer-Division, Wehrmacht.
The author of this story, which takes TF2 into Equestria, did a wonderful job with the Medic's german accent. You could use what's written there to improve this story.
Your getting a like favourite and follow mate
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you are correct, but just for the sake of the story lets just have them in Russia
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Good Work so far, Keep it up
I like this idea of the Wehrmacht helping out Equestria, though I think the column should have had more of a reaction upon seeing the crystal ponies. Nevertheless, please continue
A fimfic where ww2 germans aren't basterds evil or baby eating nazis!
Sir! I applaud you! tumbe up fav and follow
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I want everyone to look at this and think...
Think about it
like the story and you're writing style
but i agree with Ponytime the initial response to sentient talking miniature horses is a bit odd, but besides this a good story to follow.
one fav and follow here
Theme music time:
Hohohoho, the plot continues
hope that the germans don't get themselve killed
GOOD God this is a GOOD story. You Are really Good
I request MOAR of this AWESOME story.....pls
Sombra vs. an armor column
This is gonna be good
Hopefully I'm not being nitpicky and annoying but for Rarity's part "They flew a flag of many hues" not hews (that's like chopping with an axe or a sword) and Fluttershy's "Petting zoo with many tiny ewes. Sorry if I'm being nitpicky. I do really love the story though, it is very well written.
King Sombra Vs. Army?
Cool.
King Sombra Vs. German Army?
Kick.Ass.
King Sombra Vs. NAZI Army?
Dis's Gunna Be Good.
2165888 "What? Sorry Sombra, can't hear you over my 88 cannon!"
The germans should set up some mines to slow down the enemy, and I would also advice them to take the blitzkrieg doctrine so they can have extra tigers and stormtrooper squads, skip the kriegs barracks and go straight for the assault phase so they can have nebelwerfers.
And that is the story of how a nazi infantry man saved the crystal empire
I am amazed of how well you are pulling this off. This is fucking amazing!
Keep going bro.
2165958 Is 88 Cannon A Type Of Cannon Or A Misspelling Of "Cannons"?
(I'm Not Good At Gun Names :3)
2166021 The 88 is technically classified as a high velocity cannon.
2165994 I'd go for the defensive doctrine. Flak 88's, off map rocket strikes and building defences.
2166052Oooooooooh.Well It Sucks To Be Sombra.
2166055 true, but a stormtrooper ambush is always usefull, specially in big city.
Fluttershy speaking german eh? Prepare your heart medication!
The germans are taking being thrown into a world with magic talking ponies pretty well
My brain gave me the 'go to sleep' command before I could even finish half of the chapter...
Where'd the action go?
2185565 There has to be plot before an action sequence.
The Germans have a badass level on par with Canada.
Canada is badass bros.
Dun forget that.
Nazi's singing digging Pony songs? I don't know if i should find it horryfining or awsome.
45 men in the column, and 45 likes.
Please make more quickly.
More Pleas
I'll give this a try when I get home from this weekend's work... but my first reaction to seeing the description is:
"Nazis in a world where the highest ideal is friendship, harmony, and tolerance? This can only end well(!)"
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They're not nazis. Most of the German army did not belong to the nazi party. Most did not even like hitler. It's like me in the marine corps. I don't belong to the Democratic Party and I don't really like Obama. I just do what I'm told
The gunner pulled the trigger. There was silence for a moment, then an almighty blast as 3.5 inches of steel left the barrel of the Tiger’s gun in excess of 200 miles per hour. It slammed into the ground just in front of Sombra and blasted him back.
200 miles an hour? I know cannon rounds did not travel at that speed. It would have gone literally ten times the speed
2620719 Well the exact muzzle velocity of an 88mm gun is about 900m per second, making it about 500 km per hour (310 miles per hour).
well i liked it
2619288 well, who said that they where firm nazis?
i doubt even half the soldiers even gave 2 shits about the propaganda about the jews
2620747
That is still incorrect. It is true that it travels at 900 meters per second which is equal to 2925 feet per SECOND. Then you multiply by 60 which equals to 175500 feet per MINUTE. Then you multiply by 60 to and you find 10530000 feet per HOUR. Then divide 10530000/5280 which equals to 1994 miles an hour. A cannon round traveling at 310 miles an hour equals to 450 feet per second.
2621056 Yeah, complicated mathematics is not my field. Thats why I put "In excess" in the story.
The alternate timeline has just escalated
I wonder how Celestia is going to react to the news of the Germans and Cadance.
Oooh an update, funny thing too since I was just talking about this in the World of Tanks Forum's MLP topic
2620747 Is Cadenza on a state of comatose?