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Mechawrecker
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Mechawrecker
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Interesting first chapter. I'll keep reading.
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Thanks, mate! The clop starts a little later~
somehow I got sucked that I didn't even notice that I was finishing reading the epilogue.
p.S. waiting for Chrysalis to build a new hive?
Magnificent deception
I prefer classic Changeling any way. They were by design perfect. There method of gaining food was the one thing that needed slight changes...
Awesome chapter
Nice quicky. But that literally all they had time for...
How do one accidently run into a prisoners room...
Dont they have guard or room describtions?
I dont like Rainbow Bugs. All the Classic Changelings need is a change of tactics.
Nurses, teachers, doctors, therapy assistance, lover for hire... So many methods to get love
♡
The new Changeling Hive of Chrysalis should go for cooperation not like Thorax hive submission!
Let both hive life there way of life. The ones that shows sustainability & prosperity in higher amount will win the race of being the better Changelings.
O screw this!
MORE RAINBOWBUG PONYS?
Screw this im out... It was so full of potencial
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That's what an interesting plot can do!
I'm not sure if there'll be a sequel, but I might if there's another contest.
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Yeah, I wanted to keep them as a foil to the reformed characters. At least for now.
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It's been well-defined that Twilight doesn't like guards in her castle because it feels less like home.
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That would be interesting, but 99% of the changelings already chose to stick with Thorax, so there's not much competition.
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You do you, but I hope you'll at least appreciate the message behind the story without raging about my character choices.
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nevertheless there is a small fly in the ointment. For I don't really like the canonical way of reformation of the Changelings. They had so much interesting potential, but Canon decided to do it as clumsy as possible.
"the consumer can never generate more energy than it consumes. No matter how perfect the mechanism is, gradually the energy will be less and less and sooner or later it will stop" (if it were not so, then the perpetual motion machine would have been invented long ago)
if the laws of physics work in the MLP world just like we do, then the actions that Thorax did to leave hunger in the canon can be compared to throwing a heap of dry leaves into a fire to maintain it (The flame will become bright but it will burn out quickly) - He only brought a bunch of the energy of love that he collected in the crystal empire and said that everyone should share it among themselves without remembering that the reserves need to be replenished. It would make sense if they moved the hive closer to the crystal empire (where love is literally in the air) or another locality, but they continue to live remotely. All this, sooner or later, will lead to even greater hunger than it was before Thorax, and it may be too late to do something, since there was no replenishment policy.
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Interesting theory, but remember that this is a world of pastel ponies and magic. I'm pretty sure physics is different between our worlds.
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I agree - this is a world of magic, but even magic in any fantasy is subject to certain rules. Any event shown in the series can more or less be explained. (except for the chaos magic that Discord did.)
;)
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Maybe they're getting love off each other? That's why I added the greenhouses in the story to show that they're changing eating habits from pure love to solid food.
Not bad
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Thanks! I hope you enjoyed.
Awww, I really enjoyed it
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The hive appreciates your love contribution!
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a logical argument, but then they lose their individuality as an unusual species. Which is a disadvantage from the artistic point of view.
P.S. I remind you that I am not making a claim to you personally, and all my discontent is directed at the canon. I apologize if I hurt you somehow.
P.P.S. sorry for my English.
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That's a fair claim, but their transformation abilities would still be unchanged, which is the defining trait for their species.
Also, thanks for the consideration! You're good in my book.
hey mech, have not seen you around since Q&S. Glad to see you still writing.
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Good to see you too! I'm still struggling through university right now, so I haven't written much.
I love this story! Pharynx and Chrysalis are some of my favourite characters. I can’t imagine how long it took you to write this!
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5 days, Autumn.
5 long, extremely unproductive days.
Thanks for the support!
Sorry about the dickhead above, some people don’t like character growth lol. Anyway, I’m digging our protagonist’s dynamic so far. Good work.
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No biggie! Everyone's got a preference.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Nicely done!
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.
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I see several ‘lings moving into Equestria, where they can gather some of the ambient love to send back. They could fit into a lot of places, after all. Quite apart from all the naughty possibilities inherent in shapeshifting, they’d be invaluable in the fashion industry. They’d be way better any mannequin.
It’s also my headcanon that Cadance and Shining have invited some of the hive’s best/most experienced infiltrators to the empire, to help the crystal ponies learn about the modern world. And if Equestria has love to spare, then the empire…
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The hive shall take your thoughts into consideration.
That was a fun little tail, quite cute too
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The queen is pleased with your comment.
So wait...Chrysalis is Pharnyx mother and lover? talking about a mommy kink hahaha
It was a short and interesting read gotta say plus they are actually a very cute couple...hope to see more of them
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It was written for a Mother's Day contest after all.
Thanks for the support!
Quoting a certain magnificent bastard, 'Yeeeeeeeeeeesssssss!'
Now work from within to topple the tyranny of friendship!
They did the sex!
... I'm surprised Ocellus didn't smell anyth-wait, regular changelings don't have noses, okay, nevermind.
Gotta love professional pony security.
Starting to grow conflicted, eh, Chryssie?
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Viva la revolucion!
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Twilight should really get some guards in her castle...
The new way might be somewhat better, but they're going too far into submission. Plus, they are ignoring anything good she's ever done. Bunch of ungrateful bastards.
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A ruler's job is to make tough choices, even when there's no right answer.
Eh, I'm not a fan of some crayonling designs, but some fan designs for Chryssie are good. As long as she keeps her defined pupils.
Plus, there's still much more character development and reason provided than for the initial reformation of Thorax and others.
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I've always had a soft spot for reformed baddies.
Well, that went pretty well.
"Friendship lessons!"
"... Can't you just throw me into Tartarus instead?"
<Thorax> I wonder why am these new changelings have colours similar to yours, brother.
<Pharynx> I really have no idea. <.< - >.>
<Thorax>... Gasp! The stork must've seen you and matched their colours to yours!
<Pharynx>...
<Chrysalis> *facehoof*
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Considering their crimes, I'd say they got off pretty light, but that's a matter of opinion.
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Oh, Thorax... Sweet, innocent Thorax...
Best fiction I ever read ty Mechawrecker.
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I really appreciate it!