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It was good, but the clop part during less of the half of the story is ofen not the best, try to make them more long or other next time ^^
It's still a good story, and i have the same problem with my clop.
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Fair enough. I wanted the story to be remembered as more than just clop, but I get how this economy works.
10593715
Like i said, i do the same thing so
I understand this
This is pretty good. I like it still.
10593979
Thanks! Any particular problems I need to fix?
This was a good read. I would certainly love to see how they handle an incestious pregnancy.
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I'm pretty sure Frost finished in the wrong hole for that, but I could be wrong.
10594795
Oh i'm aware he finished in her tailhole, just if they continue like this i mean
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Ah, I think these two have earned a little rest, but they might make a reappearance somewhere else.
*hint, hint*
10595776
I couldn't agree more. Bro hoof!
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In that case i look forward to reading more of their antics
10595790
You can keep adding "really"s, it would still be fitting.
absolutely awesome
10598205
Thanks mate! Glad you enjoyed it.
Story is good. Clop is good. You did a good job with this one.
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Thanks mate! Means a lot.
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I’ll be waiting.
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You'll just have to stay tuned to find out.
10709135
Oh, I will.
10594204
a little bit with punctuations.
paragraph 7, 111, there are more....
10739155
Could you quote the specific sentences? I'm not sure how to access the paragraph numbers.
7
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10739793
Thanks! I'll fix those soon.
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My Little Reviews & Feedback I reviewed it.
10742614
Thanks for your input! I'll definitely use it for future stories.
Show me what you've got...
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There are plenty more stories on my page with varying levels of sauce.
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I'm a reviewer from the Reviewers' Mansion.
^This^, is me simply announcing that I am currently reviewing your story.
Nothing more.
Nothing less.
Although I will say this fic is most certainly juicy.
10839122
Ah, that makes more sense! I hope you enjoyed it.
10839344
Patience young one.
Hello there!
Your story has finally been reviewed by the Reviewers' Mansion, you can find it here!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed reading.