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This is going to be an interesting clop
How fast can you be, if you know what i mean
Ocellus believes Her race's evolution came about by the magical hybridization of termites and cicadas, but doesn't believe changelings and gryphons can interbreed because of a little thing like different evolutionary paths? Nah, magic will find a way, science isn't the driver for this one, more like the guy in the back seat who hands out snacks.
This is a fun read so far, I wonder if Gallus will the affected the entire time and if he will also be visiting the hive as well later on in the story?
Changeling sub magic? Need more of this...
Quick note: When characters address one another, put a comma before the name. That makes it easier on the reader and helps avoid misunderstandings. For example:
This
has a totally different meaning than
To take an example from the story:
This sentence could very well mean that it puts light on all things Ocellus, rather than being directed at her.
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Thanks for the correction I'll go ahead and fix it ^^
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Happy to help.
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She also claimed it wouldn't affect Non-Changelings, and yet Gallus could hardly walk after she wanted him. Ocellus appears to be operating under... questionable information.
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You could bill it as her info being based on pre-transformation changelings. Keeping the effects uncertain.
Great job
"Well, your Highness, there's good news and bad news. The good news is, your wings don't cause non-changeling females to want to breed uncontrollably with you."
"And the bad news?"
"Do we look like non-changelings?"
" ...Yes. "
"whoopsies!" * fwooshes*
"Oh fudgesicles."
it good. more please^^
This was simply hilarious XD
Ooh this is a new one.
This chapter's comedy was great.
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Life... uh, uh, finds a way.
Should have excused Ember as well, I'm sure a session resulting in "improved relations between the dragons and changelings" couldn't hurt.
Nice, I wonder if Chrysalis with come into play later in the story? I wonder what Larynx will be doing on his end?
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I mean... I might, but Chrysie's partner would probably be.... non-consenting..
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If that's the case, he might have to write a longer chapter then.
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Something about finishing 10 seconds flat?
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Oh don't worry, Ember is not going to take this little misadventures lying down I assure you.
Whelp, I think we might be seeing futa in a future chapter...
I can't tell if I like that, or dislike that.
Will all the femdom be done with changelings?
Nice, I wonder if Chrysalis could dominate multiple stallions at once??
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Stallions and Changeling Males. A certain 2 changeling males, and a certain stallion.
Maybe I dunno. I probably won't include her.
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Best ship
Ok so I have found a Grammatical error, and I gather were intending to make it old English, However, you're using it the wrong way and as such makes it difficult for OCD Authors like myself to simply pass by. Here is what I propose.
She was currently sat down in the library with her friends studying. Twas it the test that was coming up tomorrow? No, it couldn't be.
The word Twas is an old English way of saying Was it or it was, another example of this is 'Tis' it means: it is.
Is it bad i want Thorax to finally show a little backbone instead of being a bottom bitch? Cause this makes him so pathetic...
Well he always looked like a sub, this just serves to prove he is one. once again nice chapter, keep it up.
Time to lewd the changeling horse
Great work
Oh this was a fun read, I wonder if he will be forever submissive to her all the time from this point on.
Gallus: " YEAH! We're just rehearsing for a musical. It's called 'Put That Thing Back Where It Came From or So Help Me'.
good story so far, keep up the good work!
A race of formerly emotionally unstable beings who are consumed by the urge to mate every seven years...
Wait, Changelings are Equestrian Vulcans?...
>loving rape
Hmmmm
Well this was interesting chapter, though it was interesting to see Sandbar also getting the same treatment, would have like to see more of how much of a wreck Gallus is, and wonder if it will have a permanent effect on him in the future.
Two month celebration!
She lied...
I’ll have a medic come over soon he’s just got on his flight from germany
This probably counts as an invasion of privacy.
Nah, I’ll just let you suffer.
Ah. Sex = sleep. Magic. Makes sense.
Yes. Because what you guys did was practically rape.
"We need to burn those sheets."
I can't stop laughing XD
Hmmm
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