Years after her final defeat, Chrysalis finds herself freed from her stone prison, yet is now trapped in the form of a creature she despises most of all. Lost, alone, and without her hive or allies, she struggles to adapt to her new circumstances leading her towards twin doctors. Now given a new way to live, will Chrysalis change into something better? Or remain the same villain she always has been?
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I like it m8. Track.
10739847
I take it that's good right?
10739894
Yeah, i like it so far the possibilities are great! though I do have a wishlist but I live it entirely upon ya!
My take on the Chrysalis redemption (aside from hating the evolved form of this concept) is that she doesn't really need it.
The ending of the 6th season has just made it worse, in regards to the relationship of ex-changelings and Chrysalis and her "need to change". Ugh.
Don't have much hope for this story, but beggars can't really be choosers and there is some chance for entertainment, so I'll be watching for the updates.
GLHF!
Alright, looks interesting. Added to tracking shelf.
10740880
Question. So tracking stories and favoriting them are two different things?
10740945
I suppose. The way I get it tracking is about notification about updates and favoriting is about having that story nicely in your bookshelf.
10741073
Ah I see. That makes sense as the last major story I wrote, people were clearly reading it, despite not everyone having it in their favorites.
10741190
When tracking you also get notification about blogs associated with that story, so I'm tracking to know what's going with story, then favoriting after it's finished.
10741225
Ah okay.
Cant tell if she was faking it.
10741815
You mean Chrysalis?
10741950
Yeah
10742032
All I can say is wait till chapter 3.
10742046
hehehe tease :)
10742151
Can't give everything away now can I?
10742225
hehehe i suppose no. Its fun!
10742228
I can tell you this is where the real meat of the story starts.
Looking forward to further installments
10756399
No worries. I am working on the next chapter.
Once we get our soup in you
You sure you used that sentence right? XDDD
10757493
Probably not but eh it works.
the plot thickens!
Nicely done chapter m8!
10815102
Thanks! I do wish this story had more attention, but at the same time, I am happy it has a small fan base. That means not a lot of people will be nitpicking at the minor details.
10815386
Ι mean its better to avoid the Hating Batallion for a small loyal fanbase.
10815646
True. Back in the day, I wanted to be popular simply because I thought it would finally make me feel good about myself, I was very self-loathing and insecure back then you see. But nowadays I don't really need popularity so much anymore. That and I know from experience that even if I do have a popular story, it won't matter if I am self-loathing as I will find ways to be down about said story.
I'm not expecting this story to turn into a huge thing, in fact after I finish this, I do want any future stories to be set in the same universe but on different subjects and characters. Twilight's son being one of them.
10816791
That's good thinking nice! I believe it's more satisfactory that your stories will be appreciated truly by a few than having havoc happening around. That way you will receive something more that won't let you down.
Yes a lot of potential for expansion.
10816856
I agree. I think the main problem was that when my previous story (Mommy Dash) got popular, I wasn't prepared to have readers who both criticized and praised the story at the same time. That and several other factors pushed my self-loathing and insecurity into overdrive to the point I projected it on my story. To be honest, more than likely the next story I write after this one will be a reboot of Mommy Dash. Looking back, I think I had a good idea for a story, I just felt I didn't execute it well, though a lot of people would disagree with me on that point. Basically, it would take the same concept present in the previous version only altered, in fact, it won't even be titled "Mommy Dash" and would focus less on fluffy moments.
The story about Twilight's son would probably be the third story and form a neat trilogy. I do have ideas for other stories set in this universe, but time will tell if I go beyond the planned trilogy I have.
10816871
Ι'll be standing by then. :)
10816896
You know? If you want I can note you some of the ideas I have about stories beyond the trilogy?
10816901
Dont spoil! on a pm then
The seeds of doubt are planted! Also some mild of denial.
10822865
Yep! Things are starting to change for her.
Tear rolled out :(.
Just amazing!
10853907
For Chrysalis especially right?
Nuuu, Chryssie's beautiful form is gone!
Wait, three horns? Huh, now that's weird.
The pony form is rather feeble.
So, all in all, she was rather horny.
'was dropping weight' - was dropping a weight
20/10 in subterfuge.
Oooooooh, someone's gonna pay, big time.
Well, she still needs to buck whoever did this to her in the groin.
Mother of the year, there.
I still wonder what's the significance of her having three horns. Is she a mode-locked crayonling now? That setup would fit the horn + antlers setup the two brothers have.
'Then a smirk formed upon the
cold and aged visage' - unneeded line break.
Another good chapter, keep it up!
Nothing wrong with time skips, but overuse leads to cliches.
10886242
Little spoiler, but I plan on another one near the end. That's all I am going to say about that.
Before I read this, I must know: Did Cozy and Tirek get released too?
10917108
Nope.
I'm a little disappointed. Plastered Chrysalis would've been the perfect opportunity for her to slip up and reveal who she used to be.
10917194
True, but that would disrupt the planned ending I have in store.
I can easily say I enjoyed this chapter a lot.