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Spazz Kid


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Spike asks a rather unexpected question.

Things happen.

(Cover image has nothing to do with the story.)
(Added sex tag just to be safe)

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Comments ( 23 )

Really funny.

10771184
Thanks, my dude.

lol

lol what the hay did I just read?:twilightoops::rainbowlaugh:

:duck: And that's why Spike's best dragon
:facehoof: Rainbow why? Why? Why?
:moustache: LoL
:trollestia: and as usual I do nothing

Twilight's going to have to answer those questions eventually...or at least the ones she actually has an answer to:rainbowlaugh:

I hate this.

Too bad. I gave you an upvote. 👍. It's absurd, enormously funny, and delivered with impossibly well-sequenced comedic timing. I'm putting it on my stories I recommend list. Worse, I'm giving you the coveted gold star. 💫

Made in under two hours as a challenge from my boys over at Discord.

Sometimes letting the words flood the page and resisting the urge to edit for reasonableness is the right choice. I'm going to take note of the concept.

"Hi, Discord." Twilight deadpanned. "Also, pigs can't fly."
... "Then, what's flying towards that window right now?" Discord asked, pointed towards the closest window. As if on cue, the window bursts open, and in comes a sweaty, bruised, and slightly drunk looking, Rainbow Dash.
:rainbowlaugh:I nearly pissed myself.

The misbehavior in the joke for a jock just enlisted in an elite military corp actually works for RD if you think about it. Good job!

10771523
Okay, uh....

It's absurd, enormously funny, and delivered with impossibly well-sequenced comedic timing.

Aw, man, ya gonna make me tear up, you... :rainbowkiss:

Worse, I'm giving you the coveted gold star. 💫

:raritystarry: Whoa.... what?:rainbowderp:

The misbehavior in the joke for a jock just enlisted in an elite military corp actually works for RD if you think about it. Good job!

I did all of that on complete accident, writing it in a fast-paced "Type now, think later" sort of mind set.

Glad it worked out.

Thanks for the comment, man!
Lotsa love!
💕

10771480
(Laugh chain time lol)

Ha

Worse, I'm giving you the coveted gold star. 💫

:raritystarry: Whoa.... what?:rainbowderp:

Sometimes I make requests of my readers to see if something or another got understood, noticed, figured out, etc. It’s that I want to learn something. That earns a gold star. I feel I learned something from you.

I did all of that on complete accident, writing it in a fast-paced "Type now, think later" sort of mind set.

Don’t get cocky, but don’t ignore what you’ve done, either. Sometimes I go into a fugue and 15 hours later I’ve written a novella. Getting it out and on paper (or computer) is so important. I’m not saying what I wrote, or what you wrote, could not benefit by some proofing, but... :derpytongue2:

okay... :derpyderp1:

Let me put it this way. Any other day, this story would have feature boxed, maybe up to first, at the rate you got upvotes and views. It’s a crying shame that it did not! Too much competition, today.:fluttercry: I’m hoping overnight, that will change.:twilightsmile:

10772131
I honestly don't know what to say...

Learned something?
From me?

I'm quite frankly honored.
Never before has someone said this to me.

And once again, I find my self at a lack for words..

Thank you, kind stranger, and I hope our paths cross once more!
(Okay, um, that sounded out of place, but whatever."

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One last thing: I posted your story to some groups to try to boost the story. Keep writing.
UPDATE: I made a forum post on the Shameless Self-Promotion Bureau Group. Don’t hate me. :scootangel:

10772131
Yeah I agree. There was just too many popular stories like The Alicorns Warrior, Twilight Gets A Puppy, The Negotiations-Verse Story, Griffon Of Canterlot, Some Leech, getting in there was basically impossible.

But this definitely deserves being FEATURED. No doubt about that.

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The way the feature list works, very popular stories that aren't new but are newly updated, such as The Alicorn Warrior, always appear in one of the bottom three slots, but new stories appear in the top seven slots (top slot being the most popular). Thus the competition from new stories is never from older stories, but from new ones.

Although it is possible for an updated story to go from the bottom three to one of the top seven slots if it gets enough likes. Even then, they are always newer stories that were submitted less than 2 (maybe 3) weeks ago and are extremely popular stories (even for a featured story) to pull that off, and don't happen very often.
 

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well this story is feature-tier in my opinoin

10772723

I was just explaining how the feature list works since how the bottom three stories are selected isn't known by a lot of users.

Regardless, this story is featured now with the mature mode turned off.

10772729

Regardless, this story is featured now with the mature mode turned off.

W H A T

Contracts to being featured dude. XD

10772765
Featured at 10:01 AM PDT at 7th. Nice! :raritywink:
It may have gotten higher. Don't know how to figure that out. Anypony?

Why do you hate such a glorious creation made by your own hand? This is a 12/10 in my book.

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