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Christs Disciple


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A year after Twilight is made the sole ruler of Equestria, pony attempts to take over the nation. Twilight deals with it the way she always does.










Written for Categorical Grant's 2021 Cuddlefic Contest. My first attempt at one. So, possibly not enough cuddling.

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Now I just imagine a list of names written on one of the walls. The Great and Powerful Trixie, Sunset Simmer, Starlight Glimmer and Tempest Shadow at the top.

Cuddle dungeon huh?

She brutally tortures them to death even though they’re children, if the godawful finale is any indication.

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I know. I’m saying that writer should’ve been the one who wrote the finale. Cozy getting cuddled would’ve been a much better ending.

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Fair enough, I suppose. That being said, how was I supposed to have gotten all of that from your original comment? It doesn't talk about this fic whatsoever; it's literally nothing but you bashing the finale.

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Well, sorry, but to clarify, that’s what I meant. This ending would be so much better and I wish it was how the canon Twilight would’ve behaved. That would’ve been so much better!!!! 😭

Damn, kudos for including so many of the prompts from rule four. :pinkiegasp:

Good luck in the contest! :twilightsmile:

I never read pony on pony snuggles, i prefer anon. This is good though. My horizons are broadening.

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