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McDufus456


Hi, the name's Mike, and I'm just an idiot who wrote a story to pass English 11; I stopped afterward. Fast forward to 2020, and I'm here finishing what I started :P

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One day I woke up to find out that I had turned into a pony. But not just any pony, I became Lauren Faust, the mother to Celestia and Luna. Now I’m living in the Canterlot castle and I have a bunch of royals acting like children, Changelings running around, and an ancient prankster stuck inside my head. All I can say is things get a little hectic.

Rewrite/return to fimfic. Story featured from
October/12/ 2020 to October/16/ 2020. Thank You.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 133 )

This is a well done fiction... I give it at least 8.5/10 so far. Not sure if there is going to be more chapters.

Its nice to see this story back.

Interesting,I hope this continues.

Nice to see that this story has continued and in a new way too!

I seriously just gasped!:pinkiegasp:

It's back!:yay::heart:

I am glad to see this once-forgotten story finally get an update.
However, is this a re-write chapter? Because I found some discrepancies in the first half of the chapter. (and I cannot remember the original one.)

"It's A-Alex. Why can't I move?" I panicked in place, only able to move my mouth.

"(Hmm, Alexander… it’s a nice name

It might be the cultural thing, but how could Lauren know his real name without him telling her? From what I understand, Alex does not always be a shorten name.

It can't be.. not Trollestia!

Alex is too knowledgeable for someone who only know MLP just by being forced to watch some episodes. There is no way he would know a meme of the character without being a certain level of fan himself.

YES!! OUR CREATOR HAS RETURNED

The pitiful sight of the noble who knocked himself out brought Laurens eyes to tears as she tried not to laugh. Cadence and Celestia quickly ran over in an attempt to calm the mare down before she lost her concentration. The mares laughter only grew as both princesses desperately tried to calm her down. Then Celestia tripped on Currency.

I remember this. I could never find it again, the original anyway.

Nice! I never read the original, so everything in this is fresh for me. I want more already!
Great chapter, I look forward to the next!
(I can foresee a great many instances of Alex saying the ponies are stupid, intellectually. The probable excuse would be that her standards for a species' baseline intelligence were raised by the long time in the human world.)
How long was Lauren in the human world for anyway? Lifetimes? A few hundred years? A few thousand? Not very clear, though going by the first bit, a few hundred, and that would translate to the thousands with asynchronous time between universes.

Oh My Celestia!! This is such a cute little story. PLEASE write more for this. I really wanna see where this story goes!

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Alex is too knowledgeable for someone who only know MLP just by being forced to watch some episodes. There is no way he would know a meme of the character without being a certain level of fan himself.

Maybe he saw more episode or clips of them but refuse to acknowledge them even to himself (he is in negation or how some people say Closet brony:ajsmug:)
,as for the memes , bump into memes is is almost unavoidable,(is a real life fact for me at least:twilightsheepish:)

Not gonna lie, you hooked me with the dust bomb.

SWETT BABY RAY'S BARBECUE, YOU'RE BACK!

Good to see you!

Welcome back. Don't remember what i felt about this story but will give it a read.

I liked the original and was sad to see it go. I guess I'll read this, probably after several chapters are up though.

Holy crap I remember reading the original version of this story. I never thought I'd see it again.

Nice to see this return. i notice with the rewrite Lauren didn't plan on a human host so abit less dickish on her part. and the reason she is small is because she is depowered right now?

It took the Royal Guards 3 days to find everyone inside the throne room, 4 years later and they still can't find Currency.

That was so stupid.. I love it.

Well, at least he did a rewrite.

Why'd you remove the story in the first place, anyways?

ngl, the end of this chapter made me laugh so hard i cried XD

Me gusto el capítulo espero que sigas subiendo más capítulos (no se Inglés y aún así estoy leyéndolovon Google traductor :P)

It took a minute or so for my mind to kick in, and realize that I was holding my breath in fear. I wanted to run, I wanted to scream. In fact, I was about to scream, but as soon as I inhaled, I started to choke on the thick dust floating through the air. I ended up wheezing and coughing, thumping my arm against my chest.

To quote from Six Queens, by Princess OtakuGeek

There are moments in a pony's life when their brains just shut down as they try to process something. Quite frankly, given how her day had been going, Twilight was surprised it hadn't happened earlier; though she imagined that having several changelings bow down to you and call you 'your highness' was the straw that broke the proverbial camel's back. And judging by everypony else's expressions, she wasn't the only one. Her friends were pretty much a given to be sure, but her brother, his wife, Celestia, Luna and every assembled guard all had blank expressions of shock and confusion as they all tried to put the pieces together.

Wow, I've never really noticed how I've always had a horrible user name... Huh...

... I dunno. Sounds a bit Mcdoofy to me!

Since I've already read the old story, is it worth re-reading it again? How much of a rewrite it is anyway?

For anyone wondering, previous versions can be found here:
https://fimfetch.net/story/279908/since-when-am-i-faust
Or even an older revision here:
http://svimik.com/fimfiction/?sort=name&search=since-when-am-i-faust

Though I'm not sure if it's the same story, that one was written by The Otaku Architect.

I just hope that this time they will succeed when negotiating with Chrysalis

Hiver's Page could do that when being just a unicorn, why not Alex and Lauren as alicorn

"Well... I don't really know where to begin. What would you like to know?"

The pitiful sight of the noble who knocked himself out brought Laurens eyes to tears as she tried not to laugh. Cadance and Celestia quickly ran over in an attempt to calm the mare down before she lost her concentration. The mares laughter only grew as both princesses desperately tried to calm her down. Then Celestia tripped on Currency.

From the outside of the castle, the stain glass windows suddenly became black, and no light passed through for days.

Worth it. :ajsmug:

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Same person. Read the description.

I really liked the ending
Also it's surprisingly rare to have a displaced human who doesn't cry like a drama queen paragraphs after paragraphs.
You got my attention

Luna looked up at her sister in a perplexed manner .“But Tia, nopony has lived long enough to be considered unseen for a ‘long’ time.”

Discord would beg to differ

Suddenly green fire came blazing through the window. I immediately ducked for cover, it's not every day you see a flame about the size of a football, go dancing around the room. It found its place in front of Celestia materializing into a letter. The white alicorn glanced my direction and started to laugh."Oh, mother don't worry it's only a price of paper." Celestia teased shaking the letter around in her magical grip.

Piece of paper

Celestia had the unfortunate duties of day court. Each Nobel citizen demanding that their wants be satisfied like a rotten child demands of their parents. Currently, the headache she was dealing with was a noble pony by the name of Currency Driver. He was a banker who wanted the royal funds to go to a private pool within his home. To say the least, the selfish and ridiculous things ponies would come up with boggled her mind.

Why would he need money to go to a pool in his house? Or unless he's gonna build it

I remember this story! I loved it when it was still up! Glad to hear your back!

Hello everyone, thank you for all the comments and support. I may not reply to every comment but I read them all and leave a 👍 when I’ve seen it.

10479004 10479274 10479457 10479491 10479134 There shall be more! 👍

10479978 To put it bluntly, I felt like it was pressure or a job that I had to do. And I could never find a good way to continue the story the way it was headed. So I figured, at the time at least, that the best course of action would be to get rid of it. And from there my delete happy ways just ran rampant. The only copy I had left was what I forgot on Grammarly.


10479091 10479156 10479192 10479216 10479641 10479673 10480114 Thanks, I’m glad to be back.


10479215 10479523 10480603 10480623 10480633 Good point, thanks for the catch, I appreciate it.

10479835 Yeah, to me it was just too cruel, so that’s why I scrapped that storyline. It didn’t add anything to it either. As to Lauren’s size, I’m hoping to have her start out as normal size and gradually get taller.

10480192 Edit: Now that I've been going through the chapters I've been changing a bit more than I originally anticipated. So it's up to you.

The first three chapters are based on what I already had. And I’m tweaking them, and removing pointless filler, along with shoehorned jokes that made no sense. At least the ones I noticed, I have a bad habit of skipping over some paragraphs.:twilightoops:

Secondly, dude how did you find this! I couldn’t find this I’ve been looking for a while now... And thirdly, if you read this story on here way back when I shared a photo of a project I was building. I can take a picture of it to prove my credentials.

It's back baby! I have bookmarked the Fimfetch of this and still give it a reread every few months. I am smiling so hard right now.

Glad you're getting back in to finish this amazing story.
Hope your inspiration lasts long and stays healthy!

GOOD LUCK!!!

Ahh, I missed this, and I am so glad you included the dust bomb in this chapter

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