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McDufus_456


Hey, name's Mike, I'm a bit of an idiot. More of an artist than a writer, but I hope you enjoy the stories I worked hard to create. :twilightsmile:

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No matter how long we spend apart, we never lose sight of those we treasure. This is a story of how a mare named Faust finally managed to get home after so many years of being lost in another dimension. Her efforts and motivation were simply because of her one wish, the wish to see her daughters again...

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niceeee its always good to read sipmle stories like this especially if its explaining motivations of faust

This is pretty cool. I've been enjoying Since when am i faust, and was a nice pre-cursor to that

Watch Faust's bird suddenly turn into some random OP archmage and save her from Tirek or something lmao

10809086 Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:
10809087 Yes, a sound plan, I shall call him, Pepper! :rainbowwild:

Dr hooves you sly dog, did I say that right? This was rly nice. And still works as a prologue to the other story if want to think of it as.
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can we call the bird Pepper anyway?

10809150 Thanks, it’s nice to get a little more of her character’s backstory out there, and yes, we shall call him PEPPER! The chickadee ice wizard who fought off a bear! :rainbowlaugh:

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A EVIL MAGIC BEAR.

Oh my Gosh! A piece of literature about Lauren's character! Nearly had a heart attack when I saw this. There really needs to be more about her :yay::pinkiehappy:

10809465 I wholeheartedly agree. 👍

It would make sense if she ended up transformed on another Earth (a little closer to her native dimension) where she eventually became the source for MLP (via some precognitive magic), and a subsequent attempt to get home resulted in the current rewrite of Since When Am I Faust.

Ugh. Literally one of the worst tropes in FiMFiction.

Good to see a story about the disappearance of Faust.

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If its written well theres no need to be rude about "tropes".

Imagine if the actual Lauren Faust read this. It must be incredible awkward knowing that there are hundreds of fan fictions have her actual, real life name in them. If I saw my irl name in a story, I'd feel awkward knowing other read it.


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m8, if you don't like something, and you don't like it to the point you feel like you would need to voice your opinion, you could at least politely do it. You could do something like, "This is a good story, but...(Insert reason)", "Unfortunately, this isn't my type of story, because...", or even, "I dislike this story because..." I mean, you don't even explain why, or what troupe. Honestly, if I had a dime for every single troupe of any kind, I'd be living rich for the rest of my life.

There's politely disagreeing with any personal critiques you might have, and then there's strait up saying a insult with no context that serves little to no purpose other than discouraging authors. They both achieve the goal of voicing your displeasure, but the end doesn't justify the means in this case.

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You know, the phrase “If you got nothing good to say, then don’t say it” comes into play here...

10810649 Thanks, and yeah I can see what you mean about using her name for her character. By now, I’ve come to think of the two as separate, but at the same time, I’ve been doing my best to be respectful for that very same reason. I’m probably not doing a very good job, but I desperately try not to cross a certain line. 👍

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Story-wise, you've done a great job. Can't say what it's like for Luren, but I pretty sure you've done good in that department.

10810986 Thanks I appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

Great atmosphere here! I didn't even realize it was a prequel to "Since When am I Faust" until halfway, but still liked it even before that point! Great work!

It's always a treat to see some Faust stories, and this one is truly a super enjoyable one! All on its own, it's a real dang solid work of literature and it's fantastic as a prologue for that certain other fanfic ya got! All of it is so dang good! Hope ya didn't mind, but I just HAD to make a reading of this motherly fic of yours!

Audio Linkyloo!: https://youtu.be/zBzzuYR-NxI

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

10811437 Thank you :twilightsmile:
I just listened to it, amazing work as always. 👍

I do like these Momma Alicorn Faust stories, hope there will be more. But if not...it was a fine read. -tips their hat to this writer-

I about shed some happy tears. This was beautiful

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