"And into her own reflection she stared,
Yearning for one whose reflection she shared.
And solemnly sweared not to be scared,
At the prospect of being doubly mared."
I was once a lonely human that was a huge fan of My Little Pony since I was a kid, back to Generation 1. One day, while spending the day at home, something strange happened and I woke up in the world of Equestria, as Surprise from Generation 1.
Will I be able to return home, or will I be forever trapped in this world with the most random and crazy of the Ponies in Equestria?
My name is Snowy Quartz Pie, and this is my story.
Cover Art belongs to Neonishe.
Pony Design belongs to Equestria-Prevails.
Snowy Quartz Pie belongs to me.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Lauren Faust, DHX Studios and Hasbro.
Enjoy. ^_^
Heheheh... "doubly merde."
Surprise has always been one of my favorites, too.
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How did they even know she came from the pool? That was never mentioned before they brought it up and Considering how welcoming applejack was when she first met twilight even though she didn't know her why would someone who doesn't look like pinkie ever be suspected of being a clone.
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She was a lookalike only difference is she is white and have wings but other then that a complete copy that is why
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Her hair and mane are different from pinkie plus she isn't even a earth pony. How does she look like pinkie?
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i seen a surprise pinkie picture on another story and she looks just like pinkie i think u think that she will look like a gen 1 character but she looks like a gen 4 character or that is what i think
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Considering she supposed to resemble the g1 version it says so right on the first page where the picture is. If she looked like pinkie in any way I be surprised.
Interesting concept. You don't see Surprise that often.
I think I read this story before and the biggest issue with the old one was that Snowy Quartz didn't get an opportunity to be her own pony.
Why didn't she like do something? Like speak up and say "Hey I'm not a pet goldfish! I'm my own pony with my own thoughts and feelings" Or if she was that uncomfortable, squirm a little bit.
It might improve the story a little bit if Snowy at least spoke up and tried to argue against being sent to the Mirror Pool. Even if it was awkward and clumsy; it still would be better than sitting there doing nothing.
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Plus I never got how they knew she was a clone when nothing about her said clone.
What's about her home, her family?
New Chapter?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Hmm my interest has been peaked I hope to see more
Is the new chapter coming soon?
Did you restart this story? And where are older covers?
Sitting in front of computer.
Plot twist: Ponk is clone
OK this is interesting 🤔
Is it going to continue?
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Eventually...